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A Night in the D — Chapter 22
Tina smiled. “You think I’d bring a beautiful woman here and then stare at guys? I was wondering if I should kick his ass for flirting with you.”
It was Bette’s turn to smile. And she poured it on, leaning across the small table and saying softly to Tina, “I can assure you that you do not have to fight for my attention.”
“Don’t do boys?” Tina asked, trying to look amused, trying to ignore the heated look Bette was giving her.
“I don’t actually. Do you?”
“Not lately.”
Tina thought she saw Bette bristle as she sat back in her chair. She looked the way Tina felt-unnerved.
“My timing is impeccable I guess.” Cool Bette prevailed.
But Tina didn’t feel much like banter. Maybe after the martini, she thought to herself. “I do date both men and women if that’s what you were asking.” She offered the information unswervingly but Bette’s face stood still.
“I wasn’t asking.”
“Not interested?”
“In that? Not really.”
Tina nodded slowly and crossed her hands in front of her. “Ok, you don’t want to know about me. What are we gonna do at a bar? Hangman?”
Bette’s mouth twisted into a smile. “I was trying to seduce you in your chair but you ignored it.”
“I didn’t ignore it. I was still pouting over the boy.”
“I’m not bisexual, Tina. You are.”
“More sexual than bisexual, actually.”
A look of surprise preceded Bette’s genuine laughter. “I have no idea what to say to that.” She allowed her eyes to sparkle at Tina. “But you must think that boy’s cute to feel so threatened by him.”
“I don’t think he’s cute. I hate him.”
They both laughed now. “I do want to know about you by the way.” Bette’s voice softened. “If I don’t want the details of past liaisons, forgive me. You get to hate our server, I get to be irritated by the mention of previous boyfriends.”
“Not girlfriends?”
“Not so much. That encourages me.” She winked.
Tina laughed. “I’m not sure that other women are any precedent. I don’t think I’ve ever felt towards anyone what I felt towards you last night.”
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(60 votes, average: 3.37 out of 5)
So glad to see you back…this story was most definitely missed!!
Hey hey! I had thought maybe you chose to quit this story. Sorry about all the crap that’s happened the past few weeks. :( When you sent Tina to the bathroom I thought she might run away through the window or stay for a couple of chapters to sit and think.
Ahhhhh..you stopped before they got to the bathroom?! I missed this story – post soon please you’ve got me on the edge of my seat here!
It’s a very good point. You must find someone have something threatening first, then you could feel threatened. Is that what they say ‘love your enemy’? I’m so happy to see your new update. I hope you’re doing well now.
hey girl: i glad youre back,the story was missed badly.please again soon thank you
Sorry about all the fun-squelching turmoil you’ve had to trudge your way through to get back here…I’ve really missed this story. The excellence of your writing is still blowing me away. Please keep the winds howling!
Oh, I’m so glad you’re back and so so glad you’re okay. And, yes, this was well worth waiting for.
I’m so happy you posted, I was looking for this story every day… great writing, looking forward to more!
Glad to see you post missed your story!!!
Yeah you BETTER go with her Bette!!! LOVE this story, and SOOOOOO glad you’re back! Please post again soon!
Glad your back!!!! What a place to leave us..but pls even though this stopover tryst seems fitting in a bathroom…they are so much more than that…take them back to Tina’s. No Tina wouldn’ do that…take them to a different hotel!! bring us along soon tks
the angst your killing me can they just stop it and start again!!!!!!!!!!! make the post longer
I have missed you and your story,glad to see you back. Old favorite bathroom/ thanks
Jwet nailed this one today. Damn..I missed you and the story. If you need help to get rid of the bullshit, so you can write..just let us know. thanks!!!
So glad you’re back. Such an edgy story! Terrific.
I’ve missed this story – glad we got a new chapter! Boy, is Tina testy…she needs another martini or twelve. ;) Hmm…I have a feeling that this next chapter will be interesting!
God!! You are such a literary tease!!! Loving this…glad your back!
HOT DAMN, yes please…and soon. Fabulously lusciuos as ever luvrgirl.
hey i missed your story. please continue soon. this was a great chapter. loved the tension.
Is it just me or is Tina a real beast in this story?
yes I’ve missed this story too and was fearful you had left town. Great writing and dialogue and interesting portrayals of Bette and Tina. Thank you
Damn this is good and now let go to the bathroom together and let see some hot stuff coming. Post soon please, thanks!
OK first WELCOME BACK…ive missed this story…but hey i know there is life outside this site..lol…OH the tension between these two,the heat….since the start youve been building up this incredable heat…only to fan the flame alittle each time….but now we have the bathroom….
Wow… that’s intense
luvr!!! im so glad ur back…im hope u feel better and ur bullshit got resolved!! jesus christ the way u write..i gotta agree with jwet u can feel there sexual tension!! let them seal the deal!! or at least play a lil!!
ow i missed this story please continue fast
All of this tension is getting to them. All of their preconceived notions of one another is driving them second guess themselves and their feelings. Let’s hope they can overcome this and finally get together. Thanks for posting, and sorry about all of the BS happening — it gets better.
OH what a delicious thought them going to the bathroom together. I think all the sexual tension is getting to them I know it’s getting to me. Great job
love it…and i missed this story…they sound like an old married couple a little, playing with each other even though they are serious…i thought bette would tell tina to come with hre to LA…is there a chance she will? glad you’re back