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A drawing lesson
Story written on July 6, 2011 by kins40.
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The brunette was in all evidence a natural athlete. Keen to achieve a lean frame with possibly regular long distance running, she probably maintained toned muscle definition with a routine of small weight lifting and regular swimming sessions.
In the blonde’s eyes, swimmers’ bodies were amongst the most sculpted of the athletic world; extremely muscled and toned without being bulky.
A woman’s shoulders are soft and curved but the woman in front of her had markedly broader and stronger shoulders than commonly expected. It made her, however, equally attractive and graceful.
Her shoulders were underlined with prominent collar bones, protruding gently below the skin. They joined at the base of the neck, stopping short of touching to create a little receptacle in the centre of her throat.
The artist took an appreciative look at her work so far. She had captured the model perfectly. She let her finger run along the lines she had drawn. Careful to only brush lightly so as to not disturb the graphite deposit on the paper.
For a second, she was alone with the splendid woman and her fingers were delineating the features she had drawn.
The skin was soft, warm and deliciously luxurious under her fingertips. She traced the whole length of the collar bones, finally reaching the little hollow at the base of the neck to caress the skin in small circles.
The blonde sighed, as she resumed her work. She was incredibly moved by the splendour on display in front of her. Never before in her life had she felt so fascinated by a single individual as she felt right now.
Her focus returned to the partially completed sketch in front of her. Her eyes travelled upwards from the shoulders to the beautiful column of her neck.
An almost statuesque neck, strong and elegant, a beautiful arc, acting as the perfect pedestal to her head
The blonde’s hands, now, moved effortlessly along the paper, tracing, shading, blending. They had a mind of their own, inspired by the exquisite model. They knew the path to follow. They were in sync with the artist’s eyes.
The hands worked and the mind wandered again.
Her lips have now replaced the actions of her fingers.
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hahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! coco chanel you said it all.And Bette Porter greeted Tina Kennard. What happened next??? we can imagine, can’t we? Thank you.
another amazing storykins, please keep them coming x
omg you could easily make this a multi-chapter story you are an amazing writer i really love reading your stuff. i’m adding you to my fave authors list right now! lol
Kins you and your imagination are spectacularly AWESOME. Loved this story. You do know what you are doing to us, right? You give us three pages blood pressure raising description of a beautiful, seductive, doe-eyed woman, then you introduce them leaving us wanting more and so bereft that we will not have another chapter of this wonderful encounter. What a wonderful introduction to a great love story. I guess I will have to make up my owm story. It was fantastic. Thanks for sharing.
Wow..great start from one of my favorite writers! You already have me hooked!
A lovely story, beautifully written.
You never disappoint Kins. I always get so drawn into your stories; they are so visual. You’re an amazing talent and so versatile which makes it even better because we never know what to expect with every new post. Thank you for sharing another wonderful B&T moment.
HMMMMM… As usual lately I’m left to my own imagination. But can I just say wow… She owns the art school; awesome. Bette will be Tina’s muse. Yes the countdown has begun. So much to do so little time. C x
If English is not your first language, what is? Romance? Again, that was a great story.
AWESOME, LOVE IT
Wow…I’m always in awe of your story. I know it’s a cliche…but it’s… Awesome!!!
What a wonderfully written story. Just birlliantly amazing. Thank you.
Excellent.Thank you.PPS
C’est magnifique! Hands, lips, neck and shoulders…the suspense is killing me. What’s next?I shall leave now on Cloud 9 to work on your next top 2. I trust it is no longer crowded and there’s plenty of room for creativity?
that was really marvelous!very descriptive, I like ur writing, and can’t wait to read more of ur work, thank u ;D
Beauuuuuuuutiful, mon bichon!!!!! Wow, wow, and wow again!! Sorry for getting to this marvelous reading that late, but as you know, me and my bed had a very late (or early) reunion, and it took me a while to start this new day… Anyway, I really have to say: you literally do magic with your words!!! Your writing is absolutely amazing! What a wonderful tribute to the English language! I loved it all, especially when it came to BP’s perfect anatomy, but I must point out the part about the perfume. I don’t think anyone could have talked about perfume in a better way! Wow… So well described, and so vivid! I’m pretty sure your words will come to my mind the next time I put on perfume or even hug a friend hello. That was perfect! And I loved the end and the fact that Bette was posing as a model in her own school… Brilliant! Again… Love the way you use those words of yours! Thanks a lot for this chapter, and chapeau bas to my favorite partner!!! B&H, Kw
OMG Kins! You always do know how to captured me in your writing!! And I always feel so disappointed when see the end of the story as i can’t believe it’s no more…!! excuse me but really too short!! Or maybe I just simply too greedy :-p lol can’t blame me for knowing how to appreciate good stuff eh!? :-D ha3 ok2 stop counting as I knew at least there’ll be another 2 stories in relation to the list ;-) I assume the upper part of face, neck and shoulders is one entity. ^^, he3…
What an amazing introduction to what will no doubt be a great lovestory. I love your one-offs, but I really wish they were all two-offs or three-offs or…
Your words are captivating,just brilliant