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    All Shook Up, Ch. 1

    Story written on October 5, 2005 by Foxfire.
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    Author Notes:

    My beginning of Season 3…six months after Season 2. The ladies meet at The Planet, none of them realizing how shook up their lives are about to become.

     

    “Not our cultured, refined Bette.  Never,” Shane replied, a mock look of surprise on her face.

     

    Kit leaned forward, pursing her lips.  “I’ll have you know that our ‘cultured, refined’ Bette could throw a mean right hook at one time.”

     

    “And you know this how?” Dana asked, eyebrows raised.

     

    “Don’t look at me like that,” Kit protested.  “She couldn’t ever get a punch in on me.  But you could ask Jimmy Meyers back in Philly.”  

     

    Bette reddened slightly, but looked proud nonetheless.  “Seventh grade.  He tried to kiss me, so I decked him.  He went home crying with a bloody nose and a black eye.”

     

    Tina looked at her, eyes wide.  “Gee, babe, I never knew you to be soviolent.”

     

    Bette smiled.  “Not anymore.  Unless necessary.”

     

    “Well, I’m not gonna mess with Bette,” Carmen joked, holding her hands up and pulling away, as if afraid.

     

    “Oh, ha, ha.  That was ages ago,” Bette objected.

     

    “We’re just teasing ya, baby sis,” Kit said, pulling a lock of Bette’s hair affectionately.  As expected, Bette’s hand immediately went up to fix any damage, causing the women at the table to laugh.

     

    Tina grinned and leaned over to kiss Bette’s cheek warmly.  “She’s my little prize fighter.”  She then laid her head on Bette’s shoulder.

     

    Carmen clasped her hands together and cocked her head as she watched Bette first kiss Tina’s head, then lean down to kiss Angelica’s cheek.  “Awww, look how cute they are.”

     

    Alice rolled her eyes.  “You sound like you’re at the zoo.”

     

    “Yeah, admiring a family of monkeys,” Dana continued.

     

    Angelica let loose with a little yawn, her eyes slowly opening and looking around sleepily.  All of the woman at the table, except Bette and Tina, immediately begin cooing and making delighted baby sounds as they all watched Angelica stretch and watch them.

     

    Bette shook her head.  “And they make fun of each other for being sappy?  They all turn into putty as soon as Angelica practically lets out a breath.”

     

    Tina smiled fondly.  “Well, they’re all proud aunts.”

     

    Letting out a little cry, Angelica closed her eyes tightly.

     

    “Uh oh, somebody’s not happy,” Shane observed.

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    1. Love where you’re taking it so far. All the couples trying to work it out. Except Jenny of course. What will they do with her?? Send her back to Chicago?

    8. “Broken” is still around. I just suffered from a bit of writer’s block. I should have another chapter of it done soon. I also want to do more research. I’m aiming for accuracy

    9. great start. i usually read sharnmen fics but you made me read all of yours. i prefer this, all shook up cuz happier than others. i like gangs with baby, i like dana and alice’s argue and… I love shane and carmen’s new residence.
      it’s just awesome. thanks

    10. It’s amazing to me that I like so many fanfiction stories better than the show itself. I loved your Dana and Alice scenes, and for a change, I was interested in reading the other characters’ parts too.

    11. oh oh… i love this story… I love the idea of Shane and Carmen you are putting in my head. I really hope you continue with this story… I want to know all about Shane and Carmen’s new shop/love nest, Bette and Tina’s family, where Alice and Dana are headed. And Jenny too…

    13. I LIKE IT… JUST KEEP TINA AWAY FROM THAT BITCH… so shane is moving out of the house …what will jenny do..sell the house…oh and please not to the bitch…. please continue

    15. OK I’m on this train I’ll take a one way ticket to the end thanks.
      What’s with the earthquake thing. I mean comeon an earthquake in California LOL

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