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A Choice is Made Chapter 20
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Tina: Oh please make it just one for us to share. If you put a whole one in front of me I’ll try to eat it all.
Bette: Thank you Jean, that is very generous of you. We’ll definitely take care of the servers, OK.
Jean: You are as classy as your big sister. Your father must have been so proud of you both.
Tina: Melvin was and I’m sure is still very proud of these two.
Jean: Kit text me with the address. I may not be able to stay long, but it will be nice to get away from here for a bit. Hopefully I’ll see you later baby.
Kit: I’ll do that sweetie. Good luck with everything here.
Jean: Thanks and thanks for the invitation. I hope to see you later.
Kit: OK bye baby.
Bette: Very smooth big sis, very smooth.
Kit: Did you think I had no game left, girl please. The girls all laugh.
Dawn arrives with the bread pudding on plate and a bowl of mango ice cream on the side. The girls just chuckle at his spoiling of them. Bette hopes this would be his way of taking care of Kit all the time; she knows her sister deserves that kind of treatment.
Kit: Alright, I’m going to the ladies room and will take care of the tip when I get back.
Tina: Actually, I need to go and take the baby so wait for us.
While they’re gone Bette waves over Dawn, thanks her and leaves a $40 tip. She tells Dawn to refuse any gesture from Kit. Dawn thanks Bette and agrees to the plan. As expected Kit tries to leave a tip and Dawn refuses, saying it had already been taken care of. Kit knew her sister who had slipped off to the ladies room now. She just smiled and appreciated the day they were having. They make their way back to the car with a now sleeping Angelica. Kit pushes the stroller while Bette and Tina stroll along hand in hand a few paces behind. They load up and make it back to the house in less than an hour. En route Tina sent a text to the girls asking them to arrive at 6pm rather than 5pm as they’d spent some extra time in Pasadena.
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Nice long update! Maybe some surprise visits by Tina to NY?? PPS
Very nicely done – the apprehension was palpable, but it didn’t ruin the last day. You also write Angelica perfectly – she is such an integral part of them coming together, and I love the attention you pay to the little Angelica details that contribute to B & T bonding. Example – teaching Angel to say the animal names – adorable. PPS!
Smiling from ear to ear. :) thanks
Amazing Update!!! Loving this story. Thank you PPS
I lob this story ( as Angie would say). Long distance relationships are hard to keep, but please make this one work. Great update.
You know what Lwsho…you can never write too many pages for me. Contrary to Ilene’s belief, there are lots of us that enjoy observing Bette and Tina in a happy, healthy relationship and don’t need a ton of drama to keep coming back. What she never learned was that the entertainment was Bette and Tina! Great update…the only way you can top that one is with another one.
I was a wonderful update and loved the long chapter. Loved Angie asking for her kises too when her mom’s were greeting each other. They have a lot of work to do but loved them wearing their rings again. The complete commitment is not far away. Thanks for posting.
That was amazing!
Awesome update! Thank you :)
hard hard hard hey. The family alrady lost Bette to New york are thy ready to lose Tina and Angel? No easy decision. Good luck making it for us lwsho2005 pmsl. Thank you for my weekly fix nooooo my 3 days fix lol PPVS
Ny, NY here they come. Enjoying this when I shoulda been writing-oops!! Nite.
Nice update! – lol at:”Angelica puckers up as if it’s her turn.”
Wonderful update. I waited all weekend and when you posted I had to go to work but so I had something to look forward to.