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A Thin Line – 10
"You’re so soft," I told her quietly, gazing into her eyes. "I love feeling your body against me."
Bette mimicked my movement, caressing my stomach before running her hand tenderly up my side and back down again. She slid her hand lower, crossing my upper thigh and plying her fingers between my legs. I willingly opened them for her, slowly gliding my knee upwards. Bette circled her fingers over and around my clit. It was a gentle beckoning. And I could tell she was enjoying it, especially as she stirred my hips into motion.
She smiled around my nipple and sucked it hard before nibbling tenderly into my hardened flesh. I arched my back. Bette moved her mouth to my other nipple while continuing to please the sensitive area of my utmost delight. My breathing was becoming erratic.
"You know you’re making me insane," I said, pushing my breast into her mouth.
"I’m loving touching you. Feeling how wet you are for me." Bette replied, easing up on my erect nipple, and moving toward my mouth to insert her tongue. We kissed passionately as I rocked against her hand.
I wrapped my hands around the back of her head, pulling her closer. Rolling onto my back, I spread my legs wider apart and lifted my hips.
"Please, I want you inside of me," I breathed into her mouth.
Bette stroked longer and more firmly against me, alternately circling my clit with the wetness between my legs.
"And I still want my tongue there," she whispered.
"Oh, God, Bette," I cried with a moan.
I pushed my hips more quickly up and down, and around her hand, all the while wondering if I could possibly show this woman more ardently the passion I had long kept secret from her.
Suddenly, Bette began sliding down my front. She worked her tongue back and forth between my breasts and once again nibbled on my nipples. As she licked over them, she moaned and paused to whisper, "You have the most exquisite nipples I’ve ever seen, Helena. I could suckle them all night."
I ran my hands through the long, sensuous curls on her head as she continued licking down my torso. She flicked her tongue into my navel and circled around it slowly.
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(10 votes, average: 3.80 out of 5)
OMG…this is just wonderful…nice lunch time reading…Z, you continue to please….more, more, more…:-)))
Hey there, zheese! Helena’s right, Bette does know how to start off a morning. Love your writing, your dialogue and imagery … now, let’s see what it is that Helena’s hungry for! Oh, and I can’t wait to see Bette and Helena attending an art exhibit together, they’ll definitely be the most gorgeous works of art there. Thanks.. eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
Well worth the wait! I’ll try to be more patient about the upcoming chapter! Thanks.
great chapter!!!you really know how to bring out the best of these 2 characters
Excellent…always love this…dont always comment..sorry! but never miss a chapter…..and that one was worth the wait..thanks
That was must have been mind bending for them zheese, in any number of ways. Besides the sex (they seemed to quite enjoy themselves), Helena has experienced a dream coming true (how often does that happen?), and Bette’s completely captivated by the one who’d been her nemesis up until the other day. Damn, maybe I just never hated anybody enough!
oh how iv missed this story!! damn work gets in the way of everything important! hope it doesn’t keep you away for too long again, absolutely love this story and the way you write it. eagerly awaiting your next installment :)
great as always Z
I have to remember to breathe. Beyond provocative. Do women like these two really exist other than on TV and in our imagination? Where are they?
OMG, this story is red HOT!
Good to see another chapter zheese…thankful that you’re back! I am one that is continuing to enjoy…..
really it was worth the wait !… I just LOVE your writing and everything about this story… You captured Bette and Helena in the most realistic and sensual way there was.. Can’t wait to read your next post.
Great update, zheese! Sorry to hear that work is getting in the way of ur wonderful writing. Anyway, hope to see ur next post soon! ^_^
ahhhhh, perfect
We can only hope that next season comes close to your fabulous storyline. I mean, really. I WANT them together now! Looking forward to your next post.
Zheese, Another breath-taking addition to this amourous and adorable adventure. The way that Bette and Helena have collided and realized their true feelings for one another has been beautifully constructed. The reality of this collison has left both parties overwhelmed and surprised. Their ability to please and pleasure each other was masterly painted. Every essence and moment has built to this union. I think that I too have been charmed by your astounding tale. Please continue soon and bring a little levity and light into my world. Thank you so much. Your Loyal Fan.
ok…maybe it’s all the wine that I’ve drank tonight but this is just a Beautiful/Hot,Hot/Beautiful beautiful/ written….dam!.I Just wanted you to know…
I always worry what Tina will say,about Helena and Bette, WHO CARES. yoy write them so beautifully. This is how it could be.If Only thanks
Oh my god! Its actually very hot and romantic at the same time. How did you manage to write that well?
You did a great job of capturing the heat wave these two could casue in a room together. post again soon. HelBette Rocks!
great great great I so love this story!