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A Thin Line – 10
Drawing back to look into her eyes, I answered Bette, "How happy I am that you’re with me at this moment, and how safe I feel in your arms."
Bette smiled, searching my eyes with hers, and whispered, "I’m very happy to be with you. Holding you."
We kissed again softly and I cuddled back in close to her. Before long, Bette’s breathing lulled me into sleep. When I awoke the next morning, I was delighted to find myself still wrapped in her arms.
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The early morning sun shone brightly through the windows. I judged it to be just after dawn, as I felt Helena stir next to me. My eyes were still closed as she kissed my cheek lightly. She tried unobtrusively to disentangle herself from my nocturnal grasp. But when I felt her gentle grip around my arm, to remove it from around her waist, I surprised her by clutching her tighter.
Opening my eyes, I teased in my low, morning voice, "Where do you think you’re going?"
"I didn’t mean to wake you, Bette," Helena apologized, smiling.
"You didn’t. I was already awake," I said, leaning in to kiss her lips. "Good morning, by the way."
"Good morning to you," Helena said, after our lips embraced.
"How are you?" I asked.
"I’m fabulous," she grinned.
I smoothed one hand over the supple skin of her back, and rubbed one foot up and down the length of Helena’s leg.
"Well, you certainly feel good this morning," I whispered, as my hand moved down to caress and knead her ass.
"Mmm. You’re already being mischievous this morning," Helena replied, reaching in to flick her tongue against my ear.
"Mm-hmm. I like making love in the morning, Helena," I spoke softly as I began to lick her neck. "Do you?"
I could feel her heart begin to race and beat harder against my chest.
"Yes," she whispered.
"So, do you want to be bad this morning?" I asked. "Last night, you said that I was ‘mischievous’ and you were ‘bad.’"
"I believe I could tolerate being a little naughty," Helena answered, caressing her cheek against mine. "What time do you have to be at work?"
"Not until eleven," I replied. "And you?"
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(10 votes, average: 3.80 out of 5)
OMG…this is just wonderful…nice lunch time reading…Z, you continue to please….more, more, more…:-)))
Hey there, zheese! Helena’s right, Bette does know how to start off a morning. Love your writing, your dialogue and imagery … now, let’s see what it is that Helena’s hungry for! Oh, and I can’t wait to see Bette and Helena attending an art exhibit together, they’ll definitely be the most gorgeous works of art there. Thanks.. eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
Well worth the wait! I’ll try to be more patient about the upcoming chapter! Thanks.
great chapter!!!you really know how to bring out the best of these 2 characters
Excellent…always love this…dont always comment..sorry! but never miss a chapter…..and that one was worth the wait..thanks
That was must have been mind bending for them zheese, in any number of ways. Besides the sex (they seemed to quite enjoy themselves), Helena has experienced a dream coming true (how often does that happen?), and Bette’s completely captivated by the one who’d been her nemesis up until the other day. Damn, maybe I just never hated anybody enough!
oh how iv missed this story!! damn work gets in the way of everything important! hope it doesn’t keep you away for too long again, absolutely love this story and the way you write it. eagerly awaiting your next installment :)
great as always Z
I have to remember to breathe. Beyond provocative. Do women like these two really exist other than on TV and in our imagination? Where are they?
OMG, this story is red HOT!
Good to see another chapter zheese…thankful that you’re back! I am one that is continuing to enjoy…..
really it was worth the wait !… I just LOVE your writing and everything about this story… You captured Bette and Helena in the most realistic and sensual way there was.. Can’t wait to read your next post.
Great update, zheese! Sorry to hear that work is getting in the way of ur wonderful writing. Anyway, hope to see ur next post soon! ^_^
ahhhhh, perfect
We can only hope that next season comes close to your fabulous storyline. I mean, really. I WANT them together now! Looking forward to your next post.
Zheese, Another breath-taking addition to this amourous and adorable adventure. The way that Bette and Helena have collided and realized their true feelings for one another has been beautifully constructed. The reality of this collison has left both parties overwhelmed and surprised. Their ability to please and pleasure each other was masterly painted. Every essence and moment has built to this union. I think that I too have been charmed by your astounding tale. Please continue soon and bring a little levity and light into my world. Thank you so much. Your Loyal Fan.
ok…maybe it’s all the wine that I’ve drank tonight but this is just a Beautiful/Hot,Hot/Beautiful beautiful/ written….dam!.I Just wanted you to know…
I always worry what Tina will say,about Helena and Bette, WHO CARES. yoy write them so beautifully. This is how it could be.If Only thanks
Oh my god! Its actually very hot and romantic at the same time. How did you manage to write that well?
You did a great job of capturing the heat wave these two could casue in a room together. post again soon. HelBette Rocks!
great great great I so love this story!