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All I Need (chapter 8)
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“Awhile back you told me I was the most loving person you had ever met, but I think you forgot to take a good look at yourself, because I don’t know a single person who sacrifices herself as much as you do, so when I tell you that there is absolutely no way you could become some hollow shell walking around, I mean every word of it.” Alice once again wrapped her arms around Kerry and lied down with the doctor’s head resting on her chest.
Kerry closed her eyes and allowed Alice’s steady breathing to lull her into a peaceful sleep.
As Kerry dozed off, Alice sat silently trying to wade through the mixture of emotions that were currently creating a whirlpool in her heart. For the first time Kerry had shown Alice her vulnerable side, and it was causing the blonde to understand her own emotions ran deeper than she had previously believed. When Alice had seen Kerry sitting in bed looking defeated, she felt her heart swell with the need to take every ounce of the doctor’s pain away, and when she listened to the hopelessness in Kerry’s words her first instinct was to reassure her with a simple, but meaningful declaration of love. Her lips had begun to form the “I,” but the next word had gotten caught in her throat when an image of Dana briefly distracted her.
The realization that she loved Kerry was shocking, and confusing, because there was no doubt in her mind that she still loved Dana. She had proven that tonight in the tennis player’s car. Alice could still feel the searing sensation that Dana’s fingertips left on her cheek.
Looking down at the woman currently wrapped in her arms, Alice took a deep breath and concentrated on the weight of Kerry’s body pressing against hers. She brought her hand to the tiny amount of bare skin in-between Kerry’s shorts and tank top and began to form tiny circles with her fingers. With each stroke her mind created a life where her love for Kerry was the only that existed in her heart, and Dana was strictly in the friend category, but Alice couldn’t remember a time where her feelings for the tennis player were that simple. Squeezing her eyes shut, Alice reminded herself that Dana had broken her heart and no matter how hard she tried she would never be able to forget about the brunette turning away from her love.
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shit. i really dont want kerry to get hurt. im not sure how you’re going to fenagle this one…
damn…that was really emotional. and fantastic. i can feel alice’s pain and dana’s desperation. what a situation. can’t wait to see how it plays out, you’re brilliant!
Ouch, that was pretty painful for all three of them, but still such a great update! Also congratulations on the job, I just hope it doesn’t prevent you from updating anytime soon, lol. Please post soon:)
oh my god how could you stop there?? i hope you will post soon… i’m hooked on the lezbo drama! amazing work!
Excellent chapter, keep it up. Its heartwrenching but addictive. Lets hope your new job doesnt get in the way of your posts – congrats by the way xxx
Great update – can’t wait to see what happens next. Obviously my biggest hope if that Alice & Dana get together again and soon.
ahhhh well this is hard to fathom they were back literally where they started…back in the bathroom!!
cana is right if alice had chose to let go them there would still be some pain and she would still be in love with dana but only eought to then be able to love someone else but alice is holding on to dana without thinking about it she has told dana her true feeling for kerry but she has not told kerry yet she needs to take a break from both of them so she can make up her mind of who she really wants please post soon great update
hey, great update! lots of angst – poor Kerry, i admit i’m starting to like her too… but not as much as Danish! Look forward to the next installment, it’s good that Al and Dana have been able to be honest about their feelings but I hope that they can resolve their issues soon :) congratulations on the new job!
Im really likin the way Danish are openly taking about their feelings with each other.. even when they are both hurting!! I feel a bit sorry for Kerry because deep down i think she knows that Dana is Alices true love, but because she is so in love with Alice herself she will try to bury it within and try to ignore it. Great story! keep it up. Oh and congrats on the new job!!
well, what else can I say than: excellent. that’s what it is. excellent. keep writing. please.
I must say Danish 103, your right that cop was bored, that’s a sh*&%%y excuse to pull someone over (on behalf of my profession I apologize), hope ya didn’t get an outrageous ticket. That’s lame. Congrat’s on the job!! This is my first time writitng ya, I’m one of those too busy ‘silent readers’ love your fic though. Well, my thoughts, I do think Alice needs some time alone as well. I think that Dana should not back down, but be cautious of her actions, they tend to push Alice further away. I hope they at least can have one good sexy night together, but I’ll take what I can get. Thanx for the posts!! Cheers! Aidan.
Lovely work. I’m really interested to see how all this Danish tension will be fixed… and I’m grudgingly becoming somewhat fond of Kerry so it will be heartbreaking either way. Congrats on your job as well! After that hell of a day you deserve it!
That was one bored cop! But one good thing came out of all the crap that happened, you’ve got the job! Congratulation.s :D This chapter was funny. Lol@ the scene where AlShaDane were bickering over Flavor of Love and Alice ‘comparing’ Dana to a puppy. (In some way she does have a point, Dana will be following her like a puppy.) Why is love always that complicated? I can imagine the struggle Alice is going through. I loved the role reversal, Dana dropping the line ‘Then come back to me.’ Can’t wait to see how you will bring back my two fav girls together.
Danish and bathrooms a lethal combination! They love eachother so much but they both need their space right now. I do feel bad for Kerry but I think deep down she knows that she will never get all of Alice’s heart. Great update and congrats on the new job.
Wow … I just read all 8 chapters in one sitting & I’m really enjoying this fic … eagerly anticipating another update … hopefully soon. I loved the line “Is this close enough? Can you feel the pain you caused me from this position, because I can’t get away from it.” Something about it just resonated with me. Keep up the good work.