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Against All Odds – Chapter 16
After several minutes, the battle died down and the last Breeon was killed. Bette, Shane, Kit and Tasha took several moments to collect themselves and catch their breaths as cheering erupted in the forest.
Bette looked around and saw the group of Motars huddled together, a line of cheering Ogres, and a mixture of celebrating Lyrus, sneaky Frog-like monsters called Froilings. She looked up into the trees and saw Shane looking down to her, nodding in approval beside a group of Elves.
Bette stood up straight and sheathed her two swords, taking one last breath before calling out to her comrades.
"Alright everyone! There will be time for celebration when all this is over. Take your formations!"
Growls and war cries rang out through the forest as the army split into groups. Shane dropped down from her tree beside Bette as Tasha and Kit ran up to them.
"Okay" Bette took a breath "We don’t have much time, the rest of her army has to be on alert by now"
Tasha, Shane and Kit walked over to join their respective groups. Tasha was with the Motars and Ogres, they were leading the front line. Shane was with the Elven archers and Kit stood beside the Elven mages.
Bette took a deep breath and took one last look at those that stood before her.
"I wish I had some encouraging speech to give you all . . but the truth is I don’t. This battle will probably one of the fiercest any of you have ever encountered . . many of you may not even make it out alive"
Bette’s words were very grave but spoke with such confidence and strength, all anyone could do was stand there and listen. Not a sound was made by anyone.
"It takes a great deal of courage to stand before me today, to be willing to fight by my side. I cannot express how grateful I am"
She looked at her friends as they each gave her a soft smile.
"My lover is in there . . taken from me by the hands of the very Empress who I’m sure has taken someone from you all as well. This woman is a monster, she has shown no mercy to anyone she’s crossed paths with and today, we will show her the same courtesy she has bestowed upon us. So I ask you now . . are you with me?!"
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(28 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)
I cannot tell you how much I love this story.. cant wait for more!! I hope that Amy helping Tina isnt a trap to get jodi to notice her and praise her and love her… GO BETTE KICK JODI’S EVIL ASS! Thanks Liah for this amazing fantasy story.
Ow! I hope Tina can be rescued by Bette soon! before that, and I hope Amy isn’t as psychotic as Jodi to have some twisted plan of playing their game of love. Ugh Liah, can’t you see I’m on the edge already?? I only hang on hope here!! >_< ..... Lol.. Hopefully you'll update soon!! ;-) thanks for this wonderful update btw :-)
This story is so awesome and I’m just sitting at the edge of my seat. Wonderful. Thank you.
Thank you for this story and the frequent updates well done!
Awesome battle scenes, loved it. I hope Amy at least gets Tina to Bette before Jodi shows up. And I hope that Tina really has figured out whatever it is that can take Jodi down. Great work! Thank you :)
Great update, loved it.
Oh damn this is so good and hope Tina get to Bette before jodi stop them. Please post more, thanks!
😱 OMG I almost missed this story. I get a little sad when I hear my favorite stories winding down. What a fun ride this was. You continue to do a great job of keeping us in suspense, on the edge of our seats and just plain old entertained. I’m so happy you’ve chosen this site as an outlet for your imagination. Thank you Miss Liah 😘
Good,thank you.PPS