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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 10
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Once Dana was gone, Shane turned her attention to Alice.
"Alice, what the fuck is wrong with you!?! That was really shitty. Get the fuck over it, or take your shit somewhere else." Alice looked around the table and noticed that everyone was nodding their heads in agreement or giving her disapproving looks. She looked at Ryan who smiled awkwardly and shrugged his shoulders.
"Fine. Let’s go Ryan." She took his hand and practically drug him out of the house.
Dana was determined not to cry over the evenings events. She sped off down the road, breathing heavily, reliving all of the hurtful things that she and Alice had said to each other. "Fuck." She whispered and the tears began to fall.
Ryan pulled up to Alice’s apartment and parked the car. Neither of them made a move to get out, but neither seemed to have anything to say. The entire trip had been made in silence.
"Alice, what just happened?" Ryan finally spoke. Alice sighed and began to rub her temples.
"Ryan…look. I think you are a great guy, and you are fucking gorgeous…fuck. The thing is…"
"You love her, don’t you?" Ryan interrupted. Alice whipped her head around and stared at him shocked. Then a smile came to her lips.
"Fucking gorgeous and observant. Damn it. That makes me even sadder now." Ryan smiled and shrugged his shoulders.
"Al, I think you clued in everyone at the table tonight, with you little hissy fit. Remind me NEVER to get on your bad side. Jesus. That was scary." Alice punched him on the arm and they both laughed.
"So, I’m sorry about all this."
"Ehh. What can you do. How can anyone compete with…how did you put it? Dana fucking Fairbanks?" Alice put her head in her hands and groaned.
"Oh my God. I am such a bitch. I made suck an asshole out of myself. I am going to have to so some serious groveling for those bitches to forgive me. And Dana…Jesus. How do I keep fucking this up? And why the fuck am I unloading on you?" Ryan laughed at this.
"Well, it’s probably because I am fucking gorgeous and observant. Or is it the killer blue eyes and brunette hair, rippling muscles…oh hell. I am pitching myself to a lost cause. Sorry I forgot for a minute." Alice laughed and shook her head in agreement. "Seriously Alice, you should just talk to her. That is if she will even give you the time of day after ‘Bitch Fest."
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awwww what a great story, and great ending. i loved it from start to finish, im so glad it turned out this way. now i am really anxious to see how this shalice fic of yours turns out. please update soon! i can’t seem to get enough of your writing! :)
Okay…that was a beautiful ending to a beautiful story! So glad they got together in the end, as it is supposed to be. Hope you will be writing more Danish in the future. Your loyal fan! Oh and get well soon. Cheers!
that was great I love it
Oh and i forgot … that lil note about everyone dying.. that WASNT COOL lol haha
Fuck you B! You know you promised a post while I was still in Cali so don’t give me shit about being pushy…How is it possible that I posted before you huh? HUH? FUCKING ANSWER ME!!! Whatever bitch, loved the chapter I only have one complaint, who says “Can I kiss you?” I mean besides losers and bastards with amazing tactical mojo and an agenda? No one, and shame on you for putting that in this story, come on you’d have to be some kind of analytical mastermind to realize how amazingly effective that question is….That’s a knight in shining armor question, a big lezzie knight in pink shining armor question. It’s so hard to believe that this story is over but it’s good that there is another one to keep me sated. I’ll be looking forward to that memo about replacements for Poop, she’s really dropped the ball lately. I mean just because she’s shoving her tongue down some hot mama’s throat every night doesn’t mean that we should be on the back burner. So we’ll round up the applicants and hold an open interview process next week if you’re available. Also don’t think that you got that whole tall, black hair, blue eyes, rippling muscles hetero-fantasy past me ok…I don’t want to read about your dirty bisexual wet dreams lol. Great chapter babe I’ll be looking for the next on your shalice post it, post it, POST IT. The utterly irresistable, disgustingly talented, horribly sexy, amazingly great 1/3 (soon to be 1/2) of suzieshitinthecloset33 A.K.A Shitinthecloset33 (soon to be) suzieinthecloset33 OUT BITCHES!!!
Man that bitch CD sure does know how to leave a comment.
I’m not sure I’m fit to post a comment after the diatribe left by ClosetDana! Damn! At any rate … I loved the fic & I’m just slight bent the it’s over. You have to write another Danish fic … I can’t do Shalice … it’s just too weird for me. Great ending … more please!
… they lived happily ever after. and the only time they had to deal with cancer was while watching late night re-runs of “e.r.” on TBS. well done suzieb! looking forward to your shalice fic! hope the cold is better, i’m fighting one too and it sucks.
Great chapter babe, and the perfect end to the story! :-) I fell out of my chair laughing at the “Can I kiss you” line. NOT COOL! Ha ha. It actaully is amazing how effective that question is. ;-) You two BETTER not fucking replace me from shitinthecloset33! I’m just having a weird week and trying to get my head wrapped around some things! Yeah, that hetero-fantasy didnt get past me either. CD, I think it’s time for an intervention! Well babe, this story was awesome from start to finish, and although it is over, I know that I still have your Shalice fic to look forward to! And that puts a big dorky grin on my face! I guess since you and CD both updated, it’s my turn. Wow, I really have been dropping the ball lately. I blame it on my new “hot mama”, as CD put it! Well, this is the loser, bastard with amazing tactical mojo, big lezzie knight in shining armor 1/3 of shitinthecloset33 signing out. (thanks for the great description of me CD!) In other words, the “Shane” third of the trio! Enough said…. ;-) (btw, I LOVE YOU SUZE!!)
LMAO at your comments Suzie, and what an ending, I’m just disappointed it’s over, you need to write more danish, not should write, but NEED to! And thanks for the congrats, after ED left the show she has so much spare time on her hands and boy do those hands work their magic :P lol peace out xx
Thank you for an enjoyable story…Keep on writing!!!
Bravo!!!
great job, i really enjoyed your writing!!!!
Awesome job. Sweet ending. I really enjoyed this fic.
why u frikin amazin Suzs u! Despite the saddness obviously i have that uve ended this kick as story i gotta say awesome ending, FINALLY they hooked up with out any problems! U better… after your lil Shalice fling thing u got going on lol u gotta write another Danish! cuz u gotta and also cuz im ordering u too! lol again great job at rockin my glasses off! xoxo
That story was awesome, thanks. Kinda sad its over. Looking forward to Shalice (even tho im a huge Danish fan). Keep up the great work xx
Fantastic, but really sorry to hear it is the end. Looking forward to reading your next story.
Ok,one sec……. Doing a lil dance around the room…lol ok that was awsome!!!! Post soon,take your time if it will be like this chapter! Gr8 job!!!
All good things must come to an end. :D Funny that Alice’s male love interests always have the same features as Dana…a coincidence or not? And wohooo, a happy Danish ending!! I didn’t see that one coming. ;) Seriously, I’m glad Dana and Alice found their way to each other…in a perfect world it should always be like this. :D I have to catch up on that Shalice fic. :) And yes, I was probably at work when you posted it…I was up at 5.00 AM (!!!) that day to go to some place on the other side of the country. :( Anyways, looking forward to your next work. :D