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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 7
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“Al, hold on one second. Here.” Bette walked over and handed Alice the keys to the car they had rented. “Go! You can still make it back for some of the game. Hurry!” Alice just stood there for a moment considering whether or not it was possible to make it back.
“GO! For fuck’s sake Alice!” Bette and Shane were both pushing her.
“Ok. Ok. I’ll be back as soon as I can.” Alice took off toward the parking area, determined to make it back in time.
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The match was going well, but Dana seemed to be a little off. It was as if her heart wasn’t in it. The announcers were commenting on the lack of enthusiasm that Dana normally had heaps of.
Dana was serving and looked to the special seats. She saw all the smiling faces of her friends…all except for one. She tried to shake the feelings that stirred when she thought of the writers absence. She tossed the ball high and served it over the net. Her opponent returned it with ease and Dana watched the ball sail by her, half heartedly swinging at it.
“Fuck…get you head in the game Fairbanks!” She scolded herself.
She only needed to win this set and she would take the match. She bounced the ball a few times on the court and felt the crowd grow silent. Just then, she heard a familiar voice shouting at her from the stands.
“Suck it up Fairbanks! Jesus Christ! Finish her already!” Dana’s head snapped up in time to catch the eye of the now smirking Alice Pieszecki. All of there friends began to laugh and Dana found herself laughing too. Actually, she realized that most of the crowd was laughing at the comment. She met the writers eyes and held her gaze for a moment. A soft smile playing at each of there lips. She flipped the writer off and the crowd erupted in laughter once again. Alice gave her a little salute and nodded at her. Dana nodded back, feeling lighter and more confident than she had all day. She looked back to her opponent who was less then thrilled with the whole display and tossed the ball up high. She served the ball with all her might and smiled as the crowd erupted into cheers. “Ace!” the announcer shouted! Everyone watched as Dana finished the game with another crushing serve. The commentators were marveling in the attitude change. “This is the Dana Fairbanks we are used to seeing.” The crowd seemed to agree with them. They were all standing and applauding. Dana shook her competitors hand and then began to jump with excitement. As she made her way towards her friends who were all rushing toward the court, her eyes fell on Alice. The world seemed to fade away as their eyes met and they made their way to each other. The look they shared was so intense. They were both smiling and Dana, for her part was holding her breath in anticipation. Suddenly, she felt two arms snake around her from behind and she was jolted back to reality.
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Ah – such torture to stop right there… It’s going to be a long night and a long wait until the next update. Great Update!
hell yeah its gonna be a long night.
awesome. definitely looking forward to what the night may bring. thanks for posting!
Right so I don’t remember if I’ve actually commented yet but if I haven’t let me tell you that you’re rocking the shit with this story. Great job I love the comic spin you put on this story, can wait to see some Danish lovin’…there better be Danish lovin! Yes that is a threat and I do back them up lol.
Where have you been – missed you so much. What an ending to the chapter, you have left us on a cliffhanger yet again – please, please post soon – don’t leave it so long as I get withdrawal symptons, and it’s not nice!!!
I would like to have been at that tennis match…or in that pool for that matter! Only to witness such a tension between these two would make me melt. I sometimes really wonder why I could be all content after reading a Danish fic…when you (and all Danish writers in general) proceed to let nothing actually happen between the two of them.You’re such a teaser! :P Ah well, I just live for the moments that all seems to be right for Danish. :D LOL @ Dana’s reaction to Alice swaying her hips. And as for the night…they can’t deny their feelings for each other after all that has happened this evening. Luckily Lara is in a deep coma…and she will hopefully stay for it in a while. *evil grin*
My dear, dear friend. I thought that I had lost you forever! Words cannot express how HAPPY I am that you are back. When I saw you updated, I almost had a heart attack. You need to warn a girl next time before you take a break and then just randomly post. I need to prepare myself! Ha ha. But seriously, fucking awesome chapter! The tension between Danish literally gave me goosebumps. I was so hoping that they would go at it in the pool! Ha ha. They still have to get through the night together though, and I’m hoping beyond hope that there’s a little Danish lovin in the next chapter. Or are you going to make me sad and continue to keep our girls apart for a little while longer? :-( That whole tennis thing cracked me the hell up. You’re brilliant babe! Well, I just chugged two cups of coffee, and I’m on a little bit of a coffee buzz, so I’ll stop rambling. I fucking love you too, and keep up the good work! :-P
ahhhhh how evil to stop right there! lol fantastic job Suz i never lost hope that youd soon post again and what a post it was! Leave it to Jenny to ruin the danish moment! :P I cant wait to see those 2 find their way back to each other tho i hope in the next chap which i know will be posted soon! right right? lol but yeah i know its gonna be a long night for those 2 which is great :) again awesome chap I hope you dont loose yourself again because your doing a bang up job!
Oh no! Suzie the stress you put me through leaving it there…I just reread it and it’s amazing how these girls act. Cannot wait for this night that’s coming up, more interruptions perhaps…Well at least they are in the same room let’s just hope they lock it! Great update as ever and looking forward to the next one.
I’m glad that your inspiration finally came back to you.Really glad, in fact. That suspense was really starting to kill me. Flippin awsome update! Damn Jenny for ruining the pool moment though. Please update soon because I’m really looking forward to what’s going to happen during that long night!
Damn awsome chapter, although the teasing was a little mean! Ha I so thought they were going to go for it in the pool, damn my thoughts! Hope you update soon, it was great.
very nice. love all the tension and teasing.
Argh, bloody Jenny!!!!! Fan-friggin-tastic chapter. Please dont leave it so long to post again, i cant take the suspense. Great writing as always xx
Glad to see you’ve found your muse…your take on Danish, especially when it’s just the two of them, is so sweet. Now, if they can only get past their mutual fear and on with the lovin’! Please post soon.
ahhhh and i can’t wiat to see what happens!!!
I don’t know how it’s even possible that I haven’t commented on this story yet … but I am seriously loving it. You’re doing an excellent job & I can’t wait for more.