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Alone part3
“Nothing… its just the trees are cutting my hands… it’s like they know I’m hurting them” (Alice laughs)
“Let me help you” (Alice said walking towards Dana and taking some of the splinters off and putting a kerchief she had on her pocket on Dana’s hand) “there” (Alice said looking strait at Danas eyes. They were really close to each other)
“Thank you … we should get going… Shane must be really ahead by now” (Dana said nervously and started walking again followed by a very confused Alice)
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Shit I’m getting tired of walking… and my hair… I just know that if I see my self in a mirror I will die…where is my fucking gell!!!!!! Wait… what’s that… great I’m talking to myself now… I hear water falling…(so Shane runs till she founds it) … its beautiful… (Shane stopped. Right in front of small river fall) it’s like a pond with a beautiful cascade… shit, there is a woman in there… Carmen? (Carmen was swimming on the beautiful pond. Shane saw this and hid) did I say this was beautiful… well now I say it awesomely beautiful… (What happened next left Shane speechless… Carmen stopped swimming and was now standing on the pond…. But she was naked) ok this is way beyond beautiful… she is so fucking hot… look at that perfect body… I just hope that tonight rains so she’ll be the one asking me to put my hand on her stomach….or other places….ok I really need a cold shower… maybe I can join her…
“OK SHANE WHERE ARE YO- FUCK!!!” (Dana said before falling on top of Shane and so did Alice that was close behind)
“I think you found her Dana”
“Shit guys, what the fuck!!!” (Shane quickly got up)
“Well what the fuck were you doing on the ground on the first place?” (Alice said standing up and helping Dana)
“Yea Shane what were you doing?” (Said a really wet Carmen, but fully dressed)
“The stewardess!!!”
“Carmen… so ‘Shane’ are you going to tell us what were you doing on the ground?”
“Um… I was just…um”
“Oh I see the picture now… bad Shane” (They laughed except Shane)
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(29 votes, average: 3.45 out of 5)
i can ony say loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it more more more more more.omg its great and shane and carmen ohhhh yaaaa, post soon please.
I love this story, please MORE MORE MOREE !! [[:
And of course…HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! O_o
Only, cuz you begged! LOL, JK. I like the idea of the gang stuck/stranded wihout their cellphones LMAO. Or er…food and water…and Planet Coffee. This chappy feels a bit rushed but I suppose it’s alright. I mean how long exactly would we have had to wait for them to find each other and start a fire? I love it. Now they just need to set the place on fire and get rescued. Or…would they actually build a boat? Holy balls of fire! I really wanna see that! Seriously! I think it would be funny as hell…unless you kill someone. Circa season one, I’d nominate Jenny. But I don’t know right now, they’re all prime except for Dana. I mean, she’s doing all the work here. Maybe they should build a shed for shelter and face/hunt some wild animals, then build a boat. I can already imagine Shane’s hair and in fact all their hair with that salt water. Hmm…what do you think about the women using coconut oil(it’s really gross to make) on their hair and skin? Okay, okay, I’m getting wild but you know survival skills are important… I like it when you beg. :D LOL