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After the Kiss: Chapters 33 to 35 Playing with Fire
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Meg – Oh, I thought you were a lesbian.
Alice – At times, I am, but right now, I wouldn’t mind meeting a cute guy.
Tina – What happened to Cindy?
Bette – I told you … the flavor of the month!
Alice feigns annoyance.
Alice – Cindy doesn’t want commitments.
She turns to Bette.
Alice – Apparently, it is my destiny to get attracted to hot brunettes who don’t want to commit.
The gallery owner narrows her eyes and shakes her head.
Tina looks at the two friends with an amused smile.
Meg – What am I missing?
The producer chuckles.
Tina – They dated in the past.
Bette – Barely!
Alice – For six weeks!
Meg – Oh wow … what an amazing concept! And she became your best friend?
Tina shakes her head.
Tina – I don’t understand it either.
Alice – Yep, it is crazy but it happens a lot around here.
Bette – Well, we are a small community. We tend to keep relationships.
Alice – Way after they are over! It’s like an annoying habit that you can’t let go.
The gallery owner chuckles.
Bette – So, you turn her into your annoying best friend.
Meg and Tina laugh.
Alice – Tina, you need to tell me what I’m doing wrong with Cindy. How did you change this one?
Bette and Tina look into each other’s eyes and smile warmly. The producer caresses her girlfriend’s hand.
Tina – It was fate …
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Bette’s front door, afternoon: Bette comes in followed by Tina, Meg and Alice.
Bette – Welcome to my home!
Meg – It’s a beautiful home, Bette! And so much art!
Bette – Thanks!
The producer chuckles.
Tina – It’s like a mini gallery.
Bette – Tee … do you mind preparing some drinks while I show Meg the house?
Tina – Sure.
Alice – I’ll help you.
Tina and Alice walk over to the kitchen while the gallery owner gives Meg a tour of the house.
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Bette’s bedroom, afternoon: Bette comes in followed by Meg.
Bette – And this is our bedroom … I mean …
She looks at Meg with a shy smile.
Bette – … my bedroom.
Meg smiles back.
Meg – Hmm … I take it that she is here often …
She walks over to the window and looks at the yard.
Meg – That’s a nice view!
The gallery owner stands by her side.
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Happy Holidays dbff!!!
I am happy you already did the rewrite, it would be very sad if you let your inspiration freeze by Gen Q.
I truly enjoy this rewrite!
Shane! Great way to introduce her :-) Meg is right, Tina is full of love and adopts Shane right away as her little sister. I love how you put the gang together one by one. Btw I can’t remember if the show ever explained how Shane became Bette’s friend. Did they ever?
Tina is spending quite some time at Bette’s house. Nice how T + B seem to get closer naturally. “..and this is our bedroom.” Too cute!
Happy Holidays to you too and thanks for posting. Do you really only have 7 ch left? Oh I’d wish you had more. Or another story in the making. I really like your story ideas!
Merry Christmas! and Thank you for the update!
I agree about Gec Q – i’m not watching but sometimes after their “news” i have a hard time even read Tibette’s story. And i may only guess how hard and uninspirid it can be for writers, who tried to write Tibette’s stories.
Sad.
I like that Tina is making friends with Shane. I am beginning to see Tina as a good judge of people. She sees the positive attributes in people and possibly the potential in individuals. I just hope that Bette will learn some of this as well.
Peter Pan – that was a hilarious reference. Its very hard to write humor. But this was good…
Thanks for this chapter…. Happy Christmas.
This is the times that we NEED these stories the most. Keep hope alive & so much praise and gratitude to the writers who continue with their efforts.
dbff,
listen to YOUR 4evah fans bc we KNOW a classy Author when we read her words!!
Frickin’ Bette is too damn funny when it comes to Tina…especially in a bar!! She soon as burn a whole in anybody with a “lazor look” and not give 2 flips who has to parish!!! HeHeHe!!!!!
She ain’t likely to apologize about her alpha-ness when Tina is being pursued. Tho I think she may convince her to cut Shane some slack.
Tina knows all she has to do is tell Bette to “c’mere” with a soft southern drawl and she’ll settle down immediately.
Hi,
So happy to see rewrite complete before the cold water of the new Show!
Loving this and hope you will continue writing to rectify the new show as it unwinds.
Thanks for the post, have I mentioned how much I love this Story?:-)
SG
dbff
Keep reading! I think you can make the story longer than seven chapters, but if you start a new one that is good too. Enjoy all your stories…
Meant to say “Keep writing” not keep reading…. :)
“The producer pouts looking at Bette.
Tina – You didn’t save anything for me …?
Bette – I saved love for you.”
Now that’s one of the loveliest answer I ever read in a fanfiction ! Simply lovely…
I always felt that our dearest Bette was deeply a romantic nature but her numerous emotional scars never let her feel safe enough to take the risk to love someone – until her soulmate appear in her life, Tina.
Bette is so the opposite of Shane, who is the only true womanizer and player of the gang.
She just didn’t believe in love because of her family, that’s all.
Great chapter again, I love your story so much !!
Faithfully yours – A.