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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 7
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“Yeah…sorry. You’re right. I am just nervous. So everybody’s here…that’s good…Did Jenny end up coming?” Lara was confused by the question.
“…Yes…Jenny is here Dana. She’s shopping….Anything else?”
“Ummm…what about Bette and…and Alice…did they make it?” Lara watched as Dana put her head down when she mentioned the blond.
“Dana…what’s this about? Yes they are here. I believe they are swimming. Are you sure you’re ok?” Lara had been noticing that Dana always had a strange reaction to the mention of the writers name or presence, but never questioned it. She asked Dana when they had first started dating, what her relationship was with the blond. Dana had told her that they had been friends for
years but had recently had a bit of a falling out. She didn’t give any more detail and Lara hadn’t asked about it again. There was definitely more to the story though. She felt bad for her girlfriend. It seemed to really bother Dana that she and Alice had a strained relationship. She would talk to her about it later. Right now, Dana needed to get her head in the game.
“Yes. I’m fine Lara. I should really get out there and start warming up.” Lara nodded at the athlete and pulled her in for a tight hug.
“Go kick some ass Dana.” Dana nodded and exited the locker room.
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“Ok ladies, I think we go this way. That guy at the back door should let us in with our passes. Everyone has there pass right?” Carmen asked excitedly.
“Yes.” “Got it.” “Oh shit!”
Everyone turned to look at Alice. She was digging through her purse and throwing things all over the place. “Fuck!” At this point she knelt down to the ground and dumped the entire contents of her purse onto the sidewalk. You have got to be fucking kidding me!” She screamed.
Shane walked over and knelt down beside her to help in the search. The others stood back and exchanged worried glances. The match was going to start in 20 minutes. There was no time to go back to the hotel, and everyone…including Alice knew it.
“I don’t see it, Al…” Shane said hesitantly.
“…Fuck fuck fuck…fucking mother fucker…” Alice began to throw everything back into her purse, all while still swearing like a sailor. Finally, when she had jammed everything back in. She stood up and looked at everyone. “Well, I’m out guys.” She put her head back and bit her lip to hold back the tears…this whole trip was a mistake. She knew Dana would be hurt if she wasn’t there, but there didn’t seem to be anything she could do. She sighed in frustration and began to walk away.
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Ah – such torture to stop right there… It’s going to be a long night and a long wait until the next update. Great Update!
hell yeah its gonna be a long night.
awesome. definitely looking forward to what the night may bring. thanks for posting!
Right so I don’t remember if I’ve actually commented yet but if I haven’t let me tell you that you’re rocking the shit with this story. Great job I love the comic spin you put on this story, can wait to see some Danish lovin’…there better be Danish lovin! Yes that is a threat and I do back them up lol.
Where have you been – missed you so much. What an ending to the chapter, you have left us on a cliffhanger yet again – please, please post soon – don’t leave it so long as I get withdrawal symptons, and it’s not nice!!!
I would like to have been at that tennis match…or in that pool for that matter! Only to witness such a tension between these two would make me melt. I sometimes really wonder why I could be all content after reading a Danish fic…when you (and all Danish writers in general) proceed to let nothing actually happen between the two of them.You’re such a teaser! :P Ah well, I just live for the moments that all seems to be right for Danish. :D LOL @ Dana’s reaction to Alice swaying her hips. And as for the night…they can’t deny their feelings for each other after all that has happened this evening. Luckily Lara is in a deep coma…and she will hopefully stay for it in a while. *evil grin*
My dear, dear friend. I thought that I had lost you forever! Words cannot express how HAPPY I am that you are back. When I saw you updated, I almost had a heart attack. You need to warn a girl next time before you take a break and then just randomly post. I need to prepare myself! Ha ha. But seriously, fucking awesome chapter! The tension between Danish literally gave me goosebumps. I was so hoping that they would go at it in the pool! Ha ha. They still have to get through the night together though, and I’m hoping beyond hope that there’s a little Danish lovin in the next chapter. Or are you going to make me sad and continue to keep our girls apart for a little while longer? :-( That whole tennis thing cracked me the hell up. You’re brilliant babe! Well, I just chugged two cups of coffee, and I’m on a little bit of a coffee buzz, so I’ll stop rambling. I fucking love you too, and keep up the good work! :-P
ahhhhh how evil to stop right there! lol fantastic job Suz i never lost hope that youd soon post again and what a post it was! Leave it to Jenny to ruin the danish moment! :P I cant wait to see those 2 find their way back to each other tho i hope in the next chap which i know will be posted soon! right right? lol but yeah i know its gonna be a long night for those 2 which is great :) again awesome chap I hope you dont loose yourself again because your doing a bang up job!
Oh no! Suzie the stress you put me through leaving it there…I just reread it and it’s amazing how these girls act. Cannot wait for this night that’s coming up, more interruptions perhaps…Well at least they are in the same room let’s just hope they lock it! Great update as ever and looking forward to the next one.
I’m glad that your inspiration finally came back to you.Really glad, in fact. That suspense was really starting to kill me. Flippin awsome update! Damn Jenny for ruining the pool moment though. Please update soon because I’m really looking forward to what’s going to happen during that long night!
Damn awsome chapter, although the teasing was a little mean! Ha I so thought they were going to go for it in the pool, damn my thoughts! Hope you update soon, it was great.
very nice. love all the tension and teasing.
Argh, bloody Jenny!!!!! Fan-friggin-tastic chapter. Please dont leave it so long to post again, i cant take the suspense. Great writing as always xx
Glad to see you’ve found your muse…your take on Danish, especially when it’s just the two of them, is so sweet. Now, if they can only get past their mutual fear and on with the lovin’! Please post soon.
ahhhh and i can’t wiat to see what happens!!!
I don’t know how it’s even possible that I haven’t commented on this story yet … but I am seriously loving it. You’re doing an excellent job & I can’t wait for more.