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Against All Odds – Chapter 16
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She wanted incredible power. She wanted to be loved. She wanted Bette to fall at her knees and worship her for eternity. She wanted Amy . . . just plain wanted her.
Was that all really so bad?
Jodi looked at Amy and sighed, placing a hand on the delicate cheek of her lover.
"I’m sorry . . I just-"
The door burst open and Dana barged in, her armor clanging together. Jodi dropped her head and growled low in her throat.
"Didn’t I tell you that I did not want to be disturbed?"
Jodi’s tone alone would have made anyone quiver in fear but Dana simply said, "You were right. She came"
Jodi turned her head and looked at her soldier puppet, "Alone?"
Dana crossed her arms over her chest and pursed her lips, "You know Bette is much smarter than that"
Jodi narrowed her eyes at Dana, "Mind your tongue, slave"
Dana was about to say something smart when she felt a sharp pain run through her body. Her bones felt as if liquid metal poured over them and prevented any movement. She felt hollow inside, not even her mouth obeyed her. Then again, when Jodi took control, Dana’s body never obeyed her.
Jodi walked toward Dana with a smug smile on her lips, "Remember last time when you stepped out of line with me? Do you remember what I did to you, hmm?"
Dana couldn’t speak but let out a loud moan in pain, muffled by her closed lips. She fell to her knees and looked up at the woman before her as her insides felt like they were being burned. Every so often, Jodi’s hold on her would wear off somewhat and Dana was able to speak and walk on her own. She cherished those moments because they never lasted long and whenever Jodi took control once again, all Dana wanted to do was scream.
Jodi crouched down and placed a finger under Dana’s chin, "Does it hurt, my slave?"
She saw Dana’s lips quiver and the pain in her eyes, she smiled.
"Good. Now get out there and prepare for battle. This time, I want you to kill anyone you cross paths with. Understand?"
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I cannot tell you how much I love this story.. cant wait for more!! I hope that Amy helping Tina isnt a trap to get jodi to notice her and praise her and love her… GO BETTE KICK JODI’S EVIL ASS! Thanks Liah for this amazing fantasy story.
Ow! I hope Tina can be rescued by Bette soon! before that, and I hope Amy isn’t as psychotic as Jodi to have some twisted plan of playing their game of love. Ugh Liah, can’t you see I’m on the edge already?? I only hang on hope here!! >_< ..... Lol.. Hopefully you'll update soon!! ;-) thanks for this wonderful update btw :-)
This story is so awesome and I’m just sitting at the edge of my seat. Wonderful. Thank you.
Thank you for this story and the frequent updates well done!
Awesome battle scenes, loved it. I hope Amy at least gets Tina to Bette before Jodi shows up. And I hope that Tina really has figured out whatever it is that can take Jodi down. Great work! Thank you :)
Great update, loved it.
Oh damn this is so good and hope Tina get to Bette before jodi stop them. Please post more, thanks!
😱 OMG I almost missed this story. I get a little sad when I hear my favorite stories winding down. What a fun ride this was. You continue to do a great job of keeping us in suspense, on the edge of our seats and just plain old entertained. I’m so happy you’ve chosen this site as an outlet for your imagination. Thank you Miss Liah 😘
Good,thank you.PPS