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And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 8
They all laughed at Tinas remark and continued clearing the plates.
All five women were soon in the kitchen packing away the leftovers and loading the soiled dishes into the dishwasher. The evening together ended at the front door of the house, with Tina standing such that Bettes chin rested on her shoulder, and one hand held her other wrist around Tinas waist.
Thanks for supper guys. Have a good night, Alice waved as she backed down the sidewalk.
Shane turned once to glance back at the couple as she reached the bottom of the stairs.
You two are so ***** cute, she said with a big grin. She then continued on to follow Alice just a few feet ahead of her. Dana had already made her way to her car, which had been parked across the street.
Bette released her grip on her own wrist to swing the door shut and then took Tinas hand and lead her to the living room couch.
Have a seat, Bette pointed to the couch. Ill put some music on and we can relax for a little while. Theres something we should talk about.
You seemed kind of annoyed with me earlier, Tina started. Is something wrong?
Bette placed a disc in the cd player and set the volume low.
You didnt do anything, Bette had a note of contrition in her tone as she spoke. Im sorry I seemed distant earlier. It was a misunderstanding, but it made me think we should talk.
Youre making me a bit nervous, Bette, what is it?
Bette took a seat beside Tina on the couch.
Alice assumed the marks on your back were from Eric and the way she interpreted that was that you were still seeing Eric.
Well we both know thats not the case, Tina smiled as she stroked the side of Bettes face, letting her thumb graze lightly over her bottom lip.
Bettes silence quickly made it clear to Tina why she had seemed upset earlier.
Oh Bette, you didnt think that, did you? Tina, much to Bettes relief, was amused by this revelation.
Ive never been in this situation beforethe way Alice told me implied that you had told her you were still seeing him. I know, it seems stupid now.
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(37 votes, average: 4.68 out of 5)
Well…that got my heart pumping!!!!
K
Wow, that was totally hot. Very sexy. Just love it. Can’t wait for more.
Look , now I want a gf with a southern accent. That was HOTHOTHOT! Great Chapter swim…
Sexy!
I’d say that Tina is a keeper!!! I need to go take a cold shower now, post soon.
That was truly awesome very sexy and quite a turn on!lol so tho i havnt been commenting i really love this story thanks
Hot damn!!! Great chapter!!!
That was a nice chapter to go to sleep on. I dont think. How the hell am i suppose to go to sleep with thoughts of Bette doing that?? wish i was Tina. lol.Thanks swim.
they are made for each other that for sure…amazing chapter so very fucking HOT!!!..go on please..
I am sorry to hear you have been distracted, I envy the subject of your concourse. What an inspired chapter, you are merciless in your portrayal of lust, how can the reader help but fall in love, with the erotic tender images you paint. An eternal pleasure, thank you.
Is it getting hot in here? Swim, the dialogue between them was so over the top engaging, sexy and full of longing. Excellent chapter! Looking forward to the next one. Thanks so very much for sharing and writing!!
Seahurst couldn’t have said it better… heart pumping! H-O-T HOT!
Have Bette and Tina succumbed to the ‘Moving Van’ syndrome? It seems that Bette Porter is a goner. Well, she lasted all of 3 weeks! Ha! Tina must be this playgirl’s kryptonite!
Thanks for coming back from your ‘distraction’ and posting another chapter of this very entertaining story!
Hey I’m still love your Story keep going it’s really great I love it post soon.
Love this story, it is oh so sweet…..
Wonderfully scripted, Thanks.
is gettin HOT in here~ LOL.. post soon!
Very good! give us more soon.
Hot is the word. Great chapter. post soon.
wow, fantastic
You took us to the edge and back with this one. Lovely story you are telling.
Beautiful and yes Tina is the one and only. Post soon!
So tender and sensual. Look forward to your next post.
got a fan anybody it is hot in here
Yes she is the one. That was Hot!
Very, very nicely done.
Can we have a scene like this in the show? They don’t have to even undress. Your dialogue would have the same effect. Good job.
Yeah, I’m thinkin’ she’s the one, Bette! I love the way these two communicate. Your well chosen dialogue makes these scenes so sexy. I’ll continue to hang on your every word. Thanks!
Wow that was the best love scene I think I have ever read. I am speechless thanks so much.