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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 2
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Alice watched as Dana quickly made her way up the steps and into her room without even saying goodnight. She understood that Dana was probably hurting right now, but she didn’t want to make it worse by going to her. She couldn’t until she sorted through her own feelings and what effects they could have on her future. "Damn it." Alice cursed. She hated seeing Dana like that. This was going to be a long night. She slowly made her way upstairs and went into the bathroom to get ready for bed.
As she walked into the guest bedroom, a heavy sense of loneliness enveloped her. She turned to look at Dana’s closed door. She had to fight the urge to open it and go to Dana. She quickly shut the door to her room and got into bed. "Fuck." She said louder than she had meant to. ‘I hope Dana didn’t hear that.’ She thought. ‘Alright Alice, what are you going to do now? You just had to ask her didn’t you. You just had to go there…and now you’re fucked. Either way…you are royally fucked.’ She finished as she realized she was talking to herself. She laid there for a few more minutes, wondering how life became so complicated…"Fuck." She said again and then drifted off to sleep.
Alice woke up the next morning to an empty house. She didn’t know if she was sad or relieved that they didn’t get to have ‘the talk.’
"Now that’s fucked up." She said out loud.
She made her way downstairs to the kitchen, hoping to find some coffee or tea to wake her up. It was 8:00 and she had lots to do this weekend. She called Shane and asked if she could come and pick her up. She hung up the phone after her friend agreed and smiled as she saw a pot of coffee brewing on the counter. Then she saw a note on the counter by the fruit. She picked it up and read it several times, feeling more and more saddened each time she did. It read: Hey Al, sorry about last night. Too much to drink! I’ll make it up to you sometime. I made you some coffee and please have a piece of fruit. Lord knows it will be the only healthy thing you eat all weekend. ~Dana
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listen here suzieb, if you loved me, you’d put these two together!! AHHHHH it’s so annoying..poor girls though, both struggling so much. It was a great update, my heart went out to Dana, really. I could totally relate to that situation. I just love your writing and this story so I can’t help but leave you great compliments. I mean them all :) I can’t wait for you to update again…please dont keep me wait too long! You’re fabulous
Argh!!!!! How can you do this to us?!? Love the story tho, please post on this one again soon (and save our little Danish hearts)
DAMN YOU! Ha ha. Not really. You know I love you. Another great chapter from a great writer. Like Dawson said, I could really feel for Dana. And Alice. Pretty shitty situation our girls have gotten themselves into. But seriously, great chapter even though it wasnt the happiest! You know I love your fics any way I can get them. Now please get these two together soon! And Lara? Really? Please God, no!
I Avoid Danish fics…usually I was drawn by Shane’s name next to Hero and read both chapters and all I have to say is BRAVO, you’ve got me liking a Danish fic and that’s a pretty big accomplishment!
Another frustrated reviewer here…Lara ALWAYS has to show up and come between these two. Now it will take ages before them to get together! Ah well, I’m the one who is torturing myself…I do have the choice to not read this…but then again, a powerful force is making meto read your wonderful stories…angsty or not. :D And I just know they will end up together…some day. Hint…just make Lara dissapear by having her to take a cooking course in Paris or something. :P
Awww man! Come on! Alice and Dana! Not Lara! Why does she always have to pop up and ruin everything? Damn her!
I know you probably like Danish as much as I do so this chapter is just a little warm up to happier times right? haha, I love these girls together and you write them so well. Even if you through Lara in the mix I still believe that Alice and Dana will get their act together and there will be more happy stories in the future. Keep it up!!
Aaarrggghh. But at least you warned us. So, here’s hoping that Lara’s a one chapter obstacle ‘cuz this is too frustrating. I have but one request…please, no Ton Ton. Ever. I hate her and don’t even get to love hating her. Looking forward to the next chapter.
oh hell no not Lara – damn soup chef!!! what a fab update, yet again! you have to take the rough with the smooth and yeah, this was kinda angsty lol, but that means that good things are on the way right? well i hope so because i love this story! Alice… go get your woman! way to go suzieb, can’t wait for more, you have me hooked! :)
Lara needs to go home and find a girl of her own, Dana is taken! Like Alice said ‘step off bitch’ hehe. Great Chap loving this drama. Oh and I was thinking LA is the perfect place to move to with our wives, they can always fly to Canada when they need to and we could go with them hehe :)
You just had to add Lara into the mix didn’t you…how cruel. lol. please update soon and take me back to happy Danish Land!
Lara’s not the obstacle. Dana and Alice are the obstacles to their own happiness. It was nice to see Dana be the one who threw caution to the wind, but now the wall is back up. Great update. I can’t wait to see how our girls handle things.
Damn! You are seriously killing me with the suspense, but I still stand by my other comment. I love this story!(I mean I might like it just a bit more if they could get together like, right now:D)Anyways, please, please, PLEASE update as fast as possible!
Hey there! just caught up with the last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story… Ahhh what more could a girl want!! sigh. The intense Danish build up gets me everytime and you have sooo hit my spot with this one Suz!! Hmmm…lol. Loved drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?”, Oh yes! very direct Alice!! Mmm, I like it. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next? You are SUCH a tease!. Btw your dorkiness and personality that shines thru in your stories cracks me up so bad… and now you seem to be a poet!!LMAO! Post soon.Thanks.