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    Almost Heaven 9

    Story written on October 16, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    It is watching us, And the world we set on fire.

     

     

     

     

     

    Carmen comes by now and then to watch me fight. I think she has an erotic fixation with my violence. Or maybe I do. When she is around I do my worst to my opponents. Maybe I am trying to show her something about me? Maybe I like what I do. I wonder what this means?

     

     

     

     

    Shamus likes what I do. He tells me all the time how he knew I would do anything for him if I just got enough of a chance.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Some months….maybe a year and couple of more weeks…

      

      

      

      

      

    I can smile. I can drink milkshakes. I can smoke cigarettes while my brother talks to me about his girl troubles. He tells me how much he loves having me around. He tells me that he just wanted to be like me. He tells me that he really likes Carmen for me. He says that she loves me and is loyal and has not given her shit to anyone while I trained.

     

     

     

     

    Her shit?

     

     

     

     

    It doesn’t bother people that I don’t say much. They seem to just want to talk and talk till their tongues dry. He says that my reward is Carmen and my freedom. He says that we all will make a great team together. He says that with all the resources we have, they have stole and murdered for, he says that we, they will live forever.

     

     

     

     

    I let him talk. It’s what he wants to do. He doesn’t want to hear anything anyway. He loves to talk and seem important.

     

     

     

     

    He says that he understands why Carmen killed our parents. He says that it’s the right thing to do. He says that if I could love her and understand her for doing that then it would be a snap for me to love and understand him.

     

     

     

     

    He says a lot of things.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    I wait in my room. I close my little notebook. She is coming. And I am not sure of what will happen. I am not sure of what I have adapted to. What I’ve become. I have no real way of measurement until our eyes meet yet again.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    To be concluded.

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    3. NO! I have feared the end of this story! Well you have writen so many amazing stories, I hope for the best ending, very long hopefully! lolFIVE STARS! *****

    4. Please answer me this, do you do this for a living? Chapter after chapter I’m still captivated by you.I’m suprised that Shane is still in love with Carmen. Love is the last thing I would feel for her. I kind of wish that we would get to see Carmen’s POV a bit, what her feelings are.

    5. i agree with Ragazzi, i am somewhat disappointed by Carmen’s behaviour. She was very passive, very unlike her character, did Shay torture her so much that she is now submissive to him? She left Shane in that horrible place! I am guessing from the title of this story, it’s a set up for unhappy ending. hope I am wrong! Anyways, kudos to you for giving us such intense stories! I am holding my breath until you update this story!! Please don’t let it end so soon… lol

    7. UH OH! Doesn’t seem like they are going to make it work. They’ve barely spoken for nearly a year – YIKES! Unless Carmen in all that time has planned a coup of some kind, to explain her distance, they seem doomed.

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