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After the storm.. the rainbow ch 07
The door opened and the Dr came to talk to them
Dr Carter: well it seems he didn’t have any serious injure in his head, his brain has no damage, just a mild swallow, now we are going to reduce the medication, it will be a matter of time to wait for him to wake up, we are going to continue to monitor his vital signals and he is going to remain in oxygen mask just for precaution until he wake and can breathe 100% by himself
Tina: thank God and thank you doctor
Bette: do you know when he will wake up?
Dr Carter: we can’t know that for sure it will come in his own time, he is going to a room in pediatric area, you can go with him, don’t worry he is in good hands
Tina: thank you doctor
John was transferred into a private room and Tina went to talk to the gang, they were impatiently waiting for news
Shane: (walking to her) Tina, how is he?
Tina: he has not any serious damage, they will stop the medication to put him out of the coma he still didn’t wake up yet, but the doctor said he will be fine
All of them: thank god
Tina: I know Al, the only thing it matters now is his safety, pray for him, all of you and go home, I will try to convince Bette to go home too, Eve will be hungry soon and we didn’t let enough of milk bottles for her
Shane: well, that will be hard
Back to the room, Bette was by the side of the bed gently playing with John’s hair
Tina: babe?
Bette: yes?
Tina: babe you need to go home Eve will be hungry soon and she will need you
Bette: he needs me here too I don’t wait him to wake up and not find me here
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(62 votes, average: 4.24 out of 5)
You and Lauren are on a contest about who post more lately? At least your drama ended here. Another great chapter. Thanks.
btw Dr. Carter? You are seeing a lot of ER, huh? lol. Good job with the medical drama.
Great as always, thank heavens that John made it through. As for me being mean? I doubt it… LOL I’m just taking the story where it wants to go… post soon LOL ;)
Thanks for not letting anything happen to John. Tina nor Bette would be able to handle something like that. Thanks for the post.
Great chapter, thankyou, for keeping John alive, it is nice to see, as everyone seems to be killing someone off. Looking forward to your next chapter.
ok pandora… all is forgiven… i still love you and your story… so now he wants a puppy… get him one of those virtual puppies… you don’t have to walk it.. feed it… or clean up after it… my kind of pet… later baby
Thank you, thank you, thank you……if anything had happened to John I would have stopped reading right here! I am glad in he mentioned that all of this was his fault for not obeying Alice! Kudos to you Pan!!
you know pandora…i think all of you fanfic authors have it in you to kill us. : ) thanks for the post and can’t wait for the next.
Love that John. Thanks for keeping his sense of humor in tact ;-)
Thank god Jonh is ok and thank you for not killing him. Well this is just an accident and no one want that had happen right, and hope Bette will talk to Alice. Ok post soon please, thanks! Oh I have 1 question is Tina, Jonh birth mother or Bette?
kovac and carter, eh? lol. thx 4 not killing john… hehe alices fate on the other hand im not too sure abt :P
thanks for not killing the little man,bette needs to go apoligize to alice she is hurting right know.
I am so lovin you right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great post!!!!!!!!!!!
God I felt bad for Alice…I am glad John is ok and Bette is going to forgiv Alice…Always like a little drama, please post soon…thanks a bunch
hey baby, why you said he was dead? i didnt deserve this, youre going to pay, lol, great baby as always
i was so worried about john that i missed the carter and kovac references — thank you for not being as mean as lauren25…
aaawww poor Al.. but i understand Bette’s fear too.. gimmie more ;)
Glad to see that John is ok…..Now big him home along with the puppy…LOL…Post soon!
hey you – am reading this while on msn to you as well i love your story its so funny and sweet i see you took the sdvise about the drama must add tho that i dont advocate hitting children with cars lol glad little john is alive post soon hun