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Angel Fire – 2
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“No,” Bette frowned, “Los Angeles. Your name is Angelica, Angel, and you’re named for the City of Angels.”
Angie looked up at her curiously.
“Really?”
“This is the city where your moms met and fell in love and where we decided to have you. This is the city where you were born. And where we wanted you to grow up.”
Bette had Angie’s full attention now.
“Angel. This is your city.”
“Ok.” And that was the end of the conversation.
After Angie left the room, Tina came walking in as Bette picked up the paper. She sat down by Bette and gave her a big kiss.
“You’re a charmer,” Tina said, stroking Bette’s cheek. Bette looked at her wife with love and pleasure.
“Could I charm you out of your clothes and into bed?” Bette asked hopefully.
“Hold that thought to until Angie goes to Shane’s and Carmen’s this morning. I’ll phone and tip Shane off to make sure Angie doesn’t come home too soon.”
The next day Tina had brought home a pretty little red tee shirt which said: “Los Angeles- City of Angels.”
“This is my city,” Angelica told her friends proudly when she wore the shirt.
When Angie outgrew it, Tina put it in her dresser.
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The morning after graduation
Angie woke up in the early afternoon after her graduation. She had gotten home around 8:00 am after their graduation breakfast and was so exhausted that she just wanted to collapse on the bed, fully clothed. But Tina had gotten her into pajamas, put her into bed and covered her lovingly with a sheet. So that was the way a groggy Angie found herself when she awakened.
The party at their pool had gone great. Her good friends were all there, most with dates, but some single. She had been one of the single ones and was grateful that Tina had not quizzed her about why Jarrod wasn’t there.
She went into the kitchen, heated some rolls and poured orange juice. Like most high school graduates, she thought not so much about what she was leaving as she thought about what she was going to. She was both scared and excited.
Angie knew that Bette had wanted her to go to Yale, but she really wanted to go to a school that was better on film and wanted to stay in LA. She wouldn’t live at home, but wanted her moms close by if she needed them.
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exiting! Cant wait! hope you post soon!
that ws just so damned cute — i loved it
Enjoying this story Pancha. Let it continue.
What a sweet little thumbnail sketch of a child’s growing understanding of sexuality. And nobody got hurt, very good to know. None of this applies to my experience however, my brothers and I know for a fact our parents never had sex.
You know I love anything you write. This is another that I’ll love as well. One can never get enough of the B&T love, Pancha-style! Although, considering the poker-hot love that B&T evinced in ‘What is Love’, I would have predicted that they would have a house full of children, at least two or three. What’s up with the singleton child, Pancha? I’m sure you will explain it all for us. Thank you for your writing. It is as clear as glass, and that’s a GOOD thing!
BTW, I agree with Funnyone, my parents never had sex either. I would have gone deaf, dumb and blind if I’d witnessed what Sweetness had. B&T make wonderful parents. Thank you for the beguiling stories!
It’s always more intersting to see the couple’s intimacy from others’ eyes. =P
This was so excellent. The tone , the conversations, the words just pitch perfect. Your story is nuanced, thew comments insightful and real such as this one from Angie “Angie smiled at her parents. That kind of affection usually meant that they had made love the night before.” So perceptive. You showed us what it was like growing up in that home instead of telling us.
love this… can’t wait for the next chapter
Very well done. Thanks for such sensitivity.
This os incredible. I love how you work the mind of a child and bring it to light for the rest of us. Wonderful chapter.
First time commenting on your stories and just want to say that I’ve enjoyed your stories. Glad that you’re continuing with story line from “What is Love” and “A Lifetime” with the addtition of Angelica. Chidren sometimes do know more than what parents think they know. Can’t wait to read about B&T’s reactions to what Angel has to tell them. Thanks.
Most excellent!
My comment today won’t be very insightful as my head feels like it might explode any second. All I can really say is this chapter was really sweet and I think Angelica got some of her perceptiveness from her talks with Shane. Oh and my parents only had sex 1 time and that was so my mom got pregnant with me. At least that’s what I like to think anyway. ;p
this is so very sweet, i love the back and forth thing, so we get past and present and so nice to see that B&T are still together after 18 years and still love each other…i hope Tina won’t freak out about Angel’s love for girls and Bette will be okay with the other things…great story….(btw, i too wish you were in SF, it would be a great honor to meet you)
this is a really great story….pls continue
Got to love Shane for stepping in and explaining the no pajamas thing. Now that is a loving family relationship. I wonder how Tina will take it that Angie does indeed like girls better than boys. I also wonder what else that Angie needs to say to her parents. My heart is overflowing with joy.
What an absolute treat to have you back. This chapter is once again proof of how much you have been missed. Thanks!
Nice to have you back! Really enjoying this story. Thank you.
Pancha, would you kindly let me know if I need to purchase popcorn and beer for Angelica’s impending conversation with her parents…who am I kidding? I always have beer. Just let me know about the popcorn. Awesome story and chapter!
I just caught up with this. Glad you are back. This seems like its gonna be a very cool story. Thanks for taking the time.
So glad to see you writing andsuch a wonderful story.If I would haveseen my parents like that I would still be therapy. I just told my grand daughter I need to mop the Kitchen floor before I went to bed, She said why its not sticky , Damn I live with her. Loved this chapter thanks
I’m thinking Angelica was/is a handful. What a sweet family.
Loved this chapter. I hope Tina will takes Angelica’s news well.
Thank you for such a loving and well written chapter.
So great to see another story from you Pancha. I always enjoy whatever you write.
Great loving it!
Everything is so… intimate, I feel like I’ve warm honey flowing down all over me when I read. Lovely. :)
Aww, it was so sweet to see Bette and Tina’s love through Angelica’s eyes. Not the mention the coolness of Auntie Shane. Great story, looking forward to more!
love the easy flow of the story..post soon!!!!!!
So glad that Angie has Shane to ask questions and get her information. This question and answer session was handled with much sensitivity, carefully and much love and understanding. Shane is certainly Yodah for Angie. All children need someone they can talk with. Very well done Pancha. Great chapter, btw. Can hardly wait for the next.
Loved the conversation between Angie and Shane, you gave me tips, I know what I’ll say to my kids. I love the way how you’re describing the years in between
so nice! i like the way you used the past and the present! this is very very good. hope read you soon.
pancha…I hope you are writing the next chapter right this minute. I am enjoying it very much.
Excellent story, so sweet and light, just what I need…