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After the storm.. the rainbow ch 07
Bette: (in Tina’s arms) oh god! please god don’t do this to me I can’t l live without him
Tina: shh baby he is going to be fine. Can we see him, please?
Dr carter: yes you have a few minutes before his CT
Bette and Tina entered the room John was laying with an oxygen mask on him
Bette: (crying) oh god! Baby is mamma, please wake up baby, don’t scare us like this. Please be fine
Tina: John baby, is mommy wake up honey we are going to take you to the park (crying)
The nurse: I’m sorry maam we have to take him to do some exams
Tina: (wiping her tears) can we please go with him?
Nurse: yeah no problem you can go with him but you have to wait outside the room
Meanwhile in the hall the gang entered the awaiting area
Dana: oh god Alice what happened?
Shane: easy Al, he is going to be fine, he is Bette and Tina’s kid, he is strong
Dana: did Bette and Tina know something about him?
Dana: shh baby he is going to be fine and Bette is just afraid
Shane: I have to call Kit she stayed at home with Eve and she asked me to call her with news
Back to the waiting area of the exams room Bette was pacing uncontrollably and Tina was sitting on a chair
Tina: Bette I’m so scared
Bette: I’m too.. he will never ever going to got out without one of us again ever
Tina: babe, I know what you thinking, but this was not
Bette: well it looks it doesn’t worked very much
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(62 votes, average: 4.24 out of 5)
You and Lauren are on a contest about who post more lately? At least your drama ended here. Another great chapter. Thanks.
btw Dr. Carter? You are seeing a lot of ER, huh? lol. Good job with the medical drama.
Great as always, thank heavens that John made it through. As for me being mean? I doubt it… LOL I’m just taking the story where it wants to go… post soon LOL ;)
Thanks for not letting anything happen to John. Tina nor Bette would be able to handle something like that. Thanks for the post.
Great chapter, thankyou, for keeping John alive, it is nice to see, as everyone seems to be killing someone off. Looking forward to your next chapter.
ok pandora… all is forgiven… i still love you and your story… so now he wants a puppy… get him one of those virtual puppies… you don’t have to walk it.. feed it… or clean up after it… my kind of pet… later baby
Thank you, thank you, thank you……if anything had happened to John I would have stopped reading right here! I am glad in he mentioned that all of this was his fault for not obeying Alice! Kudos to you Pan!!
you know pandora…i think all of you fanfic authors have it in you to kill us. : ) thanks for the post and can’t wait for the next.
Love that John. Thanks for keeping his sense of humor in tact ;-)
Thank god Jonh is ok and thank you for not killing him. Well this is just an accident and no one want that had happen right, and hope Bette will talk to Alice. Ok post soon please, thanks! Oh I have 1 question is Tina, Jonh birth mother or Bette?
kovac and carter, eh? lol. thx 4 not killing john… hehe alices fate on the other hand im not too sure abt :P
thanks for not killing the little man,bette needs to go apoligize to alice she is hurting right know.
I am so lovin you right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great post!!!!!!!!!!!
God I felt bad for Alice…I am glad John is ok and Bette is going to forgiv Alice…Always like a little drama, please post soon…thanks a bunch
hey baby, why you said he was dead? i didnt deserve this, youre going to pay, lol, great baby as always
i was so worried about john that i missed the carter and kovac references — thank you for not being as mean as lauren25…
aaawww poor Al.. but i understand Bette’s fear too.. gimmie more ;)
Glad to see that John is ok…..Now big him home along with the puppy…LOL…Post soon!
hey you – am reading this while on msn to you as well i love your story its so funny and sweet i see you took the sdvise about the drama must add tho that i dont advocate hitting children with cars lol glad little john is alive post soon hun