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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 5
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Dana watched as Alice snapped out of the daze she had been in, biting her lip before she begrudgingly followed after the athlete. Dana had to turn away and continue walking. ‘Two minutes in her presence and I can feel myself being pulled back in.’ She sighed as she walked on.
The walk to The Planet was a silent one, which didn’t surprise Alice at all. Dana hadn’t spoken to her or tried to make contact since her to decision to remain friends. She had tried calling the athlete a few times, but Dana never returned them. She had heard from Shane that Dana had been seeing Lara the last few weeks. Alice tried to convince herself that she was happy for her friend, but the truth was, she was devastated. ‘What did you expect Alice? That you would tell her it’s never going to happen and then hope that she’d wait until you pulled your head out of your ass?’ Her elbow was starting to throb now. She tried to twist her arm around so she could get a better look but it was in one of those weird, blind spot areas. She growled in frustration and felt her cheeks begin to burn as she realized that Dana had caught her struggling. She shrugged her shoulders and put her head back down as they continued to walk in silence.
Ten minutes later, they were standing in front of The Planet and just as they were about to walk in, a burly man came bursting through the doors and practically ran Alice over. Dana was quicker that the writer and was able to avoid contact, but Alice was knocked to the ground. She felt the pain from her earlier run-in with Dana increase. She must have landed on the same elbow. It was really bleeding now. She fought back tears and felt strong hands pull her gently up. Then before she knew what was happening, she heard screaming and shouting right behind her. Alice forgot about the pain and the blood for a moment as she watched Dana practically tear the rude guy a new ass hole.
"You mother fucker! You can’t just come bursting out like that! Look what you did!!!" Dana screamed. Alice watched as the man was backed up to the door, looking like a little scared rabbit. He was looking everywhere but at the athlete and he was twice her size! Alice had never seen Dana react this way. She was afraid that Dana would start swinging any moment now so she lightly placed her hand on the brunettes shoulder, hoping that it would calm her.
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As I don’t have the skill to write such good stories, the only thing I can do as a dedicated and loyal Danish fan (fic reader), is to comment on all these lovely Danish stories. :D I loved the fact the love for Alice was visible in Dana’s eyes. And Alice’s little dance – which was so adorable – made me think of the lyrics ‘Do a little dance/Make a little love/Get down tonight/Get down tonight’. Here, that’s something Alice and Dana could do…right (hint, hint)? :P I know, I know…let them first have that coffee and see if they are actually capable of talking to each other without resulting in one (or both) of them being hurt.
Now I’m hopeful again. “When the walls come crumbling down, when the walls come crumbling tumbling crumbling tumbling down…” John Mellancamp
great update. thank you for this. i’m looking forward to the next!
Suh-weet, you updated, and I friggin love this story! Sorry, excuse my geek language. What I meant to say was I fuckin love this story:) Anyways, thanks for the happier ending on this one, and I can’t wait for your next update, so please post soon! (Also, protective Dana rocks!)
Aww! this was a really nice chapter to read Suze..much, much lighter than the last one lol. The closeness that they still have when they meet up again is undeniable. So this will help them to find their way back to each other, right? Dana caring and protecting Alice, and Alice loving Danas touch shouts out.. LOVE to me [but maybe im just a hopeless romantic, sigh] Danish just bein together and havin coffee is a good start, and will do me for now!! Thank-you my friend! post soon and have a great week on your travels.
Firstly so sorry I didn’t comment on your other chapters. Truth of the matter is I lost this fic somehow and only stumbled on it again tonight. Needless to say it was an absolute delight to read it. You’re doing a fantastic job, and even though the Lara/Dana thing is still there, I have faith in you! You will restore Danish for us… right…
Ok..this was sooo much better. I couldn’t help but get teary eyed over the last chapter! It was soooo sad. This is what I’m talking about…the banter between these two..the love with every look, every touch. It’s so real. I can’t wait to see what happens with this “one cup” I’m pulling for a happy ending, but you already knew that. You know, I’ve been reading stories from this site for a year now and I never even thought about writing for it. I don’t know, guess I’d be too afraid I’d suck lol…I’ll think about it. Maybe I can come up with something and get back to you, see if your genius self agrees lol Update soon! :)
Great update my friend! The connection is absolutely there. They belong together, I love protective Dana a lot. And coffee sounds like a very good start for some alone time between the two. Looking forward to the next update when you can.
Loved it, I swear you get better with each post! And um I’m all packed up now with my wife to move to LA are you guys ok over there? lol :P -x-
Ok, im totally addicted to this story so keep up the excellent work and post again soon please!!!! I have total faith you will reunite Danish xx
Yet again, I’m late to the party. I truly love this, you’re able to convey the depths of their emotions through each action and gesture, intimate in their own form. Very descriptive and a good study in human’s reactions. Been people watching? lol. looking forward to that coffee date! Well Done!