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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 4
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Just then Alice felt Dana push past her and Gabby and headed down the hall toward the elevator.
"Dana wait!" Alice chased after her, with Gabby close behind.
"Alice, I have to get to practice, I am so late. Go ahead and do your ‘interview’ and we can catch up later." Dana turned and walked into the elevator before Alice could answer.
Gabby walked up close behind Alice and put her hands on her waste, making sure that Dana was watching.
"Take your fucking hands off of me Gabby!" Alice whirled around and pushed Gabby away from her. She took off for the stairs hoping to catch Dana at the bottom. She could here Gabby yelling at her but couldn’t care less at that point. She made it to the bottom of the stairs just as the elevator doors were opening.
There eyes met and both winced at the pain that they saw in them.
"Dana…"
"Alice, don’t. I can’t do this anymore. It’s too hard." Dana tore her gaze away and walked out the door.
Alice watched as Dana walked away from her…AGAIN! She was angry now. She ran up behind Dana and spun her around hard.
"Dana what the fuck!?! You can’t keep doing this!" Alice yelled.
"I can’t keep doing this??? What the fuck did I DO Alice? I tell you that I want you, and you turn me down. Then you get shit faced and practically force yourself on me, but I convince you to wait until we can talk about things, and then I find out that’s not possible, because you have a date with Gabby Fucking Devoux!" Dana screamed. She had started crying and was wiping the tears away angrily.
Alice just stared in shock at first, then she felt her anger take over as well.
"Dana, first of all, that night on the beach…give me a fucking break. That was some pretty HUGE news you dropped into my lap. I’m sorry if I didn’t have an answer RIGHT A FUCKING WAY! But when I finally get my feelings sorted out and come to you, you are on a date with Lara Fucking Perkins! Remember??? You with the whole blowing me off bit, I was drunk and all that bull shit? And maybe, if you hadn’t have avoided me all week long, I wouldn’t have felt the need to get so fucking bombed last night. I’m sorry for "Forcing" myself on you. I don’t remember it, but I am sure that it was hell for you!" Alice said with bitterness. "As for Gabby, I bumped into her yesterday and was hurting about how things were between us and mad at you for moving on so fast with Lara and not even bothering to talk to me. So she asked me out and I said yes. I kissed her to feel something, but congratulations to you, Dana. I didn’t. I felt worse. Does that make you feel better? Is that what you wanted to hear? That I have been miserable without you? Well I have. Are you happy?" Alice finished. She was so upset. The tears were flowing freely and she was shaking in anger and pain.
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Ok, now I trust you when you say your a huge Danish fan so im going along with the heartbreak for now……. I know it will continue to be an awesome story. I love your writing, you get the characters really well. Keep up the good work and post again soon please xx
That was sad. I wonder what other torture we’ll have to endure before they come to their senses…
Oh, the angst. Well, after the angst usually comes one hell of a make-up! (hint,hint;) You never cease to amaze me, lol. I can’t wait to see what happens next, but hopefully it’ll be just a bit happier:) One can still wish, right? Loved it, and I hope there’s more on the way, SOON!
ok, i’m sad now. but, it’s ok, because i know this isn’t over. great update, looking forward to the next.
Damn…that had me in such tears. So, so sad. I feel so damn bad for Dana. It’s awful. I really truly hope this works out. come on girl, you can’t bring me down now! Please bring them together :) I love Dana and Alice too. You put so much emotion into this, i wonder if I could ever write like you. I don’t know…but please continue soon. I loveeeee it! You’re fantastic
Dammit. That actually made me tear up. I’m blaming it on the fact that I’m PMSing like a bitch, and my emotions are all whacked out. It’s horrible I’m invested in fictional characters so much! Tragic chapter, but excellent all the while. You write these two so fucking well together! IC needs to take notes from you! I hope these two work things out, and soon. Sad Danish makes me sad! By the way, sorry I haven’t kept up with our little deal. I’ll update tonight!
Noooooo, that hurt. But I have faith in you. I hope to see some Danish love soon. thanks for posting.
OMG that hurt, you have just gone and broken my heart and i am sat here with tears in my eyes. You always amaze me how well you write Danish and it makes your stories seem very real. Alice bein the one to break it up with Dana put an interesting new twist in it for me because i hated clingy Alice in the show. Kinda ok with the drama, cos love will find a way! right?. More, more, more…pleeeese. Thanks.
Damn Gabby Deveaux indeed! lol I have watched Season 1 so many times I can practically recite the words off-by-heart (not sure I should be admitting that in public – might make me sound a bit obsessive but oh well!) so yeah I got the Rejuvenation link lol, fab chapter as per usual, more tension and angst but it works well because I know you can’t keep them apart! Can’t wait for more, love it love it love it!
This was fabulous…so well written, that I found myself shaking my head at Alice saying NOOOOOO!!! lol Thanks!
complicated folk they r!! proceed plz!!
I didn’t know that fan fiction stories could get to me so much but this story of yours is amazing. Tears were rolling down my face (ahhh) but I wouldn’t miss it for the world. Believe me I still trust you but please make them happy really soon I don’t think my poor heart can take it! btw two chapters so fast “woehoe” Loved it!
LOL, see, even the writer is pissed with the direction this story is taking. :P I agree with Shane, these two are so fucking stupid, their stuborness is always in the way. I think if these two would be put on a desert island and they would be the only people around,they still find a way to mess things up. :) I hope Alice can overcome her fears and will be doing some re-thinking on the whole friendship-thing. I’ll hang in there…even if it will take ages to get them (back) together. :D Btw, in my last comment I forgot to mention that I loved the fact that Dana fell into her own joke. I was LMAO at that point! :D