Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 5
Login to add story to favorites
(14 votes, average: 4.43 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
"Yeah you won’t need stitches, but it’s gonna be sore for a few days…" Dana put a bandage on her elbow and then began cleaning up the mess they had made.
"Thanks." Alice barely recognized her own voice. The tears that she had fought so hard to keep at bay began spilling over.
"Oh Al. Does it hurt? I am so sorry. I feel so bad. This is all my fault." Alice felt herself being pulled into a hug and cried even harder. She buried her head into the crook of Dana’s shoulder and held on tight. She wasn’t sure when she would be allowed to hold her friend like this again, so she planned on savoring it. "Shhh. It’s Okay Al." the beauty whispered.
Alice finally pulled back. Dana wiped a few tears away and gave her a goofy grin. Alice couldn’t resist laughing at this. "Damn you Fairbanks! How am I supposed to function with a gash in my arm? Huh?" Dana smiled at her.
"Well, I guess you’ll just have to live with being gimpy for awhile." Alice burst out laughing and heard her friend joining her.
"Seriously though Dane, thanks for doing this. You didn’t have too…" Alice felt her chin being lifted and met those beautiful blue eyes once again.
"Al, of course I did, silly. I was the one who railroaded you in the first place. I couldn’t leave you to bleed to death!"
"Oh right. Cause that’s what it was coming to. I mean, maybe I should think about a transfusion for all the blood I’ve lost." Dana was nodding her head in agreement.
"Oh! That’s so true! We can’t be to careful you know. I will see if I can rig up a tube and a couple of needles. We can do it like the movies where someone’s life is on the line and they only have a few items to work with!" Dana was fighting her grin.
Alice felt normal for the first time in a month. The teasing and the banter, she had missed it dearly. She couldn’t help it when she reached out and pulled a surprised Dana into her arms for another hug. They stayed that way for a moment and then Alice stepped back again.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
As I don’t have the skill to write such good stories, the only thing I can do as a dedicated and loyal Danish fan (fic reader), is to comment on all these lovely Danish stories. :D I loved the fact the love for Alice was visible in Dana’s eyes. And Alice’s little dance – which was so adorable – made me think of the lyrics ‘Do a little dance/Make a little love/Get down tonight/Get down tonight’. Here, that’s something Alice and Dana could do…right (hint, hint)? :P I know, I know…let them first have that coffee and see if they are actually capable of talking to each other without resulting in one (or both) of them being hurt.
Now I’m hopeful again. “When the walls come crumbling down, when the walls come crumbling tumbling crumbling tumbling down…” John Mellancamp
great update. thank you for this. i’m looking forward to the next!
Suh-weet, you updated, and I friggin love this story! Sorry, excuse my geek language. What I meant to say was I fuckin love this story:) Anyways, thanks for the happier ending on this one, and I can’t wait for your next update, so please post soon! (Also, protective Dana rocks!)
Aww! this was a really nice chapter to read Suze..much, much lighter than the last one lol. The closeness that they still have when they meet up again is undeniable. So this will help them to find their way back to each other, right? Dana caring and protecting Alice, and Alice loving Danas touch shouts out.. LOVE to me [but maybe im just a hopeless romantic, sigh] Danish just bein together and havin coffee is a good start, and will do me for now!! Thank-you my friend! post soon and have a great week on your travels.
Firstly so sorry I didn’t comment on your other chapters. Truth of the matter is I lost this fic somehow and only stumbled on it again tonight. Needless to say it was an absolute delight to read it. You’re doing a fantastic job, and even though the Lara/Dana thing is still there, I have faith in you! You will restore Danish for us… right…
Ok..this was sooo much better. I couldn’t help but get teary eyed over the last chapter! It was soooo sad. This is what I’m talking about…the banter between these two..the love with every look, every touch. It’s so real. I can’t wait to see what happens with this “one cup” I’m pulling for a happy ending, but you already knew that. You know, I’ve been reading stories from this site for a year now and I never even thought about writing for it. I don’t know, guess I’d be too afraid I’d suck lol…I’ll think about it. Maybe I can come up with something and get back to you, see if your genius self agrees lol Update soon! :)
Great update my friend! The connection is absolutely there. They belong together, I love protective Dana a lot. And coffee sounds like a very good start for some alone time between the two. Looking forward to the next update when you can.
Loved it, I swear you get better with each post! And um I’m all packed up now with my wife to move to LA are you guys ok over there? lol :P -x-
Ok, im totally addicted to this story so keep up the excellent work and post again soon please!!!! I have total faith you will reunite Danish xx
Yet again, I’m late to the party. I truly love this, you’re able to convey the depths of their emotions through each action and gesture, intimate in their own form. Very descriptive and a good study in human’s reactions. Been people watching? lol. looking forward to that coffee date! Well Done!