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A drawing lesson
Story written on July 6, 2011 by kins40.
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Subtle and understated, a mark of elegance and timely discretion. A well behaved smell which whispers seductively to her lover when she gets back home.
A perfume like nothing else. A woman’s perfume, with the scent of a woman. ***
When the artist came back to her senses, she was left with a slight sense of intoxication, the imaginary perfume having overtaken her senses momentarily.
Reality though soon nudged her back into the real world, when she became aware of movements around her.
The students were leaving.
The class had come to an end. She lifted her head from her drawing to see the sitter disappear as suddenly as she had appeared.
Her heart sank.
It was over and it was all too soon.
She took a look at the drawing on her easel. Those perfect shoulders, delicate neckline and lustrous skin were now staring back at her in the perfect lines and shadings of graphite.
She sat there for what seemed an eternity. She did not want to move, the spell would be broken otherwise and she was not ready for that just yet.
"May I?" came the voice over her shoulder.
The blonde startled nearly knocking her easel over.
"Oh my goodness you scared me….." she said turning around, her right hand clutching her chest.
"Please forgive me, I did not mean to….I was just surprised to see anyone here, the students usually leave quite quickly."
The artist was very conscious of the fact that she was staring. There in front of her was the exquisite woman who a few minutes ago had her completely enthralled when she stood up on that stage.
"So….. Do you think, I could take a look?" the model reiterated hesitantly and briefly pointing her finger at the easel.
"Oh…sure…I’m not very…good….but please..certainly," the blonde stumbled on her words. She stepped back from the front of the easel to allow the model to get closer.
The brunette studied the refined drawing for a few very long minutes.
The artist’s touch was remarkable and the draughtsmanship amazing.
She admired the beautiful line quality which seems to wrap itself around the forms of the figure, her figure.
The drawing possessed an almost sculptural effect and the features of the woman’s upper body had almost three-dimensional quality.
The brunette was deeply touched by the care and attention the young woman beside her had applied to her piece. A next to perfect rendition of her. The attention to details was mesmerising and made the sitter’s heartbeat up cadence.
"This is simply marvellous, where did you learn to draw like this?" the brunette asked.
"Well, I haven’t been taught per se…… I like drawing so I thought I would join a class…and here I am!" the blonde said with a nervous laugh.
"What’s your name?" the brunette asked.
"Tina"
"Well, Tina….welcome to the Porter School of Art, my name is Bette, Bette Porter" the brunette smiled.
The End
*** Coco Chanel
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hahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! coco chanel you said it all.And Bette Porter greeted Tina Kennard. What happened next??? we can imagine, can’t we? Thank you.
another amazing storykins, please keep them coming x
omg you could easily make this a multi-chapter story you are an amazing writer i really love reading your stuff. i’m adding you to my fave authors list right now! lol
Kins you and your imagination are spectacularly AWESOME. Loved this story. You do know what you are doing to us, right? You give us three pages blood pressure raising description of a beautiful, seductive, doe-eyed woman, then you introduce them leaving us wanting more and so bereft that we will not have another chapter of this wonderful encounter. What a wonderful introduction to a great love story. I guess I will have to make up my owm story. It was fantastic. Thanks for sharing.
Wow..great start from one of my favorite writers! You already have me hooked!
A lovely story, beautifully written.
You never disappoint Kins. I always get so drawn into your stories; they are so visual. You’re an amazing talent and so versatile which makes it even better because we never know what to expect with every new post. Thank you for sharing another wonderful B&T moment.
HMMMMM… As usual lately I’m left to my own imagination. But can I just say wow… She owns the art school; awesome. Bette will be Tina’s muse. Yes the countdown has begun. So much to do so little time. C x
If English is not your first language, what is? Romance? Again, that was a great story.
AWESOME, LOVE IT
Wow…I’m always in awe of your story. I know it’s a cliche…but it’s… Awesome!!!
What a wonderfully written story. Just birlliantly amazing. Thank you.
Excellent.Thank you.PPS
C’est magnifique! Hands, lips, neck and shoulders…the suspense is killing me. What’s next?I shall leave now on Cloud 9 to work on your next top 2. I trust it is no longer crowded and there’s plenty of room for creativity?
that was really marvelous!very descriptive, I like ur writing, and can’t wait to read more of ur work, thank u ;D
Beauuuuuuuutiful, mon bichon!!!!! Wow, wow, and wow again!! Sorry for getting to this marvelous reading that late, but as you know, me and my bed had a very late (or early) reunion, and it took me a while to start this new day… Anyway, I really have to say: you literally do magic with your words!!! Your writing is absolutely amazing! What a wonderful tribute to the English language! I loved it all, especially when it came to BP’s perfect anatomy, but I must point out the part about the perfume. I don’t think anyone could have talked about perfume in a better way! Wow… So well described, and so vivid! I’m pretty sure your words will come to my mind the next time I put on perfume or even hug a friend hello. That was perfect! And I loved the end and the fact that Bette was posing as a model in her own school… Brilliant! Again… Love the way you use those words of yours! Thanks a lot for this chapter, and chapeau bas to my favorite partner!!! B&H, Kw
OMG Kins! You always do know how to captured me in your writing!! And I always feel so disappointed when see the end of the story as i can’t believe it’s no more…!! excuse me but really too short!! Or maybe I just simply too greedy :-p lol can’t blame me for knowing how to appreciate good stuff eh!? :-D ha3 ok2 stop counting as I knew at least there’ll be another 2 stories in relation to the list ;-) I assume the upper part of face, neck and shoulders is one entity. ^^, he3…
What an amazing introduction to what will no doubt be a great lovestory. I love your one-offs, but I really wish they were all two-offs or three-offs or…
Your words are captivating,just brilliant