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All For Believing – 2
I follow them to Angelica’s room. Tina sits on a chair and starts feeding Angie. She is totally ignoring the fact that I’m standing next to her.. wait, what is she doing? NO, she isn’t.. "what the ***** Tina! You’re covering yourself from who? ME?? I’m Angelica’s mother and your wife. I have every right to stand here and watch you both".. Ok Bette, keep it together… not now, you will talk to her later….I try to hide my frustration by leaving the room before I totally lose it..
uum are you hungry? Well I’m sure you are. What are you feeling like having for dinner??
I ate an hour ago. I’m not hungry, you –
But Tina, I thought dinner was reserved for us to have some time together, I know –
Bette, all I wanna do now is get out of these clothes, take a shower and hit the sack.. I’m too tired..
She didn’t just say what I think she did, did she? At this moment I’m beyond mad..
Tina, that’s not fair.. you’re –
Would you please keep your voice down? I’m trying to get her to sleep..
I can’t take this any more. I leave the room and go to the kitchen. I open the fridge door look inside and shut it again. I feel like screaming, but, I can’t.. I go to the bathroom, splash some water on my face, I’m feeling a little bit better.. I see Tina putting Angie down as I pass by the nursery to go to our room.. I start pacing. I know she’ll enter the room sooner or later.. I was right, here she comes..
Will you tell me what’s going on?
What are you talking about?
Tina, cut that bullshit. I’ve had enough of it already..
When she doesn’t answer that kills me the most. She wasn’t like that when we first got back together?? She takes her towel and heads to the door.. Tonight, I’m not gonna let her do what she wants. Tonight, things will be my way.. I move to the door before she reaches it. She looks up at me for the first time since she came back home..
Tina, you said we need to talk, and I think you’re totally right.. we really should talk..
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(60 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
wow..Tina that was mean woman…if Tina dosent want to talk.. dosent want to Bette touch her..kiss her..what the hell she is doing with her??? the simple fact they have a child together dosent mean they have to stay together they have to stay together cuz they love each other not for obligation..great chappy sad but great thanks
Angst to the max. Great writing.
If I was Bette I would grap my coat and hat and bale out. Tina shouldn’t keep throwing the past in her face when she was doing the same thing. Tina should just tell her to leave. Feel sorry for both,but more so Bette she has the most to lose Angie and Tina, thanks
Read both of your chapters. Very good writing indeed. So, full of strong emotions. When you were bored, you churned out a chapter that got all those praises and when you were in a bad mood, you’ve churned out another equally good chapter that is so full of angst. You really should continue. I’m looking forward to whatever mood you’re in. Thanks.
i no tina is upset that she is the only one working right know and theres a extra mouth to feed so to speak.but i
remember when bette was the only one working she didnt complain.so if tina u are not happy pack the baby and u both leave.
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this chapter created the potential for something very interesting.
contrary to your author’s note there seems to be reason & meaning to
“All For Believing”… feels as if you do know where you want to go with this, it’s only a matter of deciding how to get there…
haha…looks like you and a bad mood make for an even better story LOL…
first attempt & completely self-taught in English [your postings show you have grown in the language] and already your own style…original take on B&T as you did with the MusicVids [& always neatly finished].
am i singing your praises here ?
you bet !
ok, it was actually in one of your postings that you said you didn’t know where you were going with this story and not in the Author’s Note.
Fa6 you know I love you, but you better post another chapter soon or else… I’m really enjoying your writting.
Wow this is good and love it. Post soon please, thanks!
i’m with albeez, why did i read it before bed? now i’m gonna have nightmares…you better make it right girl, i know for a fact that you are totally addicted to B&T and i have prove, copies of all of your posts from media blvd LOL…fix this please and next time write when you are in a good mood
have no words for that. jeez i didnt need to read that before i went to sleep.
holy shit omg damn!! damn damn damn this is crazy i need to go read ur first chapter!!! continue soon
ooooft, really needed to not read that just before leaving for uni for the day, im gonna be in a stinker of a mood all day now, sorry i didnt realise u were in a bad mood last night, i could have cheered u up ;) :D :p
great chapter, just a tad scarey theme… eep..
hope u continue :) I will have to commence whipping again to make sure huh;)
Always nice to see another version of ‘what if’ from B&T’s past… It’ll be great to see how this unfolds!
Hope you continue this story
I can really feel Bettes frustration through your writing, great job. Wow, they have got soooo much work ahead of them.
Very powerful. I’m curious to see where you take this.
It’s full of pain, confusion and conflict. I love each single word of your story. Please post again soon.
WOW! That’s all I can say…I did not see that ending coming whatsoever… could not stop reading til the end…Being a very “visual” person…I saw ME in the mirror…i certainly could feel Bette..You hit it on the nail.
I do hope you continue writing the story..good mood or bad, it doesn’t matter..we can take the drama
Your chapter is filled with so much that wasn’t said in the show. This is the kind of drama I wish I’d seen. I don’t think we will…………….
Thanks for writing your perspective. I hope you continue. I hope Bette and Tina will be able to resolve what is keeping them apart.
wow I didn’t see that coming. This was an excellent peice of writing. I will say that I hope in your story that Bette doesn’t just let Tina walk all over her. their downfall was just as much Tina’s fault as it was Bette’s and it gets a little old when alot of these stories make Bette chase Tina.
so it will be interesting to see how you will portray these 2. keep it up.
tina can be so fucking bipolar at time gosh so frustrating and to throw that comment back at bette like that…not cool