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A Slow Dance – Chapter 5
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"You got it, Mack Daddy."
Bette ignored her friend and walked out of the caf, smiling at Marina as she walked out the door.
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Tina walked out of the conference room exhausted and hungry. She glanced down at her watch and saw it was ten forty-five. The meeting really hadn’t taken long at all, and it went surprisingly well, seeing as she was twenty minutes late. She walked back to her office and gathered the messages taken by her assistant.
She looked down at one and saw it was from Eric. She wasn’t ready to deal with him again; not today at least. Tina sat down the pad on her desk and seated herself in the plush leather chair behind her. She booted up her computer and checked her email, then began working on the script she neglected yesterday. Soon, she saw that the clock had worked itself around to eleven fifteen. If she was going to meet Bette in time for lunch, she had to leave now.
Tina collected everything and walked out the door, informing Stephanie of the lunch meeting as she hastily made her way to the elevator and out to her car.
Bette walked into The Planet and sat down at her usual table. She was only there a few minutes when she saw Tina walk in the door. Her heart stopped momentarily as she gazed upon the woman heading toward her.
Three inch heels displayed long, lithe legs encased in a skirt that ran an inch above her knees, hugging Tina’s hips with authority. The snug blue blouse accentuated Tina’s flat stomach and firm, round ***** pressed taut against the material. After a moment, Bette worked her way up to Tina’s neck and seared into her mind the perfection of the curvature. She looked up at Tina and saw her smiling, her unframed face just as beautiful as when it was framed in her soft, flaxen hair. Bette was speechless as she flashed a blindingly bright smile at Tina.
Tina could’ve sworn she saw the entire room light up when Bette smiled back at her. She had noticed the look of utter shock on Bette’s face, and, for one fleeting moment, she thought something was wrong. Then she saw the hunger behind those beautiful brown eyes and had to suppress a shudder. She stopped in front of Bette, who was standing, still staring down at the woman who had managed to steal her breath away twice in less than twenty four hours.
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Hey I just read all the chapter and WHOA! you got a really Wonderful Story I Love it Please continue and I can’t wait to read more of this Thanks.
Oh, baby, this is just soooo good! You’ve got me wrapped up in every single stunningly-written detail!! This is rich, rich, rich!!! I was even entertained by Bette’s introduction: Tina…Marina…Marina…Tina. Reminded me of Letterman’s classic: Uma…Oprah…Oprah…Uma. But I have a really weird way of free associating sometimes…not to mention an odd sense of humor. goddess, don’t stop writing this any time soon, okay? Unless of course school gets in the way. Then you’re excused.
To answer your question with a question: didn’t anyone ever tell you it was impolite to ask a lady her age? :) Let it suffice to say for now that I’ve seen thirty and I’m not dead yet!
Keep up the heavenly writing, goddess!
(I hate writing in this little box. I can’t see what I’m doing…where I’ve been…or where I’m going.)
Great chapter and story can’t wait for the next post!!!
oh yes this so good i love its directness or at least Tinas!…lol not too shy so far i love it but as you pointed out to me in your authors note why would she be when its someone as beautiful as Bette…lol really enjoying this… more please!
lunch was wonderful. Made you wish you were there watching it happen. ; ) Oh..and all the talk about age..don’t make us over 30 women feel too old. Post another soon…love reading it.
Great update. Just finished reading the last 3-chapters. Between,short meetings at the gallery, and lunch I don’t know if these two can take much more of each other before they burst. Have to say great line, “Were all straight until were not”, love it. But whats up with the age thing. Looking forward to your next update. Careful with the neighbors.
oh i really liked that. hmm what to do about the eric problem. well pleae let me know soon. thanks.
Good chapter. Those 2 are so cute, and they need to be together soon as a couple, love it. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Well talk about lunch….huummm….goddess. What a nice update and such a wonderful lunch with our two girls, it almost sent shivers down my spine. Post soon
Hmmm….my spine wasnt the only thing shivering…..(Breathe snQQpy… Breathe)
My thoughts…..
Well, this is the first story I read with Bette “cracking her back.” I didnt know she knew how to do something like that. After reading your description of the act, I was ready to jump on my bed and give it a try; but then I was afraid I may beak something…LOL
It has always been hard as hell for me to picture Tina in “power suits.” Thats more of a Bette thing.
”We’re all straight until we’re not -_- I love this!
”You got it, Mack Daddy.” -_- Alice has been making cracks like this to Bette for as long as I can remember. Is there a stud in Bette dying to come out and only Alice knows about? Or is Alice actually making cracks at Bette’s “A” type personality?
hugging Tina’s hips with authority -_- Now I know how to describe that hot little number hanging in my closet once I put it on.
Tina could’ve sworn she saw the entire room light up when Bette smiled back at her. -_- This made me think of that commercial where the female schoolbus driver smiled and cars started crashing from the glare…LOL
Just loves this story – keep’em comming…
make me laugh when i you wrote about how Tina broke into hysterical laugh at the balcony. Sometimes i do wonder back the silly things i do during the day..and laugh it all out. LOL~ need some release i guess? Wonderfully written..post soon!
really nice!
nice that their taking is slow !!!!!!!!!!!!! Who is watching them