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A drawing lesson
Story written on July 6, 2011 by kins40.
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She is kissing her long, slender neck. Her lips brush along its length, depositing slow and tender kisses along the way. Her movements are unhurried, the experience is one of both taste and smell.
Her perfume.
The scene is so clear in the blonde’s mind, making the imaginary scent of her skin almost as vivid.
The brunette reaches for the small eye pleasing glass bottle on the shelf.
The exquisite, expensive and delicate glass vessel with square faceted corners which contains the amber coloured fragrant Eau de Parfum.
She pulls delicately on the bevel cut stopper to reveal the atomiser nozzle. She places her index finger on the top of it, secure in the fact that the tiny dispenser is facing the right way and she presses down on it twice consecutively.
A hazy vaporisation of fragrance is instantly dispersed towards her awaiting skin. The tiny droplets temporarily suspended in the atmosphere are propelled towards her neck and will soon enter in contact with the warmth of her being.
The scent reaches her nose immediately. She smiles at the familiar appeal of the fragrance. The top note, the most volatile, the first impression of the fragrance, the one which makes you feel instantly feminine.
It will fade all too quickly though but the fragrance will then reveal its heart and It will linger potently for a while longer.
It is this very part which will engrained itself in the walls of a room, the upholstery of a car or the scarf borrowed only for one day. It will stay around, the constant reminder of her presence in the world.
But ultimately the true experience of the fragrance will lie in the bottom note. The one which will forever be referred to as the scent of her skin.
It is faint but yet noticeable and mixes with her natural smell. A scent that stays so very close that only someone hugging her will be able to detect.
There lies the intimacy factor of the fragrance. A clear dichotomy between something theoretically so public, applied for others to enjoy but yet eventually somehow only delivered to those who lean closer to discover it.
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hahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! coco chanel you said it all.And Bette Porter greeted Tina Kennard. What happened next??? we can imagine, can’t we? Thank you.
another amazing storykins, please keep them coming x
omg you could easily make this a multi-chapter story you are an amazing writer i really love reading your stuff. i’m adding you to my fave authors list right now! lol
Kins you and your imagination are spectacularly AWESOME. Loved this story. You do know what you are doing to us, right? You give us three pages blood pressure raising description of a beautiful, seductive, doe-eyed woman, then you introduce them leaving us wanting more and so bereft that we will not have another chapter of this wonderful encounter. What a wonderful introduction to a great love story. I guess I will have to make up my owm story. It was fantastic. Thanks for sharing.
Wow..great start from one of my favorite writers! You already have me hooked!
A lovely story, beautifully written.
You never disappoint Kins. I always get so drawn into your stories; they are so visual. You’re an amazing talent and so versatile which makes it even better because we never know what to expect with every new post. Thank you for sharing another wonderful B&T moment.
HMMMMM… As usual lately I’m left to my own imagination. But can I just say wow… She owns the art school; awesome. Bette will be Tina’s muse. Yes the countdown has begun. So much to do so little time. C x
If English is not your first language, what is? Romance? Again, that was a great story.
AWESOME, LOVE IT
Wow…I’m always in awe of your story. I know it’s a cliche…but it’s… Awesome!!!
What a wonderfully written story. Just birlliantly amazing. Thank you.
Excellent.Thank you.PPS
C’est magnifique! Hands, lips, neck and shoulders…the suspense is killing me. What’s next?I shall leave now on Cloud 9 to work on your next top 2. I trust it is no longer crowded and there’s plenty of room for creativity?
that was really marvelous!very descriptive, I like ur writing, and can’t wait to read more of ur work, thank u ;D
Beauuuuuuuutiful, mon bichon!!!!! Wow, wow, and wow again!! Sorry for getting to this marvelous reading that late, but as you know, me and my bed had a very late (or early) reunion, and it took me a while to start this new day… Anyway, I really have to say: you literally do magic with your words!!! Your writing is absolutely amazing! What a wonderful tribute to the English language! I loved it all, especially when it came to BP’s perfect anatomy, but I must point out the part about the perfume. I don’t think anyone could have talked about perfume in a better way! Wow… So well described, and so vivid! I’m pretty sure your words will come to my mind the next time I put on perfume or even hug a friend hello. That was perfect! And I loved the end and the fact that Bette was posing as a model in her own school… Brilliant! Again… Love the way you use those words of yours! Thanks a lot for this chapter, and chapeau bas to my favorite partner!!! B&H, Kw
OMG Kins! You always do know how to captured me in your writing!! And I always feel so disappointed when see the end of the story as i can’t believe it’s no more…!! excuse me but really too short!! Or maybe I just simply too greedy :-p lol can’t blame me for knowing how to appreciate good stuff eh!? :-D ha3 ok2 stop counting as I knew at least there’ll be another 2 stories in relation to the list ;-) I assume the upper part of face, neck and shoulders is one entity. ^^, he3…
What an amazing introduction to what will no doubt be a great lovestory. I love your one-offs, but I really wish they were all two-offs or three-offs or…
Your words are captivating,just brilliant