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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 4
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Alice watched her friend carefully as she said this. She couldn’t tell for sure, but she sensed that there was more to it then that. "Dana…thanks for taking care of me."
Dana turned back to face Alice once more. "Al, it was nothing." She said quietly.
"But it was. Thank you."
Dana nodded her head and smiled shyly at the writer. "Alice, I’m sorry that I haven’t been around much lately."
"I’ve really missed you Dana." Alice whispered.
"I’ve missed you too, Al."
"Dana I have been wanting to talk to you for awhile now…" Alice was interrupted by a harsh knock on her door. "Mother Fucker!" Alice exclaimed, running her hands through her hair in frustration. "I can’t catch a fucking break!" She rolled out of the bed, giving Dana an apologetic look and quickly through on a pair of shorts and a t-shirt. "I’ll be right back Dane…shit. Sorry." Alice added.
Dana laughed and shook her head. She got out of bed and put her cloths back on too. She thought that maybe after Alice took care of door, they could grab some coffee and lunch and maybe talk about their feelings.
Alice was swearing under her breath as the knock at her door became louder and more annoying. ‘Who the fuck could it be?’ Alice wondered.
She opened the door and nearly fainted at the sight before her.
"Hi Alice, you ready for that interview?" The woman leaned in and placed a wet kiss on Alice’s lips. "Why aren’t you dressed? You can’t go out like that! Go change and we can head out." Alice stared dumbly at the woman before her. "Alice! What the fuck is wrong with you? My lunch break is only an hour and a half! Do you want the inside scoop or not?" The woman barked.
"Gabby Fucking Devoux…" Dana said with menace in her voice. She had been watching the whole scene, including the kiss, and she was furious.
"Oh. It’s the tennis player." Gabby stated dryly. "Alice, sometime today?" She tapped her foot impatiently as Alice finally snapped out of her daze.
"Gabby? What are you doing here?" Alice snapped.
"Al, did you go out and get wasted last night? Is that why your are acting so fucking weird?" Gabby said with annoyance. "We planned on lunch today so you could finish your article on Vaginal Rejuvenation??? Ringing any bells??? I said you looked good? You said I looked good? We agreed to do lunch…I said goodbye, you shoved your tongue down my throat…are you still with me or what?"
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Ok, now I trust you when you say your a huge Danish fan so im going along with the heartbreak for now……. I know it will continue to be an awesome story. I love your writing, you get the characters really well. Keep up the good work and post again soon please xx
That was sad. I wonder what other torture we’ll have to endure before they come to their senses…
Oh, the angst. Well, after the angst usually comes one hell of a make-up! (hint,hint;) You never cease to amaze me, lol. I can’t wait to see what happens next, but hopefully it’ll be just a bit happier:) One can still wish, right? Loved it, and I hope there’s more on the way, SOON!
ok, i’m sad now. but, it’s ok, because i know this isn’t over. great update, looking forward to the next.
Damn…that had me in such tears. So, so sad. I feel so damn bad for Dana. It’s awful. I really truly hope this works out. come on girl, you can’t bring me down now! Please bring them together :) I love Dana and Alice too. You put so much emotion into this, i wonder if I could ever write like you. I don’t know…but please continue soon. I loveeeee it! You’re fantastic
Dammit. That actually made me tear up. I’m blaming it on the fact that I’m PMSing like a bitch, and my emotions are all whacked out. It’s horrible I’m invested in fictional characters so much! Tragic chapter, but excellent all the while. You write these two so fucking well together! IC needs to take notes from you! I hope these two work things out, and soon. Sad Danish makes me sad! By the way, sorry I haven’t kept up with our little deal. I’ll update tonight!
Noooooo, that hurt. But I have faith in you. I hope to see some Danish love soon. thanks for posting.
OMG that hurt, you have just gone and broken my heart and i am sat here with tears in my eyes. You always amaze me how well you write Danish and it makes your stories seem very real. Alice bein the one to break it up with Dana put an interesting new twist in it for me because i hated clingy Alice in the show. Kinda ok with the drama, cos love will find a way! right?. More, more, more…pleeeese. Thanks.
Damn Gabby Deveaux indeed! lol I have watched Season 1 so many times I can practically recite the words off-by-heart (not sure I should be admitting that in public – might make me sound a bit obsessive but oh well!) so yeah I got the Rejuvenation link lol, fab chapter as per usual, more tension and angst but it works well because I know you can’t keep them apart! Can’t wait for more, love it love it love it!
This was fabulous…so well written, that I found myself shaking my head at Alice saying NOOOOOO!!! lol Thanks!
complicated folk they r!! proceed plz!!
I didn’t know that fan fiction stories could get to me so much but this story of yours is amazing. Tears were rolling down my face (ahhh) but I wouldn’t miss it for the world. Believe me I still trust you but please make them happy really soon I don’t think my poor heart can take it! btw two chapters so fast “woehoe” Loved it!
LOL, see, even the writer is pissed with the direction this story is taking. :P I agree with Shane, these two are so fucking stupid, their stuborness is always in the way. I think if these two would be put on a desert island and they would be the only people around,they still find a way to mess things up. :) I hope Alice can overcome her fears and will be doing some re-thinking on the whole friendship-thing. I’ll hang in there…even if it will take ages to get them (back) together. :D Btw, in my last comment I forgot to mention that I loved the fact that Dana fell into her own joke. I was LMAO at that point! :D