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    Almost Heaven 9

    Story written on October 16, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    It is watching us, And the world we set on fire.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    “Is this where you where? Carmen? CARMEN!”

     

     

     

     

    “Yes. This is the same cell actually…..didn’t notice that before…..”

     

     

     

     

    “You’re just gonna leave me down here…no explanations…..no…nothing?”

     

     

     

     

    “The walls are listening……”

     

     

     

     

    “So what?”

     

     

     

     

    “You have to adapt to live and survive Shane. I thought you would have gotten that by now. This is the new life, you aren’t a Lost Child anymore, I’m not the Captain of the Guard, we aren’t in New San Diego, this is life now, adapt, survive….live to fight another day….this is it……don’t think about how you use to be…..don’t think about how things are supposed to be, don’t think, sleep when you can…….I’ll see you in six months…..”

     

     

     

     

    “Six months…this is a joke right. you are kidding…..my brother isn’t going to keep me down here for six months……Carmen…..Carmen!”

     

     

     

     

    Clank. Clink.

     

     

     

     

    The door is closed. The light gone with it. In the distance someone is crying. Low too low to hear but I hear.

     

     

     

     

    Chapter Twenty

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    I mark the time on the wall. A little slash into the concrete with that sharp part on my belt buckle. It’s been three days since Carmen left. Not a hint of her, not a sense of her, nothing from the demon inhabiting my brother’s body. Its rains, I can smell it in the air. I wonder where we are.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Four and one.

     

     

     

     

    Its how many more slashes I have been down here. I hear talk. Talk of a fight. The odds where good, word was the there was strong blood lines involved. They mean me of course. Who else would it be?

     

     

     

     

     

    10 and 5.

     

     

     

     

    The fight was good. Good in the way that someone other than me felt pain. Good that I got to see the clouds. Good that I could smell the dirt when my face hit the ground. I could taste it too. The crunch of her bones made me feel special.

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    3. NO! I have feared the end of this story! Well you have writen so many amazing stories, I hope for the best ending, very long hopefully! lolFIVE STARS! *****

    4. Please answer me this, do you do this for a living? Chapter after chapter I’m still captivated by you.I’m suprised that Shane is still in love with Carmen. Love is the last thing I would feel for her. I kind of wish that we would get to see Carmen’s POV a bit, what her feelings are.

    5. i agree with Ragazzi, i am somewhat disappointed by Carmen’s behaviour. She was very passive, very unlike her character, did Shay torture her so much that she is now submissive to him? She left Shane in that horrible place! I am guessing from the title of this story, it’s a set up for unhappy ending. hope I am wrong! Anyways, kudos to you for giving us such intense stories! I am holding my breath until you update this story!! Please don’t let it end so soon… lol

    7. UH OH! Doesn’t seem like they are going to make it work. They’ve barely spoken for nearly a year – YIKES! Unless Carmen in all that time has planned a coup of some kind, to explain her distance, they seem doomed.

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