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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 5
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"Shit! I’m sorry I wasn’t paying any attention." Dana mumbled as she picked herself up off the ground and went to help the other woman up. "I am such a klutz some…Al???" Dana had her hand on a very panicked Alice Pieszecki. Dana pulled her off the ground and them let go of her immediately, giving them plenty of space.
"Yeah you are a klutz sometimes…Hi Dana."
Dana was at a loss for words. She felt the distinct urge to take off running in the opposite direction, but that wasn’t what adults did. She stood and watched as the blond looked her up and down, and then smiled sweetly at her. Dana’s heart began to flutter. ‘DO NOT GO THERE Fairbanks!’ she scolded.
"Al…what are you doing?" She looked on as the blond’s face flushed.
"Uhh…ok you caught me. I am actually exorcizing." Dana gave her a disbelieving look and the writer started laughing. "I know. Who would have ever believed it? No, I actually found this place along time ago…it’s kind of a more…secret trail…and there’s a really beautiful clearing a little farther down the path. I like to think and write there sometimes. Clear my head…all that shit."
Dana watched as Alice bowed her head and began to kick at a rock with her toe. ‘Is she nervous?’ As Dana watched her for a few more moments, she noticed something red on the writers arm. Without thinking, she just grabbed the blond’s hand and pulled her to her for a closer look.
"Dana, what the…?"
"You’re bleeding, Al." Dana interrupted. Dana tried to examine the wound but Alice was being difficult.
"What? I am? Oh shit. Let me see!" Dana gave her a stern look and Alice froze.
"Alice, just hold still for a minute and let me look at it." Dana fought to hide her smile as she heard the blond mumbling under her breath.
"I think you are gonna live, but we should probably get some peroxide on it and a bandage. The Planet shouldn’t be too far of a walk. Kit will have a first aid box." Dana started walking in the direction that Alice had just come when she realized that she wasn’t being followed. She turned to meet the confused eyes of her former best friend. "Well? Are you coming or would you rather stand there and bleed all over your secret trail?"
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As I don’t have the skill to write such good stories, the only thing I can do as a dedicated and loyal Danish fan (fic reader), is to comment on all these lovely Danish stories. :D I loved the fact the love for Alice was visible in Dana’s eyes. And Alice’s little dance – which was so adorable – made me think of the lyrics ‘Do a little dance/Make a little love/Get down tonight/Get down tonight’. Here, that’s something Alice and Dana could do…right (hint, hint)? :P I know, I know…let them first have that coffee and see if they are actually capable of talking to each other without resulting in one (or both) of them being hurt.
Now I’m hopeful again. “When the walls come crumbling down, when the walls come crumbling tumbling crumbling tumbling down…” John Mellancamp
great update. thank you for this. i’m looking forward to the next!
Suh-weet, you updated, and I friggin love this story! Sorry, excuse my geek language. What I meant to say was I fuckin love this story:) Anyways, thanks for the happier ending on this one, and I can’t wait for your next update, so please post soon! (Also, protective Dana rocks!)
Aww! this was a really nice chapter to read Suze..much, much lighter than the last one lol. The closeness that they still have when they meet up again is undeniable. So this will help them to find their way back to each other, right? Dana caring and protecting Alice, and Alice loving Danas touch shouts out.. LOVE to me [but maybe im just a hopeless romantic, sigh] Danish just bein together and havin coffee is a good start, and will do me for now!! Thank-you my friend! post soon and have a great week on your travels.
Firstly so sorry I didn’t comment on your other chapters. Truth of the matter is I lost this fic somehow and only stumbled on it again tonight. Needless to say it was an absolute delight to read it. You’re doing a fantastic job, and even though the Lara/Dana thing is still there, I have faith in you! You will restore Danish for us… right…
Ok..this was sooo much better. I couldn’t help but get teary eyed over the last chapter! It was soooo sad. This is what I’m talking about…the banter between these two..the love with every look, every touch. It’s so real. I can’t wait to see what happens with this “one cup” I’m pulling for a happy ending, but you already knew that. You know, I’ve been reading stories from this site for a year now and I never even thought about writing for it. I don’t know, guess I’d be too afraid I’d suck lol…I’ll think about it. Maybe I can come up with something and get back to you, see if your genius self agrees lol Update soon! :)
Great update my friend! The connection is absolutely there. They belong together, I love protective Dana a lot. And coffee sounds like a very good start for some alone time between the two. Looking forward to the next update when you can.
Loved it, I swear you get better with each post! And um I’m all packed up now with my wife to move to LA are you guys ok over there? lol :P -x-
Ok, im totally addicted to this story so keep up the excellent work and post again soon please!!!! I have total faith you will reunite Danish xx
Yet again, I’m late to the party. I truly love this, you’re able to convey the depths of their emotions through each action and gesture, intimate in their own form. Very descriptive and a good study in human’s reactions. Been people watching? lol. looking forward to that coffee date! Well Done!