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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 2
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"Fuck." Alice said after the fourth time reading through it. ‘Classic Dana’ she thought. She knew that it was going to be hard for them, no matter what they decided to do about their feelings in the end, but she wasn’t expecting this. And that’s what really bothered Alice. Because she should have seen this coming. She was realizing that she didn’t know her friend nearly as well as she thought she did, or herself for that matter.
Shane arrived at Dana’s around 8:30 and Alice was sitting outside on the front step as she pulled in the drive. She stood up and walked to the passenger side and hopped in.
"Take me far away." She said dramatically to her friend.
"Well good morning to you too." Shane smiled and started to pull out. "So where’s Dana this morning that she couldn’t give you a lift? And why are you even here for that matter?" Shane asked curiously.
"Can we not talk about Dana right now?" Alice asked with a pleading look in her eyes.
"Ummm…Al? What’s going on? Why is conversation involving Dana off limits?"
"Shane…that’s not talking about something else…" Alice whined. "I just don’t want to talk right now. Ok?" Alice asked a little defensively.
"Ok ok. Jeez Al. Sorry. What do you want to talk about then? Oooh I know! Now that you are officially the best kisser in WeHo, what are you going to do now? Run some charity events…maybe a kissing booth for the ‘Save the Little Blue Minnie’ foundation?" Shane laughed as Alice scrunched her face up and then glared at her.
"I don’t want to talk about that either, thank you very much." She stated.
"I gotta say babe, that kiss with Dana made our drunken adventures look like a Disney movie! I mean…I think I am gonna have to get Dana drunk and give it a shot myself…shit no…Carmen would kill me…but it looked fun…maybe on a dare or something…" Shane finished teasingly.
She looked at her friend as she drove toward her apartment and was startled at the look of anger that flashed across her face.
"Whoa…AL. What was that?" Shane asked hesitantly.
"What? Nothing Shane." Alice was upset that she had been caught. The thought of Shane kissing Dana made her stomach turn. The thought of anybody kissing Dana made her sick… ‘Is this how Dana feels?’ she wondered.
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listen here suzieb, if you loved me, you’d put these two together!! AHHHHH it’s so annoying..poor girls though, both struggling so much. It was a great update, my heart went out to Dana, really. I could totally relate to that situation. I just love your writing and this story so I can’t help but leave you great compliments. I mean them all :) I can’t wait for you to update again…please dont keep me wait too long! You’re fabulous
Argh!!!!! How can you do this to us?!? Love the story tho, please post on this one again soon (and save our little Danish hearts)
DAMN YOU! Ha ha. Not really. You know I love you. Another great chapter from a great writer. Like Dawson said, I could really feel for Dana. And Alice. Pretty shitty situation our girls have gotten themselves into. But seriously, great chapter even though it wasnt the happiest! You know I love your fics any way I can get them. Now please get these two together soon! And Lara? Really? Please God, no!
I Avoid Danish fics…usually I was drawn by Shane’s name next to Hero and read both chapters and all I have to say is BRAVO, you’ve got me liking a Danish fic and that’s a pretty big accomplishment!
Another frustrated reviewer here…Lara ALWAYS has to show up and come between these two. Now it will take ages before them to get together! Ah well, I’m the one who is torturing myself…I do have the choice to not read this…but then again, a powerful force is making meto read your wonderful stories…angsty or not. :D And I just know they will end up together…some day. Hint…just make Lara dissapear by having her to take a cooking course in Paris or something. :P
Awww man! Come on! Alice and Dana! Not Lara! Why does she always have to pop up and ruin everything? Damn her!
I know you probably like Danish as much as I do so this chapter is just a little warm up to happier times right? haha, I love these girls together and you write them so well. Even if you through Lara in the mix I still believe that Alice and Dana will get their act together and there will be more happy stories in the future. Keep it up!!
Aaarrggghh. But at least you warned us. So, here’s hoping that Lara’s a one chapter obstacle ‘cuz this is too frustrating. I have but one request…please, no Ton Ton. Ever. I hate her and don’t even get to love hating her. Looking forward to the next chapter.
oh hell no not Lara – damn soup chef!!! what a fab update, yet again! you have to take the rough with the smooth and yeah, this was kinda angsty lol, but that means that good things are on the way right? well i hope so because i love this story! Alice… go get your woman! way to go suzieb, can’t wait for more, you have me hooked! :)
Lara needs to go home and find a girl of her own, Dana is taken! Like Alice said ‘step off bitch’ hehe. Great Chap loving this drama. Oh and I was thinking LA is the perfect place to move to with our wives, they can always fly to Canada when they need to and we could go with them hehe :)
You just had to add Lara into the mix didn’t you…how cruel. lol. please update soon and take me back to happy Danish Land!
Lara’s not the obstacle. Dana and Alice are the obstacles to their own happiness. It was nice to see Dana be the one who threw caution to the wind, but now the wall is back up. Great update. I can’t wait to see how our girls handle things.
Damn! You are seriously killing me with the suspense, but I still stand by my other comment. I love this story!(I mean I might like it just a bit more if they could get together like, right now:D)Anyways, please, please, PLEASE update as fast as possible!
Hey there! just caught up with the last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story… Ahhh what more could a girl want!! sigh. The intense Danish build up gets me everytime and you have sooo hit my spot with this one Suz!! Hmmm…lol. Loved drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?”, Oh yes! very direct Alice!! Mmm, I like it. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next? You are SUCH a tease!. Btw your dorkiness and personality that shines thru in your stories cracks me up so bad… and now you seem to be a poet!!LMAO! Post soon.Thanks.