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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 7
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“Thank you Jenny.”
Dana was about to excuse herself too, when she felt someone push her backwards and then she was surrounded by water. She came up for air sputtering and cursing and was met by the laughter of Shane.
“You bitch!” She shouted. She jumped up out of the water and grabbed Shane, pulling her in with her. She began to dunk her and splash her mercilessly.
“Ok! Ok! I give up!” Shane shouted. Dana dunked her one more time for good measure before she started swimming laps.
Alice and Carmen got in the pool too and they all teamed up on Dana, who wasn’t paying any attention to them at the moment.
“Get her!” Carmen shouted as they all lunged for the unsuspecting athlete.
Dana felt herself get pulled under the water and then was brought back up by several pairs of hands. They all began splashing and chasing each other, but usually, Dana got tag teamed.
“No fair guys! You can’t all come after me!” Dana whined as they headed her way.
“Dana, you are a professional athlete. It’s only a fair fight if we team up!” Shane laughed.
“That’s bull shit and you know it!”
Alice lunged towards her but Dana saw her coming. She stepped to the side and pushed her under with her hand. Alice came up for air gasping and coughing.
“Not cool Fairbanks. Now you’re really gonna get it!”
Alice began tickling Dana while Shane and Carmen held her arms.
“Hey! This is so not fucking fair!” Dana laughed. Alice finally relented and the girls all laughed and caught their breath.
“Ok team. I am out and I am taking sexy with me.” Carmen smirked. Shane smiled brightly and let Carmen lead her out of the water.
“Later guys. See you tomorrow.” Shane waved and then it was just the two of them.
“So…”
“So…” Alice laughed nervously. “Sorry for the tag team.”
Dana smiled and waved her off.
“Nah. It’s cool. It really was the only way you guys would’ve had a chance…”
“Hey! You better watch out missy! I could tickle you to death if I wanted to and you wouldn’t be able to stop me!” Dana watched Alice’s eyes get darker. They always did when she was challenging someone. Dana was always up for a challenge, but she wanted to talk to the writer first.
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Ah – such torture to stop right there… It’s going to be a long night and a long wait until the next update. Great Update!
hell yeah its gonna be a long night.
awesome. definitely looking forward to what the night may bring. thanks for posting!
Right so I don’t remember if I’ve actually commented yet but if I haven’t let me tell you that you’re rocking the shit with this story. Great job I love the comic spin you put on this story, can wait to see some Danish lovin’…there better be Danish lovin! Yes that is a threat and I do back them up lol.
Where have you been – missed you so much. What an ending to the chapter, you have left us on a cliffhanger yet again – please, please post soon – don’t leave it so long as I get withdrawal symptons, and it’s not nice!!!
I would like to have been at that tennis match…or in that pool for that matter! Only to witness such a tension between these two would make me melt. I sometimes really wonder why I could be all content after reading a Danish fic…when you (and all Danish writers in general) proceed to let nothing actually happen between the two of them.You’re such a teaser! :P Ah well, I just live for the moments that all seems to be right for Danish. :D LOL @ Dana’s reaction to Alice swaying her hips. And as for the night…they can’t deny their feelings for each other after all that has happened this evening. Luckily Lara is in a deep coma…and she will hopefully stay for it in a while. *evil grin*
My dear, dear friend. I thought that I had lost you forever! Words cannot express how HAPPY I am that you are back. When I saw you updated, I almost had a heart attack. You need to warn a girl next time before you take a break and then just randomly post. I need to prepare myself! Ha ha. But seriously, fucking awesome chapter! The tension between Danish literally gave me goosebumps. I was so hoping that they would go at it in the pool! Ha ha. They still have to get through the night together though, and I’m hoping beyond hope that there’s a little Danish lovin in the next chapter. Or are you going to make me sad and continue to keep our girls apart for a little while longer? :-( That whole tennis thing cracked me the hell up. You’re brilliant babe! Well, I just chugged two cups of coffee, and I’m on a little bit of a coffee buzz, so I’ll stop rambling. I fucking love you too, and keep up the good work! :-P
ahhhhh how evil to stop right there! lol fantastic job Suz i never lost hope that youd soon post again and what a post it was! Leave it to Jenny to ruin the danish moment! :P I cant wait to see those 2 find their way back to each other tho i hope in the next chap which i know will be posted soon! right right? lol but yeah i know its gonna be a long night for those 2 which is great :) again awesome chap I hope you dont loose yourself again because your doing a bang up job!
Oh no! Suzie the stress you put me through leaving it there…I just reread it and it’s amazing how these girls act. Cannot wait for this night that’s coming up, more interruptions perhaps…Well at least they are in the same room let’s just hope they lock it! Great update as ever and looking forward to the next one.
I’m glad that your inspiration finally came back to you.Really glad, in fact. That suspense was really starting to kill me. Flippin awsome update! Damn Jenny for ruining the pool moment though. Please update soon because I’m really looking forward to what’s going to happen during that long night!
Damn awsome chapter, although the teasing was a little mean! Ha I so thought they were going to go for it in the pool, damn my thoughts! Hope you update soon, it was great.
very nice. love all the tension and teasing.
Argh, bloody Jenny!!!!! Fan-friggin-tastic chapter. Please dont leave it so long to post again, i cant take the suspense. Great writing as always xx
Glad to see you’ve found your muse…your take on Danish, especially when it’s just the two of them, is so sweet. Now, if they can only get past their mutual fear and on with the lovin’! Please post soon.
ahhhh and i can’t wiat to see what happens!!!
I don’t know how it’s even possible that I haven’t commented on this story yet … but I am seriously loving it. You’re doing an excellent job & I can’t wait for more.