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    A Thin Line – Chpt 31

    Story written on August 8, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – Saturday afternoon

    Previously

    “Just let it ring. It’s probably Mummy calling back. She called this morning and wants to come for dinner tonight before she leaves for New York tomorrow. Is that alright with you, Darling?” Helena asked. “She had to take another call earlier and is probably phoning back to confirm.”

    The phone continued to ring as I answered, “Of course.”

    We heard the answering machine engage.

    Peggy’s voice followed. “Helena, dear, it’s time for you and Bette to come up for air. Pick up, please.”

    I looked at Helena, startled.

    “How does your mother know everything?”

    Chapter 31

    Bette conveyed her amazement, complimenting me, as we walked up the stairs from our workout on the beach.

    “Helena, I don’t know how you hold those positions for so long! I get so frustrated,” she lamented.

    “Well, I have been doing yoga a bit longer than you. And, besides, you did quite well with the beginner asanas,” I acknowledged, taking Bette’s hand.

    “Thanks, but you don’t have to humor me,” Bette said, smiling and kissing me on the cheek.

    “I’m not, Darling. But you’ll get there. With practice. In the meantime, you are quite cute when you fall over,” I replied with a gentle laugh.

    “Ha-ha. So glad to provide your entertainment,” Bette said, letting go of my hand and pinching my ass.

    Reaching the deck, we strolled over to the lounge chairs next to the pool, and Bette sat down. I stood next to her chair.

    “Aren’t you going to sit with me?” she asked, looking up. Her disappointment was reflected in her tone.

    “I’ll be right back. I was just going to run inside and get us some bottles of water,” I explained, bending down to touch her lips with mine.

    “Can you make mine a double margarita on the rocks, instead. Sans salt?” Bette asked grinning widely.

    “Seriously? It’s not even noon yet,” I asked, taken aback.

    “No. Just kidding. Definitely later though,” Bette replied. “Water’s fine for now.”

    “I’ll throw us together a nice salad too,” I said, combing the loose tendrils from her face with my fingers. “What do you think?”

    “You mean, ‘am I hungry’?” Bette smiled mischievously while rubbing her hand up and down my outer thigh.

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    1. Congrats on the award, I began reading this story from the link on that page and the award is well deserved. You write with a playful and classy flair that is a rare find. I’ll be reading from here on out.

    2. oh wow Zheese an award, great stuff girl congrats. Now about your chapter I loved it I mean I really really loved it but what’s the matter with you leaving us hanging there????? Post soon okay thanks

    3. It occured to me while reading this that never in my life have I ever gotten into a sarong. So they’re going domestic already? That’s some mojo they’re working.

    4. Congrats on the award. I like that your R and NC-17 chapters are different. Very hot, playful and teasing but not sleazy or common. “A Thinking Woman’s NC-17” if you will.

    5. Congrats on the award. Love this story, and the pace you’ve set for it. What’s the errand, is it a surprise for Helena. You know the more Bette/Helena stories I read the more, I think they would be a very interesting couple if we can’t have B&T. I mean come on, they’re bringing all these other characters into the show this season, why are they not working with what we’ve got. Cos other than Tina, Helena is the only other person that seems like it would work. Cybil Shepard and Marilee Matlin, nothing personal but NOT>

    7. Your award is soooooooo well deserved. I went back today just to reread your story cause it’s the best!!!! This love is so rare they have, you keep it so exciting. So what is our little Bette up to?? Can’t wait to see. Lucky Helena!

    8. really liked the chapter…but don’t keep us waiting too long…the suspense – it’s great, but…well, your writing is fantastic, so it’ll be worth the wait…i’ll stop whining..post soon!!!

    9. Congrats Zheese, I finally know what award you’ve won! :) thanks for the pM, I just got it today. Had been busy, so I hardly come up for air! Actually, the honest truth is, I liked your story more than the sex parts, the more dimensional romantic, warm and fuzzy stuff, and definitely the unexpected surprises that come – like phone calls etc. :D You’re a good writer! Please continue to write whatever comes to your head! :) Great stuff!

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