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Alone part3
“NO!!…. I wasn’t…I…I FELL!!!…. I wasn’t doing that…”
“Doing what?” (Carmen said with a wicked smile on her face)
“…. Ok we don’t have time for this… have you seen the others Carmen?”
“…. No… you are the only living things I seen so far”
“Shit… do you have any ideas where we are?”
“Some where that it’s not Puerto Rico that’s for sure… but no…”
“Do you know the person who did this to us?”
“…. I’m sorry I don’t…. I am new to that agency so I didn’t really know anyone”
“It’s ok… we need to find the others”
“Ok we came this way so let’s keep going north”
“How do you know that way its north Alice?”
“I don’t…” (They all laughed but followed Alice north. Shane and Carmen in front and Alice and Dana behind making the marks on the trees. They walked for about 2 hours. Talking about random stuff)
“What exactly are they doing?” (Carmen asked Shane, pointing to Dana and Alice)
“Um, they are marking the trees”
“… Why?” (They laughed)
“Well Dana wants to make sure we can head back to where we came from”
“What’s so special about it?”
“Well its on the shore and she is convinced that if something happens, like someone trying to kill us, we are going to have to head back and make a boat and get out of here” (again laughing)
“She is watching too many movies… I mean, doesn’t she knows that on every movie they do that, they end up dying?” (Shane laughs)
“Well it’s the only plan we have” (Shane looked at Carmen and smiled)
“…. I can think of other plans for us…” (Shane stopped and looked at Carmen. But the moment was interrupted my a woman’s voice)
“There is nothing that way” (Said the Woman that was sitting at the back of the plane alone)
“Um…hey!?!?” (Shane said getting out of her zone) “What do you mean there is nothing that way?”
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(29 votes, average: 3.45 out of 5)
i can ony say loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it more more more more more.omg its great and shane and carmen ohhhh yaaaa, post soon please.
I love this story, please MORE MORE MOREE !! [[:
And of course…HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! O_o
Only, cuz you begged! LOL, JK. I like the idea of the gang stuck/stranded wihout their cellphones LMAO. Or er…food and water…and Planet Coffee. This chappy feels a bit rushed but I suppose it’s alright. I mean how long exactly would we have had to wait for them to find each other and start a fire? I love it. Now they just need to set the place on fire and get rescued. Or…would they actually build a boat? Holy balls of fire! I really wanna see that! Seriously! I think it would be funny as hell…unless you kill someone. Circa season one, I’d nominate Jenny. But I don’t know right now, they’re all prime except for Dana. I mean, she’s doing all the work here. Maybe they should build a shed for shelter and face/hunt some wild animals, then build a boat. I can already imagine Shane’s hair and in fact all their hair with that salt water. Hmm…what do you think about the women using coconut oil(it’s really gross to make) on their hair and skin? Okay, okay, I’m getting wild but you know survival skills are important… I like it when you beg. :D LOL