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And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 8
Here we go, Alice said quietly, but audibly to everyone at the table.
Alice, Dana spoke directly to her, and there was not a hint of amusement in her voice. If you have something to say, just say it.
Alice paused and considered why she was being short-tempered.
Sorry Dana, she began. I guess its just because Ive heard the story before, but that wasnt fair of me.
Bette and Shane exchanged glances of surprise that Alice backed down from Danas challenge as Dana went on to answer Tinas question.
My parents got me my first tennis racquet for my fifth birthday, Dana started. I dont actually remember, but my dad has told me the story so often, it seems as though its my memory now. He took me down to the tennis court in our neighbourhood and tossed a ball over the net at me. I returned it, first time and actually landed it just inside the baseline. He had me in lessons within the week.
Casual conversation continued as the sun finally set and the outdoor lights became a necessity.
Im going to clear some of the dishes, Bette said as she stood to turn on the lights. Can I get anyone anything?
Just hurry back, Tina smiled and touched Bettes arm as she reached for her plate.
There was a pause of silence before Shane spoke.
Well get these cleaned up and get out of your hair, Shane said, also standing from her chair.
Yeah, well be out of here in no time, Dana said, as she balanced her own plate and glass in one hand and picked up a salad bowl in the other.
Were not going to go for a swim? asked Alice.
No, Alice were not going for a swim, Shane said sternly and nodded toward Bette and Tina.
Oh, OH, yeah, we do have to get out of here, dont we, Alice was a bit slow on the uptake, but finally realized they should leave the two of them alone.
You dont have to leave already, Bette half-heartedly offered.
Ah, yeah, they do, Tina said, under her breath.
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(37 votes, average: 4.68 out of 5)
Well…that got my heart pumping!!!!
K
Wow, that was totally hot. Very sexy. Just love it. Can’t wait for more.
Look , now I want a gf with a southern accent. That was HOTHOTHOT! Great Chapter swim…
Sexy!
I’d say that Tina is a keeper!!! I need to go take a cold shower now, post soon.
That was truly awesome very sexy and quite a turn on!lol so tho i havnt been commenting i really love this story thanks
Hot damn!!! Great chapter!!!
That was a nice chapter to go to sleep on. I dont think. How the hell am i suppose to go to sleep with thoughts of Bette doing that?? wish i was Tina. lol.Thanks swim.
they are made for each other that for sure…amazing chapter so very fucking HOT!!!..go on please..
I am sorry to hear you have been distracted, I envy the subject of your concourse. What an inspired chapter, you are merciless in your portrayal of lust, how can the reader help but fall in love, with the erotic tender images you paint. An eternal pleasure, thank you.
Is it getting hot in here? Swim, the dialogue between them was so over the top engaging, sexy and full of longing. Excellent chapter! Looking forward to the next one. Thanks so very much for sharing and writing!!
Seahurst couldn’t have said it better… heart pumping! H-O-T HOT!
Have Bette and Tina succumbed to the ‘Moving Van’ syndrome? It seems that Bette Porter is a goner. Well, she lasted all of 3 weeks! Ha! Tina must be this playgirl’s kryptonite!
Thanks for coming back from your ‘distraction’ and posting another chapter of this very entertaining story!
Hey I’m still love your Story keep going it’s really great I love it post soon.
Love this story, it is oh so sweet…..
Wonderfully scripted, Thanks.
is gettin HOT in here~ LOL.. post soon!
Very good! give us more soon.
Hot is the word. Great chapter. post soon.
wow, fantastic
You took us to the edge and back with this one. Lovely story you are telling.
Beautiful and yes Tina is the one and only. Post soon!
So tender and sensual. Look forward to your next post.
got a fan anybody it is hot in here
Yes she is the one. That was Hot!
Very, very nicely done.
Can we have a scene like this in the show? They don’t have to even undress. Your dialogue would have the same effect. Good job.
Yeah, I’m thinkin’ she’s the one, Bette! I love the way these two communicate. Your well chosen dialogue makes these scenes so sexy. I’ll continue to hang on your every word. Thanks!
Wow that was the best love scene I think I have ever read. I am speechless thanks so much.