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    Almost Heaven 9

    Story written on October 16, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    It is watching us, And the world we set on fire.

     

     

     

     

    They walk me to the picnic table and let me eat what I wanted before anyone else. I sit and I eat cool green apples because the color was nice. I drank 12 glasses of water and peed all night on and off.

     

     

     

     

     

    11 and 1

     

     

     

     

     

    I think I miss Hele…I think I dreamed that she was playing handball somewhere.

     

     

    I wonder what it means.

     

     

     

     

     

    63 and 5

     

     

     

     

    I broke my ribs. He broke my ribs. But I broke his face. His nose is flat. He shouldn’t have tried to hit me when my back was turned.

     

     

     

      

      

    63 and 6.

     

     

     

     

    I won the shower and I don’t have to sleep on the floor anymore. Flat nose died.

     

     

     

     

      

      

    Some day. Some week.

     

     

     

     

     

    No more belt. Strangle, strangle. The plan didn’t work. They kick really hard.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Some months….maybe a year?

      

      

      

      

      

    I do what they say. I kill what the want. I eat. I sleep. I use to think about how much I loved the girl. I use to think about how the girl looked pretty and fine. How the girl was sweet and how she shined. Hehe…that rhymes…..heheh. I don’t sleep much in the sun. Too use to the dark. I am a champion or so they say. They say that I am a natural. They say only the boss has a better record. They say that I will be a great member of the group. They loved the one fight when I used an old wire hanger to choke the guy. They say they loved the blood that “gurgled out of his throat” is gurgled a real word?

     

     

     

     

    They let me have a real room. with a nice bed and nice view. They let me have a notebook to write things. I can’t really say much to them till the wires in my jaw get taken out. It hurts to get kicked in the face. It hurts to get your jaw broken in three places. But that blood did bubble up and it was warm on my hands. Then it dried and it didn’t seem so fun anymore. But everyone else laughed and laughed.

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    3. NO! I have feared the end of this story! Well you have writen so many amazing stories, I hope for the best ending, very long hopefully! lolFIVE STARS! *****

    4. Please answer me this, do you do this for a living? Chapter after chapter I’m still captivated by you.I’m suprised that Shane is still in love with Carmen. Love is the last thing I would feel for her. I kind of wish that we would get to see Carmen’s POV a bit, what her feelings are.

    5. i agree with Ragazzi, i am somewhat disappointed by Carmen’s behaviour. She was very passive, very unlike her character, did Shay torture her so much that she is now submissive to him? She left Shane in that horrible place! I am guessing from the title of this story, it’s a set up for unhappy ending. hope I am wrong! Anyways, kudos to you for giving us such intense stories! I am holding my breath until you update this story!! Please don’t let it end so soon… lol

    7. UH OH! Doesn’t seem like they are going to make it work. They’ve barely spoken for nearly a year – YIKES! Unless Carmen in all that time has planned a coup of some kind, to explain her distance, they seem doomed.

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