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A Thin Line – Chpt 13
I ran my hand up and down Bette’s back. Her body melted and merged into mine.
"all the way"
As the orchestra swelled to its ending, I drew back to look into Bette’s eyes and kissed her long, with sincerity and emotion.
"Thank you," I whispered, "Thank you for dancing with me."
"It was truly my pleasure," Bette replied, taking my hand. "Now come sit with me."
She reached with her other hand to adjust the volume lower, and then walked me to the couch and sat down. Resting her back against the arm of the sofa, Bette stretched out her legs and created an opening between them across the seats.
"Sit here, between my legs, and lean back against me," she requested.
I willingly and silently complied. Bette wrapped her arms around me, as I snuggled comfortably into place. She kissed the top of my head.
"This feels good," Bette said.
"Yes. Yes, it does," I agreed, gently caressing the back of her hand.
We sat together quietly for what seemed like several minutes before Bette spoke again.
"Helena?" she said.
I glanced up and back at her face. "Yes." I turned back around and waited for Bette to continue.
"I’ve had a wonderful time with you this evening," she said.
"And I with you," I replied, then paused. "And last night too," I added, looking back up at her and smiling.
She grinned. "Yes, and last night as well."
Bette bent her head down and kissed me.
"Bette, I’m getting the sense there’s something you want to talk with me about," I said.
"You’re very perceptive," she replied.
I stared in front of me, with Bette’s arms still wrapped tightly around me.
"Then let’s talk," I urged her forward.
Bette hesitated before speaking. "Helena, prior to a few nights ago, it was all I could do to tolerate being around you. Now, I’m thinking about you for what seems to be every waking moment of the day, and I adore every second we’ve spent together. I can tell you care about me." She stopped.
"Please, continue, Bette. I know that’s not all you’re wanting to say right now," I encouraged her.
Bette rubbed her right hand up and down my left arm.
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They are so hot together. It is due to skill as a writer.
I always look forward to reading this story – Bette and Helena have been an odd oasis after the desolate desert that was season three…can’t wait for more from you…thanks.
I liked the calm cool conversation with the hot undercurrents. Nice update, z. Looking forward to an even hotter chapter next.
It’s just not everyday that you get a plausible explaination of Helena’s transformation.
The joy of it – another great chapter in this saga! Just received your pm, so thought that I would leave a few words of encouragement for you…still loving this zheese:)
Another fantablous chapter zheese, absolutely love this story, so damn sexy! eagerly awaiting the next chapter, thank you!
You write beautifully! Each time I read your fic, I want more! Bette and Helena leaves me breathless! :) Great job!
God, this is my absolute favorite story on the site right now. Can’t wait for some more…
Great chapter, zheese, good enough to ease my long day of bale and bitterness. Oh, and I bet that some of my teachers and professors could also describe the personality of their eccentric student, hehe… Oh yeah, and Bette rubbed between Helena’s folds… mmmmmm… how nice! Now, let them finally get to *that*.
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! I just LOVEEEEEEEE this story!! Bette & Helena make E-V-E-R-Y-T-H-I-N-G they do together so incredibly sexy!
My favorite story. So glad to see your post. This is the sexiest story on the site. I love it. Can’t wait for more.
oh s…, what a way to start the day. that was fantastic…”I’m getting to that”. your writing is fabulous and b&h are a dynamic duo. more, please…excellent!!!
Lovely writing! Thanks ^_^
HOT!!!HOT!!!!HOT!!!!! Bette and Helena together is just great. Please let them be Happy for along time. Thank you for the Great Chapter
Hello Zheese, Thank you for creating a realistic and loving portrait of how a relationship between Bette and Helena could develop and strength over time. These two alpha females have been through the wringer in the past and now need the comfort and support from another human being. And who better than someone who has recently been through a similar situation. Brava!! It is with your grat talent and style that this is a fantastic fan fiction. I can’t wait for the next installment so please make it soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Even though I love B& T, gotta admit that Bette & Helena together, definitly hot. Damn
mucho CALIENTE! B & H are soooo HOT together! loving it! (“,)