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Amicus Curiae
Story written on April 19, 2013 by justkeepswimming.
”You’re getting flushed,” Alice noted. ”You’re sure that excitement is entirely about the case?”
”No, I’m not sure at all,” Bette said. ”But it is fulfilling. It’s been so long since I was eager about doing research for a case. Normally it’s the trial that gets my heart rate up.”
”Perhaps a certain unnamed lawyer has added to the intrigue?”
”I’m not going to lie. I’m interested. But she’s not,” Bette started. ”It’s almost a relief to know nothing is going to happen. We’re working on a case together. She’s completely focused on that. And now so am I.”
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”I’m calling to see if you’re free for lunch this week,” Bette said.
”Depends how flexible you are,” Tina replied.
”Give me some options,” Bette said.
”I didn’t bring lunch today and I’m famished,” Tina said. ”Please tell me today is possible; I was just about to grab some bad-for-me baked goods from the donut shop downstairs.”
”No, no, no, don’t do that,” Bette said. ”There’s a cute little lunch counter that’s almost exactly half way between our offices. It’s beyond the rush, so we’ll get fast service.”
”Sounds perfect.”
Bette went on to explain the location she was referring to, and they were soon in their respective cars to meet.
”You’re here already?” Tina approached the booth, which was reminiscent of an old school diner – complete with arborite table and rich red vinyl upholstery on the bench seats. ”I thought my enthusiasm for a lunch out would find me waiting on you.”
”Rock star parking,” Bette nodded out the front window. ”I pulled up, pulled in and was seated within minutes.”
”I saw you pull into my spot!” Tina laughed. ”I spied it just as I came around the corner and then…thwarted by the silver Mercedes.”
”That’s me,” Bette shrugged. ”Didn’t take you long to find a spot though.”
”I’m within the block,” Tina reached for the menu that was tucked behind the napkin dispenser. ”Cute place. How’d you come across it?”
”I used to study here when I was an undergrad,” Bette said. ”Still the original owner, and the best milkshakes in town.”
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Just one word: “WOW”!
I wish I could write as well as you. FanFic jealousy.
*swoon* Got to love that sensual TiBette tension. The banter you’ve developed between them is delicious. I would never guess you weren’t involved in law. I guess being involved with an attorney is very educational. Also, I like your version of Melvin so much more the IC’s. PPS
the cats that caught the wayward canaries – I bet !
More, more. PPS
The cherry on top for this Friday seeing an unexpected post from you! If you want to stay anonymous, you have to change the writing style of your comments. :) Anyhow, enjoying your writing under any name. Looking forward to the next update.
Gulp. After Tina’s description and demonstration, I will never look at cherries the same way again…EVER. Your dexterity with words and dialogue is truly marvelous. Almost every line they exchange has a double entendre. Ahhhmazing. I heart every twist and curl of this story so far, jks. Many thanks and please keep up this awesomeness! Have a great, relaxing weekend! Mwah! ;)
I´m going cherry hunting..This Melvin is a treat and your story is just awesome. Thanks for the update.
Amazing as always.Thank you.PPS
i love the dialogue. while a long stem is preferred it’s more challenging to tie a knot with a short stem which i can do. #justsaying
Fabulous as usual
Loving this, thanks
I am *loving* this, whether or not the story’s veered from where it was originally intended. Tina’s lesson in stem-knotting… I think the rating was fine, and a lot of fun to read. Thanks! :)
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Sorry about my last message. My keyboard went crazy on my other laptop.Great post. I love the flirting. These two are both risk takers and they push the flirting to the limit. I wonder how long they can hold out…
un, un, un. I can’t wait to see what else Tina can do with her tongue. PPS
Love it!!
Awwwwww Swimmie, I love you. If you weren’t already married I’d have to find you and beg for a date. That was just WOOOOOWWWWWWWWW! Loved it. Loved your Melvin too, now where is Maxine? Melvin had a great sense of humor as well, …the cats that caught the wayward canaries.” And she didn’t need any help finding trouble as she’d already found it.” I should say. I can hardly wait until those two get their groove on, it’s gonna be way too much to contain. I’ve heard of very talented women being able to tie those cherry stems but have never seen it done. Now I’ve got to go to the store.Loved this chapter, gotta read it again. Have a great weekend.
absolutely amazing, your stories have everything and always make me want to read more. thank you for sharing your talent with us
Sorry meant to say wonderful, stupid auto correct. :) thank you
W default thank you
This is good and fun, love it. Please post more, thanks
The dialogue is wonderful!!