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A Thin Line – Chpt 31
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“Helena?” Bette said softly.
I opened my eyes and Bette smiled at me.
“Helena, my silence did not, and does not, indicate a negative answer. I was…I am…in shock. And yes, while it is soon, that’s not my major concern. And I don’t give a shit what other people say or think or joke about.” Bette’s hand slid down my throat lovingly. She caressed below it, across my chest, with her palm and fingers. “Sweetheart, I have a child… and you have children that we need to think about. I think we need to commit this idea to some serious conversation and thought.”
“You’re right, of course,” I said, picking up her hand from my chest and lacing our fingers together. “I let my emotions sweep me away.”
Bette squeezed my hand and heaved a sigh. “I’m glad you did,” she said. I looked at her quizzically. “I have a confession to make.”
“And what is that?” I asked.
“I’ve secretly been contemplating, the past couple of days, asking you if you’d like to try living with me. But I didn’t know how to broach the subject. And I was sure if I did, you’d laugh at me.” Bette waved our clasped hands between us. “So, you see, I was shocked that you were thinking the same thing. You’re not the only one being swept away by her emotions.”
I unclasped our hands and reached behind Bette’s neck. I pulled her in for a kiss. When I drew away, I said, “So, we’ll talk more about this later?”
Bette nodded and rest her forehead against mine. “Yes. Definitely.”
“Okay. We have a plan then,” I smiled.
Bette abruptly stood up straight. “Speaking of plans, what time is it?” she asked, glancing around the deck area in search of a timepiece.
“There’s not a clock out here, Darling. But it’s probably around 3:00,” I estimated.
“Oh, shit!” Bette exclaimed. “Sweetheart, I need to run an errand.”
Surprised, I said, “Can I go with you?”
“No,” Bette smiled.
I gave her a pout.
“I won’t be long,” she laughed at my exaggerated expression. “Can I get you anything while I’m out? Do you need anything to prepare dinner for your mother?” Bette asked considerately.
“Actually, I do need a few things at the grocery if you don’t mind. I’ll make a list,” I replied.
“Okay, do that while I get dressed,” Bette instructed me, hurrying to exit the pool.
A wondered where she suddenly had to go and what she had to do, that I couldn’t go with her.
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Congrats on the award, I began reading this story from the link on that page and the award is well deserved. You write with a playful and classy flair that is a rare find. I’ll be reading from here on out.
oh wow Zheese an award, great stuff girl congrats. Now about your chapter I loved it I mean I really really loved it but what’s the matter with you leaving us hanging there????? Post soon okay thanks
It occured to me while reading this that never in my life have I ever gotten into a sarong. So they’re going domestic already? That’s some mojo they’re working.
Congrats on the award. I like that your R and NC-17 chapters are different. Very hot, playful and teasing but not sleazy or common. “A Thinking Woman’s NC-17” if you will.
Congrats on the award. Love this story, and the pace you’ve set for it. What’s the errand, is it a surprise for Helena. You know the more Bette/Helena stories I read the more, I think they would be a very interesting couple if we can’t have B&T. I mean come on, they’re bringing all these other characters into the show this season, why are they not working with what we’ve got. Cos other than Tina, Helena is the only other person that seems like it would work. Cybil Shepard and Marilee Matlin, nothing personal but NOT>
Great chapter…..I wonder what Bette is up to? Post Soon!!!!!!!
Your award is soooooooo well deserved. I went back today just to reread your story cause it’s the best!!!! This love is so rare they have, you keep it so exciting. So what is our little Bette up to?? Can’t wait to see. Lucky Helena!
really liked the chapter…but don’t keep us waiting too long…the suspense – it’s great, but…well, your writing is fantastic, so it’ll be worth the wait…i’ll stop whining..post soon!!!
Congrats Zheese, I finally know what award you’ve won! :) thanks for the pM, I just got it today. Had been busy, so I hardly come up for air! Actually, the honest truth is, I liked your story more than the sex parts, the more dimensional romantic, warm and fuzzy stuff, and definitely the unexpected surprises that come – like phone calls etc. :D You’re a good writer! Please continue to write whatever comes to your head! :) Great stuff!
Hey zheese, Nice to see how this is all playing out. I want to move into that beach house with Helena!
Thanks for another great chapter Zheese. Love the way this story is progressing. So what’s Bette’s errand? Is it a surprise for Helena?