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Angel Fire – 2
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She and her moms had had the usual ups and downs of parents and children, but they were always there for her. And no matter how angry Bette and Tina got at her, she never, never doubted their love for her. It had been a very secure childhood. As she grew older, she would come to value it much more than she did now. But even at 18 she knew how lucky she had been.
She knew Tina was pleased that she was going to her alma mater, but didn’t talk about it around Bette. Mama Bette had invoked the name of Meryl Streep when she was lobbying for Yale since Streep had gone to Yale. Angie had seen many of Streep’s films on TV and admired her work, but she didn’t want to be an actress.
When she had told Bette that she was going to USC, she saw Bette’s disappointment.
“Mama, I have to stay in Los Angeles. It’s my city,” smiled Angelica.
Even Bette smiled as she remembered the discussion of many years ago. Well, it was many years to Angie, but was like yesterday to her moms. “Angel, this is your city,” Bette had told her little child. And the eighteen-year-old Angie had decided that she was going to stay in “her city.”
After this talk with her college-bound daughter, she had walked into the bedroom to see Tina at her dresser, pulling out a little red t-shirt which said, “Los Angeles – City of Angeles.” The still-beautiful brunette took her wife into her arms and held her and the little tee shirt.
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Angie wasn’t quite sure what she wanted to do in film, but she knew she didn’t want to be an artist. When she was growing up, she was often asked if she wanted to be an artist…like her mom. She knew Bette would have liked that, but Angie wanted to be her own person. It was a little form of rebellion because Angie knew she was a pretty talented artist.
Angie was her moms’ daughter. She was Tina’s biological child, but her coloring was so much like Bette’s that some people seemed to think she looked more like her. She knew she had picked up many of Bette’s mannerisms. But just when she thought she had very few characteristics of Tina, Bette would look at her tenderly and say. “You look just like your mom when you do that.”
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exiting! Cant wait! hope you post soon!
that ws just so damned cute — i loved it
Enjoying this story Pancha. Let it continue.
What a sweet little thumbnail sketch of a child’s growing understanding of sexuality. And nobody got hurt, very good to know. None of this applies to my experience however, my brothers and I know for a fact our parents never had sex.
You know I love anything you write. This is another that I’ll love as well. One can never get enough of the B&T love, Pancha-style! Although, considering the poker-hot love that B&T evinced in ‘What is Love’, I would have predicted that they would have a house full of children, at least two or three. What’s up with the singleton child, Pancha? I’m sure you will explain it all for us. Thank you for your writing. It is as clear as glass, and that’s a GOOD thing!
BTW, I agree with Funnyone, my parents never had sex either. I would have gone deaf, dumb and blind if I’d witnessed what Sweetness had. B&T make wonderful parents. Thank you for the beguiling stories!
It’s always more intersting to see the couple’s intimacy from others’ eyes. =P
This was so excellent. The tone , the conversations, the words just pitch perfect. Your story is nuanced, thew comments insightful and real such as this one from Angie “Angie smiled at her parents. That kind of affection usually meant that they had made love the night before.” So perceptive. You showed us what it was like growing up in that home instead of telling us.
love this… can’t wait for the next chapter
Very well done. Thanks for such sensitivity.
This os incredible. I love how you work the mind of a child and bring it to light for the rest of us. Wonderful chapter.
First time commenting on your stories and just want to say that I’ve enjoyed your stories. Glad that you’re continuing with story line from “What is Love” and “A Lifetime” with the addtition of Angelica. Chidren sometimes do know more than what parents think they know. Can’t wait to read about B&T’s reactions to what Angel has to tell them. Thanks.
Most excellent!
My comment today won’t be very insightful as my head feels like it might explode any second. All I can really say is this chapter was really sweet and I think Angelica got some of her perceptiveness from her talks with Shane. Oh and my parents only had sex 1 time and that was so my mom got pregnant with me. At least that’s what I like to think anyway. ;p
this is so very sweet, i love the back and forth thing, so we get past and present and so nice to see that B&T are still together after 18 years and still love each other…i hope Tina won’t freak out about Angel’s love for girls and Bette will be okay with the other things…great story….(btw, i too wish you were in SF, it would be a great honor to meet you)
this is a really great story….pls continue
Got to love Shane for stepping in and explaining the no pajamas thing. Now that is a loving family relationship. I wonder how Tina will take it that Angie does indeed like girls better than boys. I also wonder what else that Angie needs to say to her parents. My heart is overflowing with joy.
What an absolute treat to have you back. This chapter is once again proof of how much you have been missed. Thanks!
Nice to have you back! Really enjoying this story. Thank you.
Pancha, would you kindly let me know if I need to purchase popcorn and beer for Angelica’s impending conversation with her parents…who am I kidding? I always have beer. Just let me know about the popcorn. Awesome story and chapter!
I just caught up with this. Glad you are back. This seems like its gonna be a very cool story. Thanks for taking the time.
So glad to see you writing andsuch a wonderful story.If I would haveseen my parents like that I would still be therapy. I just told my grand daughter I need to mop the Kitchen floor before I went to bed, She said why its not sticky , Damn I live with her. Loved this chapter thanks
I’m thinking Angelica was/is a handful. What a sweet family.
Loved this chapter. I hope Tina will takes Angelica’s news well.
Thank you for such a loving and well written chapter.
So great to see another story from you Pancha. I always enjoy whatever you write.
Great loving it!
Everything is so… intimate, I feel like I’ve warm honey flowing down all over me when I read. Lovely. :)
Aww, it was so sweet to see Bette and Tina’s love through Angelica’s eyes. Not the mention the coolness of Auntie Shane. Great story, looking forward to more!
love the easy flow of the story..post soon!!!!!!
So glad that Angie has Shane to ask questions and get her information. This question and answer session was handled with much sensitivity, carefully and much love and understanding. Shane is certainly Yodah for Angie. All children need someone they can talk with. Very well done Pancha. Great chapter, btw. Can hardly wait for the next.
Loved the conversation between Angie and Shane, you gave me tips, I know what I’ll say to my kids. I love the way how you’re describing the years in between
so nice! i like the way you used the past and the present! this is very very good. hope read you soon.
pancha…I hope you are writing the next chapter right this minute. I am enjoying it very much.
Excellent story, so sweet and light, just what I need…