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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 5
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Dana turned to look at her for a moment and Alice lost her breath. She saw love and protectiveness in her eyes. She suddenly felt light headed, and not from the loss of blood. Dana tore her gaze away and brought her attention back to the man who was still practically pinned to the door.
"Say you’re sorry, ass hole." Dana seethed.
"Sss…sss…sorry miss." Alice watched as Dana finally stepped back and gave the man a death stare as he walked quickly away.
"Ass hole." she mumbled. "Come on. Let’s look at that arm." Alice felt Dana take her hand and gingerly pull her through the crowd of people. She was yelling at people to move and look out as they made there way to Kit’s office. Alice was completely dumbfounded by this whole situation. Not to say she wasn’t enjoying it. She felt her stomach do flip flops when Dana took her hand, but that didn’t make this whole incident any less confusing.
"Kit!" Dana shouted.
"Oh hi girls. So good to see you both. Together. What can I do for…OH MY GOD! Alice, what happened?" Kit rushed to her side to get a better look and her injury. "Dana, the first aid kit is in my office. Grab it and take her to the bathroom to get cleaned up."
Alice felt like someone watching a T.V. show. Kit and Dana were talking to each other like Alice wasn’t even there. It was a strange feeling to say the least. Her only reality check was that she was still holding Dana’s hand. And the little comment from Kit about them being together was not lost on her ears. ‘I wonder what Dana’s thinking.’ She felt herself being led once again by the strong athlete and a few minutes later, they were standing in the bathroom.
"Ok. Let’s take a look." Dana said. She reached out and carefully turned her arm over. "Shit Al. That ass hole made it worse." Alice tried to hide the wince as Dana began to wipe the blood away with a wet towel.
"Shit. Did I hurt you?" Alice shook her head no. She didn’t trust her voice. Dana was being so kind and it was killing her. She missed her so much but knew it wasn’t her place to say so. It wouldn’t be fair to the athlete. Dana stared at her for a moment, but then went back to cleaning up her arm. Alice sat quietly as she felt Dana run water over her cut and felt soft fingers prodding around the wound to see how deep it was. She had missed her touch and closed her eyes as those gentle fingers massaged her sore elbow.
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As I don’t have the skill to write such good stories, the only thing I can do as a dedicated and loyal Danish fan (fic reader), is to comment on all these lovely Danish stories. :D I loved the fact the love for Alice was visible in Dana’s eyes. And Alice’s little dance – which was so adorable – made me think of the lyrics ‘Do a little dance/Make a little love/Get down tonight/Get down tonight’. Here, that’s something Alice and Dana could do…right (hint, hint)? :P I know, I know…let them first have that coffee and see if they are actually capable of talking to each other without resulting in one (or both) of them being hurt.
Now I’m hopeful again. “When the walls come crumbling down, when the walls come crumbling tumbling crumbling tumbling down…” John Mellancamp
great update. thank you for this. i’m looking forward to the next!
Suh-weet, you updated, and I friggin love this story! Sorry, excuse my geek language. What I meant to say was I fuckin love this story:) Anyways, thanks for the happier ending on this one, and I can’t wait for your next update, so please post soon! (Also, protective Dana rocks!)
Aww! this was a really nice chapter to read Suze..much, much lighter than the last one lol. The closeness that they still have when they meet up again is undeniable. So this will help them to find their way back to each other, right? Dana caring and protecting Alice, and Alice loving Danas touch shouts out.. LOVE to me [but maybe im just a hopeless romantic, sigh] Danish just bein together and havin coffee is a good start, and will do me for now!! Thank-you my friend! post soon and have a great week on your travels.
Firstly so sorry I didn’t comment on your other chapters. Truth of the matter is I lost this fic somehow and only stumbled on it again tonight. Needless to say it was an absolute delight to read it. You’re doing a fantastic job, and even though the Lara/Dana thing is still there, I have faith in you! You will restore Danish for us… right…
Ok..this was sooo much better. I couldn’t help but get teary eyed over the last chapter! It was soooo sad. This is what I’m talking about…the banter between these two..the love with every look, every touch. It’s so real. I can’t wait to see what happens with this “one cup” I’m pulling for a happy ending, but you already knew that. You know, I’ve been reading stories from this site for a year now and I never even thought about writing for it. I don’t know, guess I’d be too afraid I’d suck lol…I’ll think about it. Maybe I can come up with something and get back to you, see if your genius self agrees lol Update soon! :)
Great update my friend! The connection is absolutely there. They belong together, I love protective Dana a lot. And coffee sounds like a very good start for some alone time between the two. Looking forward to the next update when you can.
Loved it, I swear you get better with each post! And um I’m all packed up now with my wife to move to LA are you guys ok over there? lol :P -x-
Ok, im totally addicted to this story so keep up the excellent work and post again soon please!!!! I have total faith you will reunite Danish xx
Yet again, I’m late to the party. I truly love this, you’re able to convey the depths of their emotions through each action and gesture, intimate in their own form. Very descriptive and a good study in human’s reactions. Been people watching? lol. looking forward to that coffee date! Well Done!