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    A Thin Line – 10

    Story written on April 24, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – Sunday night, Monday morning

    "Bend you knees, Helena," she instructed quietly.

    Bette wrapped her left arm under and around my right thigh. With her right hand and fingertips, she gently brushed over the delicate flesh of my inner thighs. I quivered under her touch, as I eagerly anticipated the dousing of her tongue into the immense wetness between my legs.

    "God, Bette, you are teasing me mercilessly," I said.

    "Mmm-hmm," she breathed, looking up at my face. "But it feels good, doesn’t it?"

    Before I could answer, I felt her tongue drape over my clitoris and vanquish all the frustration of unrequited desire that had afflicted my existence for so long. Bette’s tongue darted, and fluttered and washed over me. It soothed away all my earnest, longstanding ache to earn and to entertain her favor.

    "Oh, God, you’re driving me fucking insane," I answered huskily in response to her stimulation.

    I felt Bette pull away momentarily, only long enough to utter, "You taste so good."

    Her tongue circled my vaginal opening. My hips rose instinctively. She thrust her tongue into me. In and out. Then dragged it across my clit methodically, back and forth, first slowly, then ravenously. Bette gnawed and licked, and bit and sucked. I was in ecstasy. Indeed, she had been famished, and I was gratified to be her repast.

    "Bette!" She knew why I was calling out her name.

    She climbed towards my mouth while inserting two fingers inside me. As we kissed, I came, fluttering and trembling next to her. Bette held me tightly and gently stroked her hand through my hair.

    When I calmed, I snuggled close to her as we lay entwined on our sides.

    Everything I thought to speak sounded trite, lacking in an accurate expression of what I was feeling. I wanted to tell her how she’d exceeded my deepest fantasy. But I wasn’t quite sure as to how to say it, or even if I should. We lay in stillness, in one another’s arms. It was a peace I’d never enjoyed, and I was savoring it.

    Finally, Bette asked softly in my ear, "What are you thinking?"

    I contemplated how to answer that question. ‘How right it feels to be here with you.’ ‘How wonderful you are.’ ‘How glad I am you’re staying the night.’ ‘How enticingly marvelous you smell.’ ‘How deliciously soft and comfortable you feel next to me.’ ‘How I never want you to leave.’ A myriad thoughts ran through my mind. I needed to quickly reach a decision.

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    2. Hey there, zheese! Helena’s right, Bette does know how to start off a morning. Love your writing, your dialogue and imagery … now, let’s see what it is that Helena’s hungry for! Oh, and I can’t wait to see Bette and Helena attending an art exhibit together, they’ll definitely be the most gorgeous works of art there. Thanks.. eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

    6. That was must have been mind bending for them zheese, in any number of ways. Besides the sex (they seemed to quite enjoy themselves), Helena has experienced a dream coming true (how often does that happen?), and Bette’s completely captivated by the one who’d been her nemesis up until the other day. Damn, maybe I just never hated anybody enough!

    7. oh how iv missed this story!! damn work gets in the way of everything important! hope it doesn’t keep you away for too long again, absolutely love this story and the way you write it. eagerly awaiting your next installment :)

    12. really it was worth the wait !… I just LOVE your writing and everything about this story… You captured Bette and Helena in the most realistic and sensual way there was.. Can’t wait to read your next post.

    15. We can only hope that next season comes close to your fabulous storyline. I mean, really. I WANT them together now! Looking forward to your next post.

    16. Zheese, Another breath-taking addition to this amourous and adorable adventure. The way that Bette and Helena have collided and realized their true feelings for one another has been beautifully constructed. The reality of this collison has left both parties overwhelmed and surprised. Their ability to please and pleasure each other was masterly painted. Every essence and moment has built to this union. I think that I too have been charmed by your astounding tale. Please continue soon and bring a little levity and light into my world. Thank you so much. Your Loyal Fan.

    17. ok…maybe it’s all the wine that I’ve drank tonight but this is just a Beautiful/Hot,Hot/Beautiful beautiful/ written….dam!.I Just wanted you to know…

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