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A Slow Dance – Chapter 5
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Tina continued smiling up at Bette and leaned in, placing a discreet kiss on her cheek. She pulled back and said, "Good afternoon, Bette."
Bette immediately snapped herself out of her Tina-induced haze and replied, "Good afternoon to you, Ms. Kennard. What can I get you for lunch today?"
She pulled out a seat for Tina and waited for her to adjust herself, catching a glimpse of cleavage in the process. Bette’s playful smile widened noticeably as she waited for Tina’s answer.
"I don’t know. Why don’t you choose for me?"
Bette nodded. "It’ll be here in a few minutes."
Tina watched Bette walk casually over to the counter and speak with a dark haired woman. She studied her surroundings, noting how large The Planet really was. They were still working on part of it outside, but the inside was set up to create a comfortable place to sit down and read the newspaper or hang out with friends. She enjoyed the modern feel of the establishment, and truly loved the way the owners mixed casual and chic.
"So how do you like The Planet?" Bette asked as she sat down in the chair across from Tina.
A smile formed on Tina’s lips as she surveyed her surroundings once again. "It’s comfortable. I haven’t been in a comfortable cafe in a very long time, so this says something to me. Of course," Tina added as she looked into Bette’s eyes, "It could be the company."
Bette grinned. "I do what I can." She glanced back at Marina, who was speaking to one of her employees. "Marina really does a great job running this place. Even though the back is still awaiting the finishing touches, she manages to keep the customers pouring in steadily. I think she spoke of turning this into a ***** bar at night, but it was a while ago. I wonder if she’s still going to do it." Bette looked off for a moment and pondered the idea quickly before returning to Tina’s side.
"The food should be out momentarily. I ordered a Greek salad for you, if that’s all right. I wasn’t sure what you liked."
"That actually sounds wonderful. I haven’t eaten all day."
"Do you not eat breakfast?"
"I do, actually, but I woke up late this morning and I had to rush around in order to get to a meeting I would already be late for." After a moment, she stated, "I couldn’t sleep at all last night, Bette. I kept thinking about you."
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Hey I just read all the chapter and WHOA! you got a really Wonderful Story I Love it Please continue and I can’t wait to read more of this Thanks.
Oh, baby, this is just soooo good! You’ve got me wrapped up in every single stunningly-written detail!! This is rich, rich, rich!!! I was even entertained by Bette’s introduction: Tina…Marina…Marina…Tina. Reminded me of Letterman’s classic: Uma…Oprah…Oprah…Uma. But I have a really weird way of free associating sometimes…not to mention an odd sense of humor. goddess, don’t stop writing this any time soon, okay? Unless of course school gets in the way. Then you’re excused.
To answer your question with a question: didn’t anyone ever tell you it was impolite to ask a lady her age? :) Let it suffice to say for now that I’ve seen thirty and I’m not dead yet!
Keep up the heavenly writing, goddess!
(I hate writing in this little box. I can’t see what I’m doing…where I’ve been…or where I’m going.)
Great chapter and story can’t wait for the next post!!!
oh yes this so good i love its directness or at least Tinas!…lol not too shy so far i love it but as you pointed out to me in your authors note why would she be when its someone as beautiful as Bette…lol really enjoying this… more please!
lunch was wonderful. Made you wish you were there watching it happen. ; ) Oh..and all the talk about age..don’t make us over 30 women feel too old. Post another soon…love reading it.
Great update. Just finished reading the last 3-chapters. Between,short meetings at the gallery, and lunch I don’t know if these two can take much more of each other before they burst. Have to say great line, “Were all straight until were not”, love it. But whats up with the age thing. Looking forward to your next update. Careful with the neighbors.
oh i really liked that. hmm what to do about the eric problem. well pleae let me know soon. thanks.
Good chapter. Those 2 are so cute, and they need to be together soon as a couple, love it. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Well talk about lunch….huummm….goddess. What a nice update and such a wonderful lunch with our two girls, it almost sent shivers down my spine. Post soon
Hmmm….my spine wasnt the only thing shivering…..(Breathe snQQpy… Breathe)
My thoughts…..
Well, this is the first story I read with Bette “cracking her back.” I didnt know she knew how to do something like that. After reading your description of the act, I was ready to jump on my bed and give it a try; but then I was afraid I may beak something…LOL
It has always been hard as hell for me to picture Tina in “power suits.” Thats more of a Bette thing.
”We’re all straight until we’re not -_- I love this!
”You got it, Mack Daddy.” -_- Alice has been making cracks like this to Bette for as long as I can remember. Is there a stud in Bette dying to come out and only Alice knows about? Or is Alice actually making cracks at Bette’s “A” type personality?
hugging Tina’s hips with authority -_- Now I know how to describe that hot little number hanging in my closet once I put it on.
Tina could’ve sworn she saw the entire room light up when Bette smiled back at her. -_- This made me think of that commercial where the female schoolbus driver smiled and cars started crashing from the glare…LOL
Just loves this story – keep’em comming…
make me laugh when i you wrote about how Tina broke into hysterical laugh at the balcony. Sometimes i do wonder back the silly things i do during the day..and laugh it all out. LOL~ need some release i guess? Wonderfully written..post soon!
really nice!
nice that their taking is slow !!!!!!!!!!!!! Who is watching them