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All For Believing – 2
I have nothing to talk about, so, would you please move?
Tina, stop doing this.. what’s wrong with you? What is going on? I need to know.. we were doing just fine this morning –
I really am tired, don’t you understand? You better than anyone else knows how wasted one can be after spending 8 hours at work..
Well, I think you should leave your job and stay home with Angelica.. she’s still an infant –
What? You got to be kidding me. You are unemployed. Where the ***** will we get the money to feed our selves if I leave my job??
I’m getting job offers. I’ll accept the best one and start working again soon. You won’t have to be away from Angelica. You know she needs you more than she needs me –
Bette, it’s not about Angie. It’s about you and what you need.. It’s never been about anything or anyone but you..
That is absolutely ridiculous! So that is what you think of me? Huh, Tina? You think that I don’t care about Angie or you? If I didn’t, then why the ***** do you think I’m still here??
My voice is growing higher with each word. I can’t help it.. and she’s still not giving me a ***** answer.. She tries to move to the side and pass by me.. I reach for her arm and hold it tightly..
You’re not going anywhere before you answer me..
She shakes her arm trying to get it out of my grip which I’ve tightened..
Bette let go of me! I said I don’t wanna talk –
No Tina! We will talk. I can’t go on like this. WE can’t go on like this.. So we’ll talk NOW or –
Or what Bette? Or you’ll ***** up again? Or you’ll go hook up with some random girl in her twenties in NY?
I loosen my grip on her arm which gives her the chance to take it out of my hand..
What? Who..? Tina.. How… ?
Save it Bette –
No, you wanna talk about that? Ok fine… I don’t know how the ***** you know about that NY girl but you have no right to judge me. We were separated when it happened, and, you made it clear that you didn’t want anything to do with me..
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(60 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
wow..Tina that was mean woman…if Tina dosent want to talk.. dosent want to Bette touch her..kiss her..what the hell she is doing with her??? the simple fact they have a child together dosent mean they have to stay together they have to stay together cuz they love each other not for obligation..great chappy sad but great thanks
Angst to the max. Great writing.
If I was Bette I would grap my coat and hat and bale out. Tina shouldn’t keep throwing the past in her face when she was doing the same thing. Tina should just tell her to leave. Feel sorry for both,but more so Bette she has the most to lose Angie and Tina, thanks
Read both of your chapters. Very good writing indeed. So, full of strong emotions. When you were bored, you churned out a chapter that got all those praises and when you were in a bad mood, you’ve churned out another equally good chapter that is so full of angst. You really should continue. I’m looking forward to whatever mood you’re in. Thanks.
i no tina is upset that she is the only one working right know and theres a extra mouth to feed so to speak.but i
remember when bette was the only one working she didnt complain.so if tina u are not happy pack the baby and u both leave.
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this chapter created the potential for something very interesting.
contrary to your author’s note there seems to be reason & meaning to
“All For Believing”… feels as if you do know where you want to go with this, it’s only a matter of deciding how to get there…
haha…looks like you and a bad mood make for an even better story LOL…
first attempt & completely self-taught in English [your postings show you have grown in the language] and already your own style…original take on B&T as you did with the MusicVids [& always neatly finished].
am i singing your praises here ?
you bet !
ok, it was actually in one of your postings that you said you didn’t know where you were going with this story and not in the Author’s Note.
Fa6 you know I love you, but you better post another chapter soon or else… I’m really enjoying your writting.
Wow this is good and love it. Post soon please, thanks!
i’m with albeez, why did i read it before bed? now i’m gonna have nightmares…you better make it right girl, i know for a fact that you are totally addicted to B&T and i have prove, copies of all of your posts from media blvd LOL…fix this please and next time write when you are in a good mood
have no words for that. jeez i didnt need to read that before i went to sleep.
holy shit omg damn!! damn damn damn this is crazy i need to go read ur first chapter!!! continue soon
ooooft, really needed to not read that just before leaving for uni for the day, im gonna be in a stinker of a mood all day now, sorry i didnt realise u were in a bad mood last night, i could have cheered u up ;) :D :p
great chapter, just a tad scarey theme… eep..
hope u continue :) I will have to commence whipping again to make sure huh;)
Always nice to see another version of ‘what if’ from B&T’s past… It’ll be great to see how this unfolds!
Hope you continue this story
I can really feel Bettes frustration through your writing, great job. Wow, they have got soooo much work ahead of them.
Very powerful. I’m curious to see where you take this.
It’s full of pain, confusion and conflict. I love each single word of your story. Please post again soon.
WOW! That’s all I can say…I did not see that ending coming whatsoever… could not stop reading til the end…Being a very “visual” person…I saw ME in the mirror…i certainly could feel Bette..You hit it on the nail.
I do hope you continue writing the story..good mood or bad, it doesn’t matter..we can take the drama
Your chapter is filled with so much that wasn’t said in the show. This is the kind of drama I wish I’d seen. I don’t think we will…………….
Thanks for writing your perspective. I hope you continue. I hope Bette and Tina will be able to resolve what is keeping them apart.
wow I didn’t see that coming. This was an excellent peice of writing. I will say that I hope in your story that Bette doesn’t just let Tina walk all over her. their downfall was just as much Tina’s fault as it was Bette’s and it gets a little old when alot of these stories make Bette chase Tina.
so it will be interesting to see how you will portray these 2. keep it up.
tina can be so fucking bipolar at time gosh so frustrating and to throw that comment back at bette like that…not cool