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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 11b
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“Kiss me” pleaded Bette desperately,
“Lions don’t kiss baby!” Tina teased as moving forwards, alternately placed gentle small licks, then Firm wide licks all the way up Bette’s thigh, until reaching her hips, where she proceeded to take a small patch of perfect skin between her teeth nipping her gently. Tina watched in fascination as her teeth left a small mark on Bette, before swirling her tongue around and around the redness.
For all Bette’s experience with women and her undoubted oral skills, she had never allowed another woman to taste her, preferring digital stimulation. So imagine Bette’s surprise when she closed her eyes, wishing that Tina’s tongue was swirling around her centre. Bette unconsciously lifted her hips, sending a silent message to Tina about what she needed her to do.
Meantime, Tina was rapidly losing control of her senses. Tina felt the raw lust course through her body, God she wanted Bette so badly She wanted to feel every inch of her body, feel her quiver at her touch.
Tina travelled further up Bette’s body, repeating the biting then licking process across Bette’s abdomen, Feeling her twitch at each touch.
Tina reached Bette’s ***** and like a starved animal, lowered her head and latched onto Bette’s left breast, sucking it with fervour.
Bette’s senses hit overload, the sensation of Tina’s mouth attached forcefully to her breast nearly driving her over the edge there and then. “GOD!” She exclaimed excitedly, “HARDER” she practically screamed holding the back of Tina’s head as she arched her back, pushing, pressing her breast even further into Tina’s mouth.
Tina needed to taste her, she needed to take her arousal into her mouth and taste her sweet nectar.
Reluctantly removing her mouth from Bette’s breast, Tina looked up at Bette, her eyes sending a silent request to Bette to confirm that she was ok with the way this game was going, and seeing the almost indiscernible nod from Bette, quickly moved her hands, palms outwards in between Bette’s thighs firmly pulling her legs apart.
Tina slid lower down, until she came into contact with Bette’s inner thighs, her teeth occasionally nipping at Bette’s soft skin, the soft whimpers of pain and desire driving her mouth higher.
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Stunned and amazing great post!!!!!!!!
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
K
WOW, that was one of the hottest chaps I have ever read. Perfect! Love this story, don’t stay away so long. Can’t wait for more.
Thanks, I really enjoy reading this story..keep it up pls…
“The best writing is rewriting.” — E. B. White
Hey, tbsaver! Please never apologize for wanting to make your work the best it can be. You have the right to alter your work until you’re satisfied with the final product and wholeheartedly proud to call it your own. Kudos to you for expecting the best from yourself. Amazing revision. I also enjoyed the previous version, but I agree with you that manifesting Bette and Tina’s emotions made their connection even more special. Thanks for all your hard work!
“and no matter how much you squeak…………I decide how we play the game! Understand? – YIKES!!!
Glad to see that I am not the only one stuttering around here. I can now say that I have at least one thing in common with Bette!
You were right, by the way. The first chapter 11 was wonderful, but this one is definitely true to your story. No matter how vivid a sex scene is written…the build up, the sensualness of the actual act in itself, is so much more fulfilling when we can share in the emotions and thoughts of the characters. One of the reasons I think that reading a well written sex scene is much more of a turn on, than watching it on screen. Thank you for this shot of adrenaline before bed!! :)
Great chapter T.B. I love this story and miss you when you were away. This is the first B/T story that I have read where they are pretty much equals from the onset (They are both already lesbians and neither one is turning the other out.), and have thier own strong sexual histories. I would love to see what happens when Bette gets Tina back to the USA and introduce her to the gang. What will be thier reaction to someone who truly tamed the PORTER. Please continue.
I love Tina the hunter :-) I really enjoyed the first chap 11 but this one is even better.
Wow, what a rewrite. This was intense in it’s intensity! Your words were so vivid–what a nice fantasy sequence for the show it would be!!!
11 was wonderful… but OMG 11b was WOW & amazing … you know I’m hooked THANK YOU!!!
Damn so hot and sexy,love it. Post soon, thanks!