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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 7
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Alice took her silence as an invitation to strike and made her move. She was shocked as she felt Dana grab her wrists and pull her in for a tight hug, Alice froze for a moment but quickly came to her senses. She wrapped her arms around Dana’s neck and pulled her in closer.
Both women sighed into the hug, leaning heavily on one another.
Dana finally pulled back to whisper into the writers ear. “Thank you.”
Alice shivered and swallowed hard. She was trying to concentrate on speaking, but it was finding it difficult with Dana’s breasts pushing up into her. Their nipples were rubbing together and Alice had to bite back a moan that was threatening to escape. She pushed Dana away from her, needing to the space so she could talk.
“Thank you for what, Dana?”
“For today…for coming,” Dana looked down shyly.
“Dane, I’m sorry I wasn’t there until the end. I forgot my fucking pass thingy. I raced back here as fast as I could and luckily, got to see the end.”
“I know. I thought you weren’t coming…when I saw you…I felt better.” Dana whispered.
Alice’s mind was racing. ‘What the fuck does that mean?’ she wondered.
“Dana…”
“Seriously Alice, I was playing like shit. You yelled at me…made me laugh…made me want to do my best…thank you. I looked for you after the game. Where’d you go?” Dana was staring deeply into her eyes. Alice felt like she was looking at her soul.
“Lara.” Alice didn’t need to say any more. Dana knew what she had meant.
“Dana, why were you playing like shit?”
Dana was slightly thrown off by the question. “Huh? What does that have to do with anything?”
“You said you were playing like shit. I want to know why. From what I heard, you weren’t yourself out there. Why?”
“Because…I don’t know Al. Jesus. I was just having a bad game I guess. I don’t know.”
“You don’t know? ” Alice challenged, closing the distance she had put between them earlier.
Dana watched as Alice slowly inched her way back to her. There was half a foot between them now.
“Why?” Alice repeated.
“Because.” Dana said softly.
“Because why?” Alice asked again, stepping closer. They were now just a breath apart.
“Because…you weren’t there Al. I…I needed you there. I need…”
“Dana…I miss you…” Alice pushed Dana up against the wall of the pool. There were only millimeters separating their mouths. Alice felt Dana shiver as she blew on her inviting lips.
She leaned in to taste her friend as the door to the pool area swung open.
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“Hey have you guys seen my purse? I can’t find it anywhere.” Jenny had not seen the two practically kill themselves trying to get some distance between them. She had her back to them as she searched the tables they had occupied. “I am sure I left it out here…Aha! Here it is.” Jenny finally turned to face them and suddenly, she couldn’t help feeling like she had interrupted something. “Well, I got it so…I’m gonna go. Oh Dana, Lara is doing fine. She is sleeping like a baby. I will get her back to you as soon as she wakes up tomorrow.” Jenny smiled as Dana nodded and thanked her. She quickly left, wondering what she might have just walked in on.
“We should get you to bed.” Alice said swimming towards the steps out of the pool.
Dana watched as the water slid off of Alice’s body and gulped. Alice toweled off and smirked as she caught Dana blatantly checking her out. Dana blushed and got out of the pool quickly grabbing her towel and the rest of her stuff. She followed Alice to her room in silence.
‘This is gonna be one long night.’ she though to herself.
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Ah – such torture to stop right there… It’s going to be a long night and a long wait until the next update. Great Update!
hell yeah its gonna be a long night.
awesome. definitely looking forward to what the night may bring. thanks for posting!
Right so I don’t remember if I’ve actually commented yet but if I haven’t let me tell you that you’re rocking the shit with this story. Great job I love the comic spin you put on this story, can wait to see some Danish lovin’…there better be Danish lovin! Yes that is a threat and I do back them up lol.
Where have you been – missed you so much. What an ending to the chapter, you have left us on a cliffhanger yet again – please, please post soon – don’t leave it so long as I get withdrawal symptons, and it’s not nice!!!
I would like to have been at that tennis match…or in that pool for that matter! Only to witness such a tension between these two would make me melt. I sometimes really wonder why I could be all content after reading a Danish fic…when you (and all Danish writers in general) proceed to let nothing actually happen between the two of them.You’re such a teaser! :P Ah well, I just live for the moments that all seems to be right for Danish. :D LOL @ Dana’s reaction to Alice swaying her hips. And as for the night…they can’t deny their feelings for each other after all that has happened this evening. Luckily Lara is in a deep coma…and she will hopefully stay for it in a while. *evil grin*
My dear, dear friend. I thought that I had lost you forever! Words cannot express how HAPPY I am that you are back. When I saw you updated, I almost had a heart attack. You need to warn a girl next time before you take a break and then just randomly post. I need to prepare myself! Ha ha. But seriously, fucking awesome chapter! The tension between Danish literally gave me goosebumps. I was so hoping that they would go at it in the pool! Ha ha. They still have to get through the night together though, and I’m hoping beyond hope that there’s a little Danish lovin in the next chapter. Or are you going to make me sad and continue to keep our girls apart for a little while longer? :-( That whole tennis thing cracked me the hell up. You’re brilliant babe! Well, I just chugged two cups of coffee, and I’m on a little bit of a coffee buzz, so I’ll stop rambling. I fucking love you too, and keep up the good work! :-P
ahhhhh how evil to stop right there! lol fantastic job Suz i never lost hope that youd soon post again and what a post it was! Leave it to Jenny to ruin the danish moment! :P I cant wait to see those 2 find their way back to each other tho i hope in the next chap which i know will be posted soon! right right? lol but yeah i know its gonna be a long night for those 2 which is great :) again awesome chap I hope you dont loose yourself again because your doing a bang up job!
Oh no! Suzie the stress you put me through leaving it there…I just reread it and it’s amazing how these girls act. Cannot wait for this night that’s coming up, more interruptions perhaps…Well at least they are in the same room let’s just hope they lock it! Great update as ever and looking forward to the next one.
I’m glad that your inspiration finally came back to you.Really glad, in fact. That suspense was really starting to kill me. Flippin awsome update! Damn Jenny for ruining the pool moment though. Please update soon because I’m really looking forward to what’s going to happen during that long night!
Damn awsome chapter, although the teasing was a little mean! Ha I so thought they were going to go for it in the pool, damn my thoughts! Hope you update soon, it was great.
very nice. love all the tension and teasing.
Argh, bloody Jenny!!!!! Fan-friggin-tastic chapter. Please dont leave it so long to post again, i cant take the suspense. Great writing as always xx
Glad to see you’ve found your muse…your take on Danish, especially when it’s just the two of them, is so sweet. Now, if they can only get past their mutual fear and on with the lovin’! Please post soon.
ahhhh and i can’t wiat to see what happens!!!
I don’t know how it’s even possible that I haven’t commented on this story yet … but I am seriously loving it. You’re doing an excellent job & I can’t wait for more.