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All For Believing – 2
Oh really? Then why the ***** did you keep on asking me back, and, telling me all that bullshit about me being the love of your life and that you want no one other than me? Tell me Bette!
Tina, that is totally unfair –
What I think is unfair is you lying to me; telling me that you still love me and at the same time you were sleeping around.. Tell me Bette, how many others were there?
Tina there were no others. I’m sorry. I was drunk and you were divorcing me. There was no hope for me at all.. Hey wait! Why the ***** am I explaining myself to you anyway? You’re not innocent yourself.. You kept sleeping with Helena for months and then manipulated me by asking to date me. But you still refused to stop seeing her.. How do you think that made me feel??
So you think I manipulated you?? Is that what I get for being honest with you from the beginning? Oh, now I get it. You regret what happened between us??
No, T. You know how much I loved it.. But it doesn’t mean that it didn’t affect me in some way..
You know what? This is not going anywhere.. I’m outta here..
Just when she reaches the door, I reach for her wrist, spin her around, push her to the wall, and start kissing her.. She kisses me back. I can feel the kiss getting more passionate. God, how I’ve missed her lips. I can’t have enough of them.. What? Oh no! She stops kissing me back and tries to pull away.. Maybe she needs to catch her breath..
No Bette.. No..
C’mon T, you know you want to..I’ve missed you baby..
She is trying to push me away, but I don’t move an inch.. I start silding my hand under her shirt while my mouth is nibbiling her ear lobe..
Bette no.. Please Bette..
She is still struggling. I know that if I can keep her here for one more minute, she’ll give up to her needs, and to mine..I see it in her eyes. She needs me as much as I need her.. and I’m sure things will get better once I make love to her. She’ll calm down and hopefully she’ll open up.. I try to unhook her bra from under her shirt, while whispering in her ear..
Baby, I love you.. I’ve missed you so much, I know you’ve missed me too..
Bette stop it.. PLEASE stop..
She stops struggling, I think she’s giving up. Suddenly her voice is too sharp..
Are you going to force yourself on me again.. ??
I stop…step back.. My heart is beating like it never did before and the blood is rushing to my face.. I look at her in disbelief.. she doesn’t move. She just stares back at me..
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(60 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
wow..Tina that was mean woman…if Tina dosent want to talk.. dosent want to Bette touch her..kiss her..what the hell she is doing with her??? the simple fact they have a child together dosent mean they have to stay together they have to stay together cuz they love each other not for obligation..great chappy sad but great thanks
Angst to the max. Great writing.
If I was Bette I would grap my coat and hat and bale out. Tina shouldn’t keep throwing the past in her face when she was doing the same thing. Tina should just tell her to leave. Feel sorry for both,but more so Bette she has the most to lose Angie and Tina, thanks
Read both of your chapters. Very good writing indeed. So, full of strong emotions. When you were bored, you churned out a chapter that got all those praises and when you were in a bad mood, you’ve churned out another equally good chapter that is so full of angst. You really should continue. I’m looking forward to whatever mood you’re in. Thanks.
i no tina is upset that she is the only one working right know and theres a extra mouth to feed so to speak.but i
remember when bette was the only one working she didnt complain.so if tina u are not happy pack the baby and u both leave.
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this chapter created the potential for something very interesting.
contrary to your author’s note there seems to be reason & meaning to
“All For Believing”… feels as if you do know where you want to go with this, it’s only a matter of deciding how to get there…
haha…looks like you and a bad mood make for an even better story LOL…
first attempt & completely self-taught in English [your postings show you have grown in the language] and already your own style…original take on B&T as you did with the MusicVids [& always neatly finished].
am i singing your praises here ?
you bet !
ok, it was actually in one of your postings that you said you didn’t know where you were going with this story and not in the Author’s Note.
Fa6 you know I love you, but you better post another chapter soon or else… I’m really enjoying your writting.
Wow this is good and love it. Post soon please, thanks!
i’m with albeez, why did i read it before bed? now i’m gonna have nightmares…you better make it right girl, i know for a fact that you are totally addicted to B&T and i have prove, copies of all of your posts from media blvd LOL…fix this please and next time write when you are in a good mood
have no words for that. jeez i didnt need to read that before i went to sleep.
holy shit omg damn!! damn damn damn this is crazy i need to go read ur first chapter!!! continue soon
ooooft, really needed to not read that just before leaving for uni for the day, im gonna be in a stinker of a mood all day now, sorry i didnt realise u were in a bad mood last night, i could have cheered u up ;) :D :p
great chapter, just a tad scarey theme… eep..
hope u continue :) I will have to commence whipping again to make sure huh;)
Always nice to see another version of ‘what if’ from B&T’s past… It’ll be great to see how this unfolds!
Hope you continue this story
I can really feel Bettes frustration through your writing, great job. Wow, they have got soooo much work ahead of them.
Very powerful. I’m curious to see where you take this.
It’s full of pain, confusion and conflict. I love each single word of your story. Please post again soon.
WOW! That’s all I can say…I did not see that ending coming whatsoever… could not stop reading til the end…Being a very “visual” person…I saw ME in the mirror…i certainly could feel Bette..You hit it on the nail.
I do hope you continue writing the story..good mood or bad, it doesn’t matter..we can take the drama
Your chapter is filled with so much that wasn’t said in the show. This is the kind of drama I wish I’d seen. I don’t think we will…………….
Thanks for writing your perspective. I hope you continue. I hope Bette and Tina will be able to resolve what is keeping them apart.
wow I didn’t see that coming. This was an excellent peice of writing. I will say that I hope in your story that Bette doesn’t just let Tina walk all over her. their downfall was just as much Tina’s fault as it was Bette’s and it gets a little old when alot of these stories make Bette chase Tina.
so it will be interesting to see how you will portray these 2. keep it up.
tina can be so fucking bipolar at time gosh so frustrating and to throw that comment back at bette like that…not cool