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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 11b
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As she reached her destination, Tina’s hands explored Bette’s *****, firstly squeezing them firmly, before lightly pinching her nipples eliciting excited moans from the writhing brunette.
Bette was beyond any rational thought at this point. She was being driven to a frenzy, and was desperate for her release. Oh god, don’t let her tease me she thought. She ran her hands through Tina’s hair, pushing her towards the source of her desire.
Tina roughly grabbed Bette’s wrists before lifting her head, to show her who was in control.
She looked up once more. “My Prey..My GameMy Rules!”
Bette felt a jolt in her centre, so intense that she didn’t think she could stand it any longer. “T????????? she groaned..P..pplease!” She barely managed to stutter, as her body writhed uncontrollably.
Tina slid her tongue across Bette’s inner thigh towards her centre, but instead of giving Bette the release she so desperately craved Tina lightly ran her tongue slowly over and over Bette’s *****. Firmly enough to drive her even wilder, but not firmly enough to make her come.
“Let yourself go” Tina begged hoarsely. “Please baby” she almost cried.
Giving Bette no respite from her frustration, Tina kept up her cruel torture, until unable to contain it anymore, and almost crazed with lust Bette alternated between threats of what she would do to Tina, and promising Tina anything and everything she had ever wanted if she would just make her come.
Bette’s eyes widened with shock as Tina slipped two fingers into her. God that feels so good she thought, bucking her hips to hasten her release.
Tina’s last vestiges of control left her as her mouth attached it’s self to Bette’s *****, sucking and licking her, gasping with shock as Bette’s walls tightened around Tina’s fingers, drawing her in further and further.
Bette felt her body start to tense up as she could feel the ***** building inside her. Bette felt her face contort as she desperately clung on to her sanity by a thread, she lifted her head slightly and the sight of Tina’s blonde hair splayed across her thighs sent her into oblivion, her mind going blank and everything suddenly going very very dark. Of her 5 senses, it seemed that only one was fully functioning. It was as if her body had shut down the other 4, diverting their power directly to her ***** allowing her to feel the most intense form of pleasure she had ever known.
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Stunned and amazing great post!!!!!!!!
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
K
WOW, that was one of the hottest chaps I have ever read. Perfect! Love this story, don’t stay away so long. Can’t wait for more.
Thanks, I really enjoy reading this story..keep it up pls…
“The best writing is rewriting.” — E. B. White
Hey, tbsaver! Please never apologize for wanting to make your work the best it can be. You have the right to alter your work until you’re satisfied with the final product and wholeheartedly proud to call it your own. Kudos to you for expecting the best from yourself. Amazing revision. I also enjoyed the previous version, but I agree with you that manifesting Bette and Tina’s emotions made their connection even more special. Thanks for all your hard work!
“and no matter how much you squeak…………I decide how we play the game! Understand? – YIKES!!!
Glad to see that I am not the only one stuttering around here. I can now say that I have at least one thing in common with Bette!
You were right, by the way. The first chapter 11 was wonderful, but this one is definitely true to your story. No matter how vivid a sex scene is written…the build up, the sensualness of the actual act in itself, is so much more fulfilling when we can share in the emotions and thoughts of the characters. One of the reasons I think that reading a well written sex scene is much more of a turn on, than watching it on screen. Thank you for this shot of adrenaline before bed!! :)
Great chapter T.B. I love this story and miss you when you were away. This is the first B/T story that I have read where they are pretty much equals from the onset (They are both already lesbians and neither one is turning the other out.), and have thier own strong sexual histories. I would love to see what happens when Bette gets Tina back to the USA and introduce her to the gang. What will be thier reaction to someone who truly tamed the PORTER. Please continue.
I love Tina the hunter :-) I really enjoyed the first chap 11 but this one is even better.
Wow, what a rewrite. This was intense in it’s intensity! Your words were so vivid–what a nice fantasy sequence for the show it would be!!!
11 was wonderful… but OMG 11b was WOW & amazing … you know I’m hooked THANK YOU!!!
Damn so hot and sexy,love it. Post soon, thanks!