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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 7
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Dana sighed. She might as well enjoy herself. “Ok. Thanks Tee.”
“No problem sweetie.”
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Everyone was sitting around the pool. They laughed and joked, enjoying each others company when Bette finally decided she’d had enough fun for one day.
“Alright ladies, I am officially spent. Good night. Tina? You coming?” Bette asked innocently.
“Hell yeah. See you guys!” Tina began to leave with Bette when she remembered something.
“Oh Shit!” Everyone turned to look at her waiting for her to go on. “Dane, I’m sorry about this, but Lara ended up in Alice and Jenny’s room. She was so sick and that was the closest room. She walked in and just passed out right away. I couldn’t get her to move for me.”
“Alice, why don’t you just bunk with Dana and I’ll just keep and eye on Lara.” Jenny watched as panic crossed everyone’s faces and put her hands up in surrender. “Whoa, guys. We can figure something else out. It was just a suggestion.”
“Dana, why don’t you just switch with Jenny and Alice?” Bette asked.
“Shit…I can’t. All of my stuff is in my room and I have to be up early to do an interview. They are coming to the hotel to do it. I invited them to my suite so I kinda have to be there…shit.”
Dana watched as Alice stared a hole into the concrete next to the pool. She was playing with the bottom of her shirt and biting her lip. All signs that Alice was nervous. ‘We are both adults, we can handle this.’ Dana told herself.
“Alice, would you be ok with that?” Dana asked shyly.
“Huh?” the writer’s head snapped up, finally looking at her friend.
“Would it be a big deal if you crashed with me?”
“Oh! Umm…sure. If you don’t mind.” Alice said quietly.
“It’s not a problem.” They looked at one another, each silently wondering if this was the best thing that had ever happened to them, or the biggest mistake of their lives.
“Well that’s all settled then. Good night ladies.” Bette and Tina waved to everyone and headed for their rooms.
“I think I am gonna head to bed too.” Jenny said with a yawn. “Good night girls. Great job today Dana.” Dana smiled and gave Jenny a warm hug.
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Ah – such torture to stop right there… It’s going to be a long night and a long wait until the next update. Great Update!
hell yeah its gonna be a long night.
awesome. definitely looking forward to what the night may bring. thanks for posting!
Right so I don’t remember if I’ve actually commented yet but if I haven’t let me tell you that you’re rocking the shit with this story. Great job I love the comic spin you put on this story, can wait to see some Danish lovin’…there better be Danish lovin! Yes that is a threat and I do back them up lol.
Where have you been – missed you so much. What an ending to the chapter, you have left us on a cliffhanger yet again – please, please post soon – don’t leave it so long as I get withdrawal symptons, and it’s not nice!!!
I would like to have been at that tennis match…or in that pool for that matter! Only to witness such a tension between these two would make me melt. I sometimes really wonder why I could be all content after reading a Danish fic…when you (and all Danish writers in general) proceed to let nothing actually happen between the two of them.You’re such a teaser! :P Ah well, I just live for the moments that all seems to be right for Danish. :D LOL @ Dana’s reaction to Alice swaying her hips. And as for the night…they can’t deny their feelings for each other after all that has happened this evening. Luckily Lara is in a deep coma…and she will hopefully stay for it in a while. *evil grin*
My dear, dear friend. I thought that I had lost you forever! Words cannot express how HAPPY I am that you are back. When I saw you updated, I almost had a heart attack. You need to warn a girl next time before you take a break and then just randomly post. I need to prepare myself! Ha ha. But seriously, fucking awesome chapter! The tension between Danish literally gave me goosebumps. I was so hoping that they would go at it in the pool! Ha ha. They still have to get through the night together though, and I’m hoping beyond hope that there’s a little Danish lovin in the next chapter. Or are you going to make me sad and continue to keep our girls apart for a little while longer? :-( That whole tennis thing cracked me the hell up. You’re brilliant babe! Well, I just chugged two cups of coffee, and I’m on a little bit of a coffee buzz, so I’ll stop rambling. I fucking love you too, and keep up the good work! :-P
ahhhhh how evil to stop right there! lol fantastic job Suz i never lost hope that youd soon post again and what a post it was! Leave it to Jenny to ruin the danish moment! :P I cant wait to see those 2 find their way back to each other tho i hope in the next chap which i know will be posted soon! right right? lol but yeah i know its gonna be a long night for those 2 which is great :) again awesome chap I hope you dont loose yourself again because your doing a bang up job!
Oh no! Suzie the stress you put me through leaving it there…I just reread it and it’s amazing how these girls act. Cannot wait for this night that’s coming up, more interruptions perhaps…Well at least they are in the same room let’s just hope they lock it! Great update as ever and looking forward to the next one.
I’m glad that your inspiration finally came back to you.Really glad, in fact. That suspense was really starting to kill me. Flippin awsome update! Damn Jenny for ruining the pool moment though. Please update soon because I’m really looking forward to what’s going to happen during that long night!
Damn awsome chapter, although the teasing was a little mean! Ha I so thought they were going to go for it in the pool, damn my thoughts! Hope you update soon, it was great.
very nice. love all the tension and teasing.
Argh, bloody Jenny!!!!! Fan-friggin-tastic chapter. Please dont leave it so long to post again, i cant take the suspense. Great writing as always xx
Glad to see you’ve found your muse…your take on Danish, especially when it’s just the two of them, is so sweet. Now, if they can only get past their mutual fear and on with the lovin’! Please post soon.
ahhhh and i can’t wiat to see what happens!!!
I don’t know how it’s even possible that I haven’t commented on this story yet … but I am seriously loving it. You’re doing an excellent job & I can’t wait for more.