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A Thin Line – Chpt 31
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“Please,” I nodded happily, leaning in to kiss her, my hand wrapping around her neck, pulling her closer.
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Bette jumped into the pool. Then squirmed onto a raft-chair. I laughed as I watched her struggle with the bouncing craft. At last she gained control and settled back comfortably.
“I’m going in to make your margarita, Darling,” I announced, standing from my lounge on the deck.
Bette stroked her hands through the water. I turned to make my way into the house.
“Frozen. Don’t forget. Frozen,” she called out to remind me.
I shot a smile over my shoulder to her and clutched my shell as I meandered back into the kitchen. As I walked, I shook my head in disbelief at how fortunate I was. Fortunate to have Bette in my life.
Perhaps I should ask her. Perhaps it was too soon. The blender whirred, as I pondered asking my question.
Having dispensed the frozen margaritas into our glasses, I made my way back out to the pool.
As I walked down the steps into the water, Bette paddled towards me.
“Grab a raft,” she said, reaching to take the concoctions I’d created.
I pulled the glass back.
“A kiss, first,” I teased.
“Was that part of ‘the deal’?” Bette teased back.
“It is now,” I affirmed. “Remember. If you’re good, you’ll get your surprise tomorrow.”
Bette clasped my arm and pulled herself to me. The waves in the pool sloshed around us. I held our drinks above my head.
“Give me my drink, Helena Peabody,” she said, playfully.
“Kiss me,” I demanded.
She reached over and kissed me hard and deep.
“Mmm,” I moaned.
“Am I being good?” Bette asked.
“Mmm. You’re being very, very good,” I confirmed, licking her lips with my tongue.
“You want to go fool around?” Bette asked, caressing my breast, and running her thumb back and forth over my nipple.
“I thought you wanted to drink your margarita,” I replied, bringing her glass down to her mouth and holding the straw to her lips.
“So I did,” she said, taking a long and rapid suck.
“You’re going to get a brain freeze, Darling,” I laughed.
“No worry. I expect you’ll rescue me with a fiery kiss, and I’ll thaw right out,” she retorted. “Now, please, get a chair and join me.”
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Congrats on the award, I began reading this story from the link on that page and the award is well deserved. You write with a playful and classy flair that is a rare find. I’ll be reading from here on out.
oh wow Zheese an award, great stuff girl congrats. Now about your chapter I loved it I mean I really really loved it but what’s the matter with you leaving us hanging there????? Post soon okay thanks
It occured to me while reading this that never in my life have I ever gotten into a sarong. So they’re going domestic already? That’s some mojo they’re working.
Congrats on the award. I like that your R and NC-17 chapters are different. Very hot, playful and teasing but not sleazy or common. “A Thinking Woman’s NC-17” if you will.
Congrats on the award. Love this story, and the pace you’ve set for it. What’s the errand, is it a surprise for Helena. You know the more Bette/Helena stories I read the more, I think they would be a very interesting couple if we can’t have B&T. I mean come on, they’re bringing all these other characters into the show this season, why are they not working with what we’ve got. Cos other than Tina, Helena is the only other person that seems like it would work. Cybil Shepard and Marilee Matlin, nothing personal but NOT>
Great chapter…..I wonder what Bette is up to? Post Soon!!!!!!!
Your award is soooooooo well deserved. I went back today just to reread your story cause it’s the best!!!! This love is so rare they have, you keep it so exciting. So what is our little Bette up to?? Can’t wait to see. Lucky Helena!
really liked the chapter…but don’t keep us waiting too long…the suspense – it’s great, but…well, your writing is fantastic, so it’ll be worth the wait…i’ll stop whining..post soon!!!
Congrats Zheese, I finally know what award you’ve won! :) thanks for the pM, I just got it today. Had been busy, so I hardly come up for air! Actually, the honest truth is, I liked your story more than the sex parts, the more dimensional romantic, warm and fuzzy stuff, and definitely the unexpected surprises that come – like phone calls etc. :D You’re a good writer! Please continue to write whatever comes to your head! :) Great stuff!
Hey zheese, Nice to see how this is all playing out. I want to move into that beach house with Helena!
Thanks for another great chapter Zheese. Love the way this story is progressing. So what’s Bette’s errand? Is it a surprise for Helena?